Wednesday, October 31, 2018

Hope In Undoing

A maverick way to present a life journey. Very engaging. Thanks for sharing Satish. Enjoyed.10+++-Petals Azureblue

Well conceived and elegantly brought forth with insight. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Satish.-Chinedu Dike

Endless Search

A superb piece with great visuals. loved it. -Milly Hayward

Living Dangerously

I will get the tan
in moonlight only. My scars
will remain invisible in silver. - as always insightful and with an in-depth meaning. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Tuesday, October 30, 2018

Thousand Moons

Satish has been dazzling me for quite some time now but with this poem I melted. Its crisp, beautiful and oozing with pure beauty!-Maple Tree

Sunday, October 28, 2018

Deciduously

Enjoyed reading the profound lines. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Saturday, October 27, 2018

With No Anger

The emotions flow beautifully through of these verses.
Excellent poem.-Hans Vr

Satish, such a well penned poem.......10++++++++++.-Bernard F. Asuncion

For Pythia

I like your imagery although I think my lack of knowledge of your homeland limits my understanding. I do appreciate your poems.-fuche_bu

Not Holding

I am still following a riderless horse!!-BOB GALLO

I absolutely loved this... If only life was so simple they we turned over a page and there was a blank page when we needed it to forget about the hurt etc within our lives and we could carry on until the next time we happened to need another blank page but instead we carry on regardless.. take care.-Em (marmite)

Friday, October 26, 2018

Unjointed Time

This piece gave me a lot of thought. My feeling is at one level its a ghost story and the character is talking to his fathers shade as a means to work through his grief and yet at another level that it is instead a metaphoric view on someone who feels thier life is crumbling around them. Who fears the future but accepts that the answer to his future lays in the ghosts of his past. I would love to know your thinking behind this piece.-Milly Hayward

Being Watched

As always an insightful read highlighting the hapless and helpless of life's game. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Wednesday, October 24, 2018

In Full Moon

nice poem- like to quote
Be some tender―
to me, I am carrying
a burning glass.-Mahtab Bangalee

The Bleak Landscape

The dead stanzas being the words unsaid. When an action could be just and corrected if only someone cried out for help and extended a hand to help pull you in from the tide's pull. Very gripping! i loved the energy!-splattercore 

Pure As A Flame

Enjoyed your work of fire. Love this as always my friend!-Troylato

Homeward

"Will you catch a
butterfly for my reluctant wine
I had invited the black roses."
Wow. This is the most beautiful thing I have seen in a few weeks.

I am also stunned by the sheer neckedness of moon reflected on this piece!!-BOB GALLO

Tuesday, October 23, 2018

Ideation

Your poem helped me not get rid of poetry as I sometimes do in a panic... can't really explain this comment of mine very well except to say thank you for sharing.-Debera