The Irreparable Loss

Such a deep thought within....-Bernard F. Asuncion

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Thinking Off •••

"...bear the pluralism―"
When I read a line like this I go all over the place (pluralistically) to withstand: people, crowds, variety's offering, weight of being, bombardment of stimuli, world view reconcilled, expose the plethoric, the substance of writing that trires to unveil everything, surviving any onrush of emotion, or onslaught of the seeable or touchable. Rich image for getting lost in. -allets

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Dragonflies

Satish,
You, quietly, are one of the most abstract and talented poets on this site. Your poetry is never less than beguiling and mesmerizing. Take care.-Ben Pickard

These words are more than dragonflies, Satish. Dragonflies are small and a little weak, but your words are strong and they always stand up for themselves. Love this mystically vague write from you.-mossgirl19

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Scourging

This is quite scourging.-mossgirl19

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Gliding

A fine poem on the soulless lives we lead, indulging in base acts and then running for cover in the 'sangam'. -GSP Rao

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Perhaps

I like the visuals that each stanza portrays. The first stanza is very clear and an excellent creative start.

The second stanza paints a vivid moon lit night

I think the third is describing desire which should be sharp but isnt sharp enough to cut a jelly fishes eye

A sun stroke was speechless without a sun the gift of a night made me think that you were saying that night was a gift rather than the alternative which would be painful like sunburn or take away the sun from the sun burn and the sunburn is defunct and so you are left with the gift of cool night?

I loved "The sweet tooth of a lie scoops a truth" its a great metaphor but "king of bitters" made me struggle a little. I wondered if the addiction to lying left a bitter taste so by being a consistent liar by default would be the king of bitters taste?

I could be completely off track but I thought I would give it s whirl. It's certainly thought provoking and very deep. Best wishes-Milly Hayward

Fury

omg ! its so beautiful. I love it.-Egyptianqt79

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‘crossing The Bar' Once Again...

This poem is spiritual..... and this poem is touched my heart...I feeling well reading this poem. -Rahul Shil

Brilliant write! Good ink!-Sofia Kioroglou

Thought provoking. Kabir says,

During the first 'crossing of the bar'
I wept and the whole world rejoiced,
On 'cross the bar' again, I will rejoice
Others will weep in anguished noise. -C. P. Sharma

It is time to leave the waiting room, but i have come and will come again with all my sorrows, fears and happiness, someone will hold my hand, perhaps the same one.-Rayhan Rhyne

If you are blessed with those eyes (pl. see my poem under this caption) you will enjoy this crossing the bar once again! -Subbaraman N V

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For A Desirable World

Strong and powerful message well conveyed. -Jasneet Kaur

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There Was No Subject

In dead of night, it
rains inside the eyes, on paper
and in poems.
-I loved it..An amazing poem..beautifully penned..regards.-Dr Dillip K Swain

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Forces Unseen

I liked it. Very well done, deep and thought-provoking. Yet I feel as if it isn't finished, so if you ever create another part, let me know! :) -MaiaSki 

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Under The Cloud

Thanks for the stirring share. Keep writing and responding to other posts.-Jasneet Kaur

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Dark Was Good

The life's many scripts
will remain unread
buried in the folds of sands.... yes, it is. Beautiful poem incely inscribed. Thanks for sharing.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Waiting In Wings

Very well written...draws you in and flows majestically...-Everyday_writer

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A True Deception

This really is amazing. I'm glad to see it nominated. Well done--Brenda

I can only mirror what Mr darcy said.. fantastic satish-Em

Exquisite and mysteriously beautiful. I am left somewhere between, darkness and light; like a vagabond walking the nights streets, looking in at coffee bars that are just out of reach.-Mr. Darcy

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