Sunday, April 29, 2018
Friday, April 27, 2018
Crisis Moment
My...this is as Mr Darcy said filled with mystery but I can also
see how people are destroying nature but its worded with much
vividness! I like it and would like a deeper explanation into this for
some of the lines are so interestingly penned!-Meena Krish
Super imagery. I admit to not understanding it, but the dark sinister images were inspiring. I especially like the eel in the gut. I could almost feel it's search for the light as it poked eyes out of their sockets.
A journey across the equator?
Wonderful and mysterious. - Mr. Darcy
see how people are destroying nature but its worded with much
vividness! I like it and would like a deeper explanation into this for
some of the lines are so interestingly penned!-Meena Krish
Super imagery. I admit to not understanding it, but the dark sinister images were inspiring. I especially like the eel in the gut. I could almost feel it's search for the light as it poked eyes out of their sockets.
A journey across the equator?
Wonderful and mysterious. - Mr. Darcy
Thursday, April 26, 2018
Sharp Murals
Satish,
A dark tale from you, so much imagery captured in metaphors which you really delve yourself deep into.
I enjoyed reading this
well done.-Michael
A dark tale from you, so much imagery captured in metaphors which you really delve yourself deep into.
I enjoyed reading this
well done.-Michael
Wednesday, April 25, 2018
Lofty Peaks
Quite an intriguing poem. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Tuesday, April 24, 2018
Sunday, April 22, 2018
Conversation
A thought provoking read. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Holy Bath
The contrasting imagery is nicely conveyed here. I think I may opt for the main course, leaving myself time for a long beach walk?-Mr. Darcy
Saturday, April 21, 2018
Wordless Pains
It casts a spell.
A rock licks the moon.
Wow Satish Sir, what a brilliant modern poem.
Thanks for sharing it.-Subhas Chandra Chakra
A rock licks the moon.
Wow Satish Sir, what a brilliant modern poem.
Thanks for sharing it.-Subhas Chandra Chakra
Friday, April 20, 2018
Paralysed
Mysterious and enjoyable reading. I like the use of symbolism beyond my usual experience.-slithr
The Democracy
A satirical representation. The bo tree has become a mere symbol of peace and tranquility when in reality there is only chaos that is becoming endemic with passing time. Thank you Satish sir for the timely poem. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Yes, most timely. -R R Gandikota , Kakinada
Yes, most timely. -R R Gandikota , Kakinada
Wednesday, April 18, 2018
Questioning Again
I sense some dark inscription from this, and I must say that I enjoy it. Well done.-Nicholas Browning
Tuesday, April 17, 2018
Chemistry
Nice composition. TFS.-Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi
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