Earthborn

THE TALE
Verma. a very poerful recount of / the return of bernazi/. My God! whats happening to us:/ it is not violence! it is nature! I am tempted to beleive you.

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Eatrthborn

DANCING OF GNOMES
a startling piece. versification and language very ENTICING. The theme is very well handled and the lines move with grace in spite of the morbidity that permeates the atmosphere. I love the lines:/ the gnomes (goblins) are dancing.

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Xraided

Death is Not a Ceremony

I like the freewrite form, and I love "air will kiss the lips of fire" I really quite like how you can tell a story and be poetic at the same time. To a lot of people poetry is just ryhtming words together, when it really isn't. I love the way you put words together and I must admit I am impressed with your choice in vocabulary. I give you kudos. Awesome write.

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