Giti Tyagi, Karnal
Wednesday, September 30, 2020
In Hurling Light
Words sans meaningful expressions are worthless. Lovely presentation of ideas in the verse Satish ji!-
Giti Tyagi, Karnal
Giti Tyagi, Karnal
Monday, September 28, 2020
Quizzing
It' perhaps the first time I have read a longer poem of yours Satish ji! Its simply superb!!!
I never miss reading your poems which are full of beauty and remarkable sensitivity!
But I always wonder why you never respond to my responses.
I loved your poem as much as I enjoy reading your other poems.
And I completely agree with you that no one can write as good as you can...
you cannot
write like me... like me.-Giti Tyagi, Karnal
I never miss reading your poems which are full of beauty and remarkable sensitivity!
But I always wonder why you never respond to my responses.
I loved your poem as much as I enjoy reading your other poems.
And I completely agree with you that no one can write as good as you can...
you cannot
write like me... like me.-Giti Tyagi, Karnal
Friday, September 25, 2020
Repeating History
End is the same for all in Death in this world to transport to other world in spirit! So, history of all has to repeat itself as designed by Nature! Knowing this let us be ready for the peaceful journey of spirit sure! -T A Ramesh
The Great Divide
Enveiled behind the masks lie the unhappy sad faces at times. We may enmask our sadness with smiles overtly but the eyes cannot hide the emotions.
Simply loved the lines...
Cut the masks
and you will find a river of sorrow
in the unblinking eyes
Thanks for sharing Satish ji! -Giti Tyagi, karnal
Simply loved the lines...
Cut the masks
and you will find a river of sorrow
in the unblinking eyes
Thanks for sharing Satish ji! -Giti Tyagi, karnal
Wednesday, September 23, 2020
Death Of An Angel
Wow! Such a refined write, yet effortlessly simple to connect with, a beautifully excavated dedication.-L. B. Mek
in prosaic
A well written and confronting poem.. an original poet-Dale Costello, Australia
Monday, September 21, 2020
Weird Enigma
Beautiful lines..
I will take hold of the night.
There was no referral
of lying truth.
Loved the poem Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal
I will take hold of the night.
There was no referral
of lying truth.
Loved the poem Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal
Sunday, September 20, 2020
Fading Sheen
The first two lines I just love. There's something about the way you worded them, almost tenderly.-Skyfire
Saturday, September 19, 2020
Tenacity
Stunning! Absolutely superb poem Satish ji!
Loved these lines..
The sand fills your
pockets. You start
licking the salt
jettisoned by violent waves.
Thanks for sharing!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal
Loved these lines..
The sand fills your
pockets. You start
licking the salt
jettisoned by violent waves.
Thanks for sharing!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal
Friday, September 18, 2020
Thoughts In Wind
"You wanted to givea name to
"You wanted to give
a name to my
unborn poem."
That is ageless, quotable material, in and of itself. But yet, to limit the value of the poem to that triplet of lines would be an remarkable undertaking of injustice towards the pen. :) This is, quite simply, special in a most lasting sense. The muse must be, as well.-lyrycsyntyme
"You wanted to give
a name to my
unborn poem."
That is ageless, quotable material, in and of itself. But yet, to limit the value of the poem to that triplet of lines would be an remarkable undertaking of injustice towards the pen. :) This is, quite simply, special in a most lasting sense. The muse must be, as well.-lyrycsyntyme
Thursday, September 17, 2020
Sonorous Tones
What lovely lines...
The fake blooms. I will
never see the death
of a rose petal
Simply beautiful Satish ji! -Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India
The fake blooms. I will
never see the death
of a rose petal
Simply beautiful Satish ji! -Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India
Sunday, September 13, 2020
When Horizon Meets The Moon
I like the variety of phrases
I like the variety of phrases by which the poem proceeds to its conclusion; they are fresh, zesty, and---even one or two of them---highly unusual (in my opinion, at least). I applaud the beauty of this poem.-Starward
I like the variety of phrases by which the poem proceeds to its conclusion; they are fresh, zesty, and---even one or two of them---highly unusual (in my opinion, at least). I applaud the beauty of this poem.-Starward
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