Most Bleeding Heart

A very subtle poem of pang and anger.
Rather beasts always remain beasts. Only humans turn to be inhumans. A powerful poem, Satishji.-Santosh K Mishra

suddenly love dies in my arms.
I loved this line the most and it sums up everything, Sir! A nice poem with depth in meaning.-Padma

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Nightfall

(such a brilliant poem: Guru;
forgive me, I just had to try and respond
however inadequate my words may read
aside - your poetic genius)..
those symbolic Bilberries of yearned-for, modest perfection
do indeed stain our legacies
churn our guts, till our eyes: glare Green
and somewhere in that mirage of our shadow's shed
we awaken, a small sprouting of hope
accustomed to aiming low, for being planted
in a world with diminishing light: to begin with...-L. B. Mek

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Turn Off The Lights

An extraordinarily rich write from an extraordinary poet!-Laura

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For No Obvious Reason

This is excellent and made me grasp for breath many times. The punctuation in this works really well.-Em

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Barren Plains

Very truly said and good imagery is felt, Satish jee.-Padma

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Do Not Throw The Moon

I find faces of leopards digging the tombs with gloved hands. stands for.-Reginold Jacob

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Poetry Vs Poverty

traversing straight, is a fine - trait
its just, they bequeathed us a path
so narrow: we lack, scope - enough
to envision a future
beyond, that abundantly incessant strife
foreshadowing, our every step...-L. B. Mek

A very philosophical write. Well written with a strong message.-Andy Hunter

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I Admire You

A poem in which concern and love expressed so beautifully, Sir.-Padma

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The Compass Failed

I want to meet myself..-I Ali

directionless we may find ourselves
momentarily
now and then, but pathless
is a state we can never be
whilst we yet: draw breath...
for even in our mind's
this life we traverse, is endless
in its variety and scope;
its only ourselves, that limit
our possibilities horizon's
by squinting needlessly
instead of trusting, in our ability...
The Compass Failed.-L. B. Mek

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Do Not Throw The Moon

Good writing, but I don't get the nomenclature.-I Ali

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Is This Futurism?

yep, so few know
that 'the wasteland' was partly inspired
by the miserable divorce, T. S. Elliot, experienced..
'Ignited': Indeed...!
(but its Peaches, he dared: not mangoes) lol-L. B. Mek

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No Retaliation

Thank you for sharing your poem, Satish. This is wonderful and powerfully written.-Carlos L Estrada

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Fingerprints

Like most of what you write, I love this verse. And even as sad as the outcome in this poem seems, you're a survivor.-Willys Watson

I agree with Carlos. A poem of mystery and hidden meanings that are clouded behind some obtuse images. One for the lovers of abstract poetry. -Marina

this poem really has a mystery to it. It can have so many meanings attributed to it. I enjoy reading works like this. They leave it up to the reader to decipher. Wonderful work, thank you for sharing your art.-Carlos L Estrada

A sad tale of impending death whether it be life or soul.-Poetic Beauty

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Someone Falls In The Feet

LOL this is wonderful, darn Vespa, in English it means wasp. Love the ending and yes ouch.-Teddy

because Love, stings
and yet, even one-eyed
we simply: can't resist...
another brilliant poem, Guru
as ever, I read and learn
thank you!-L. B. Mek

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The Earthen Lamp

Inspired and from the soul where all good poetry is born.-KeithMansfield

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