JOE POEWHIT

GOD OF BLESSINGS

Black widow spiders and morality - good luck-they just want that bug in the web.

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Sara Lokken, Sara Kendrick

RAGING MOON

Sara Lokken :This is very existential. As inward as the child is, the child inside you is not dead. Listen to Enigma's song, "Return to Innocence"- you can only accept love as that child. -Sara

Sara Kendrick :Interesting question in first stanza third line. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Sara Lokken

THE TWILIGHT
This is beauty itself. I loved the beginning... and the metaphor of the "beats of heart will not wear a sword now" and "clayey mood" is very original- I understood that. You have a real gift- I love sifting through the soul behind it. -Sara

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Sara Lokken, Carol Brown

A FAMILY DUST

Carol Brown : I thank you for writing and sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Satish. I offer you warm greeting for the New Year with best wishes to you on your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol


Sara Lokken : I am getting so much from this. I am crying. You were a silver rose- the color of your beloved moon. Do I see your feminine side?:) Only the best wishes, Sara

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POETRY

Sara Lokken :Your work is so fascinating and deep. I loved this. LOVED. -Sara

P p :poetry satish good ok'

Eduardo Orozco :Beautiful poem very well pened

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Sara Kendrick, Sara Lokken

O LOVE

Sara Lokken :This is how I feel sometimes- after my beloved shattered my heart. Nevertheless, this is so breath-takingly beautiful. Your gift is astonishing. Best wishes, Sara

Robert A. Dufresne :much metaphor and simile in this wounded write. Well done Satish. --_Robert

Anthony Nutter :This poem speaks to me saying your feelings and posssibly others have been poisened toward this individual. "Gifts unattended" "Bees will not come to your flowers" Very creative write.

Sara Kendrick : Interesting thoughts put to pen. Second stanza like the line "Your gifts are lying around me unattended". Don't exactly know what you mean by the lines but I could go several ways with it. Sara

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Sara Lokken

RESURRECTED
This is horrifying "a genius out of rags"....and still, you're still human, Satish. I don't know. -Sara
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Robin Maughan, Anthony Nutter

OF A VIRGIN GOD

Robin Maughan :Congrats pn your feature! Enjoyed.. Trees were waiting for the curatins to rise.. Loved it! Hugs Always, Robin

Sara Lokken : Congratutlations on your mysterious poetry being featured. Best wishes, Sara

Anthony Nutter : Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Best wishes and much success in your writing endeavors. A. W. Nutter

Carol Brown :Congratulations on your remarkable poetry being featured this week Satish. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol

James Fraser :Congratulations on your featured poem this week, Merry Christmas to you >> James

Patricia Adams :Congrats on your poem being featured this week!! Very well deserved. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours. May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty


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Robin Maughan

OF A VIRGIN GOD
Congrats pn your feature! Enjoyed.. Trees were waiting for the curatins to rise.. Loved it! Hugs Always, Robin
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Yacov Mitchenko

* THE DEAD TIGER
Striking imagery here.

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Alakesh Kalita

THE TWILIGHT
i so much long for sitting with the poet by side, when he'll be showing to me the solitary death he discovers in living past, and i'll ask him to look for mine. but in the next very line, i dont agree to him, people have been talking so successfully, what depths they've found i n each others hearts! its this eternal silence which has made us forebringers of so many words like jewel pieces of nails and needles. there are bridges. its in this silence one can discover how potent a creator a poet is. this how the twilight moves towards a sun.

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Sara Kendrick, Sara Lokken

NAÏVE INNOCENCE
Sara Lokken: This is very dark...sometimes realism is dark, not beautiful.....but you have created beauty in your darkness. Best wishes, Sara

Sara Kendrick : Interesting write this early morn. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

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Sara Lokken

HUMAN LAB

Sara Lokken By the way, I favorited this.

Sara Lokken This is amazing...! What a poetic mind. I love the two middle stanzas....such depth. Best wishes, Sara

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Sara Lokken

ANNIVERSARY
You are so alone. This is...would make you misunderstood. I got it. Best wishes, Sara
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Sara Lokken

OF A VIRGIN GOD
Congratutlations on your mysterious poetry being featured. Best wishes, Sara
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Alakesh Kalita

A FAMILY DUST
i had never read satish verma before, but today i feel i've discovered something real good, i'd read more. though he is little difficult, he never fails to connect. someone has said, good poetry communicates before it is understood.

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Alakesh Kalita

A FRIGHTENING DREAM
some poets do not intend their poetry for what you would call pure reading. but satish verma seems to write intending pure reading, discovery of a clear plot. despite the fact he remains a bit shrouded. he strongly draws the reader in by amazing capability, but one might end up finding many subways to come out with. he is a little less concious about the effect he brings one into.

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Marieta Maglas

O LOVE
wonderful visual metaphor
The moon has walked away
nice poem

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Dowell Oba-Nigeria

HELMETED VERSION
Wow! An aura of change after years of conflicts and wars, to be sure planted on "a holy soil". Great poem, Satish, packed in indepth meaning all towards the attainment of peace!

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Pooja Elangbam-India

DIFFERENT SHADES
*claps*..........its simply marvellous. so much said in such few words

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Beau Regard, Anthony Nutter

STONING DARK
Beau Regard
"beds of flesh and bones", "thighs of mermaids", like something out of a Dali painting, surreal and yet so compelling. Great stuff.

Anthony Nutter
Such an imaginative piece. Enjoyed the read and flow of this well written piece.

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Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi

Naked freedom
A stimulating composition. Empathy and pathos beautifully crafted into a splendid poetry. Warm Regards,

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Pooja Elangbam, India

DIFFERENT SHADES
*claps*..........its simply marvellous. so much said in such few words

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Marcia Schechinger-USA

ABDICATION
Satish you talent explodes with images as you speak for us all - how much we do wish for peace. "It was domestic pain..." excellent beginning to draw in the reader. :)

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Marcia Schechinger-USA

AGEISM
Satish what a wonderful verse - truly one of your best - as it describes earth or life "..innocence of an unopened bud".

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Edwin Hurdle

WITH LICORICE
Excelllent poem,a well written piece.take carre

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Madeleine McLaughlin

WE WILL SCREAM TOGETHER
this has a very profound quality to it which makes one read the poem over and over to see if one has missed anything. good work.

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Marcia Schechinger, USA

AGEISM
Satish what a wonderful verse - truly one of your best - as it describes earth or life "..innocence of an unopened bud".

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pooja elangbam-INDIA, Marcia Schechinger-USA

ABANDONED

pooja elangbam short but meaningful India

Marcia Schechinger Satish a wonderful verse of the realities of war - may we find peace soon. Excellent write :)

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Catrina Heart

HUMAN LAB
such a clever concrete verses...

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C. P. Sharma

‘CROSSING THE BAR' ONCE AGAIN...
During the first 'crossing of the bar'
I wept and the whole world rejoiced,
On 'cross the bar' again, I will rejoice
Others will weep in anguished noise.
CP


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Carol Brown

* YES
As I am sitting here reading your wonderful poetry today, I would like to thank you Satish. First I would like to thank you for writing and sharing your poetry (whether one poem or a thousand) here at PoetrySoup.Second I would like to thank you for all your kind comments to me and to all the other excellent poets also. I wish you all the best in life and in your writing endeavors in 2010. Love and blessings to all, Carol

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Krista Kurth

DIFFERENT SHADES
Satish, very powerful poem. Thank you for writing and sharing. Well done. All the best, Krista

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Carolyn Devonshire

A CROWD PYRAMID
A very compelling, intriguing write, Satish. There is some thought-provoking imagery in this write. Well done! Love, Carolyn

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Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi

Moods
A brilliant composition describing beautifully the intangiable-moods. Warm regards,
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pooja elangbam-India

IMMORTALITY
i like the expression
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Edwin Hurdle

GOLDEN LEAP
Excellent poem,a well written piece.take care

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Peter Schlosser

BOLD STEP
Your poetry always gives pause to ponder. Nicely done.

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Edwin Hurdle

IN SLEEP
A well written piece.take care.Excellent work


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K.K.Srivastava, New Delhi

Trembling
Satish, this is a real masterpiece. Excellent imagery and presentation. But very difficult to comprehend. Mathew Arnold once remarked, "For having superior poets, we should have superior audience." Nay, I don't claim to be a superior audience. I only want to suggest you also send your poems to Sahitya Akedemi's Indian Literature to make these available to larger readership. Best Wishes,

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K. Subapriya, Chennai, Kumarendra Mallick, Hyderabad

Beast and lovers

Very matured. Need much knowledge to understand.
K. Subapriya, Chennai

To be frank with you, Satish, I do not understand each line of the poem, but I admire its each line. You have written with a great style. The concluding stanza is too good. Best regards,
Kumarendra Mallick, Hyderabad

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Catrina 'CT' Heart

WE WILL SCREAM TOGETHER
The grief of the scarred face,
in a serious midnight syndrome of
invisible slit throat in a long journey manifested
above the waves. Tree was calling again
for immoralism of flowers, quashing
his life.
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splendid concrete poetry...like half forgotten dreams and grief...lovely! ! !

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Catrina Heart

WE WILL SCREAM TOGETHER
The grief of the scarred face,
in a serious midnight syndrome of
invisible slit throat in a long journey manifested
above the waves. Tree was calling again
for immoralism of flowers, quashing
his life.
------
splendid concrete poetry...like half forgotten dreams and grief...lovely! ! !


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Goldy Locks

A HOME IN MY HOME
i just love your sentence juxtapositioning. I think it's surreal.

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Obed Dela Cruz

CHRONICITY
very well narrated.....

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Catrina 'CT' Heart

A LONE WARRIOR
That was that, of hollowness of globes
and golden peacocks. A seed of mildew
implants a kiss on the nakedness of greed.
How far the want will go in dark
------
brilliance in crafting..brilliance in formulating...awesome! ! !

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Seema Chowdhury

A LONE WARRIOR
very nice poem, I wish we can all learn from this.

see my new poems too.

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Catrina Heart

A LONE WARRIOR
That was that, of hollowness of globes
and golden peacocks. A seed of mildew
implants a kiss on the nakedness of greed.
How far the want will go in dark
------
brilliance in crafting..brilliance in formulating...awesome! ! !

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Jennifer Ottinger

A LONE WARRIOR
This is beautiful description you have there, and it's very interesting. I like it a lot. ^_^

Please read some of my poems.


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Kumarendra Mallick, Hyderabad, K. K. Srivastava, New Delhi

Fangs

Satish, I like your composition and some of the images are simply beautiful. But honestly I fail to connect he, you and I. Will you please give some hints? Best regards,
Kumarendra Mallick, Hyderabad


Satish, your poems are serious stuff. I enjoy these. I also believe in writing serious stuff. It seems, nowadays, there are very few takers for serious poetry. we should not mind it. Regards
K. K. Srivastava, New Delhi

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Christine Alwin

DEATH OF ABSENCE
Had to read this twice...heartfelt and so powerfully demonstrated
Christine
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AngelGodNeverLoved

Leaves

I am speechless this poem was amazing!

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