LANDSCAPE
Satish, breathtaking in imagery and expresssion!
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Sunday, January 31, 2010
Sara Michael Lokken
RETOLD JOURNEY
This is very dark, very traumatic- may your inner wars one day find solace. I feel such pain in your works...
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This is very dark, very traumatic- may your inner wars one day find solace. I feel such pain in your works...
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Dr Pooja G Bhuyar, Bijapur
The healer
Sir,Very matured and deep thoughts. Each idea being expressed in very few words but doing full justice to the underlying meaning. Enjoyed your rich piece of poetry. Best wishes.
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Sir,Very matured and deep thoughts. Each idea being expressed in very few words but doing full justice to the underlying meaning. Enjoyed your rich piece of poetry. Best wishes.
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Sara Michael Lokken
A HUM
This seems to be the return of something- after much sorrow and loss...very beautiful.
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This seems to be the return of something- after much sorrow and loss...very beautiful.
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Saturday, January 30, 2010
Marcia Schechinger, USA
LIKE A Da VINCI
Satish a deep meaningful verse with many interpretations - questioning our faith at such turbulent times is the master of our beliefs. :)
http://www.voicesnet.org
Satish a deep meaningful verse with many interpretations - questioning our faith at such turbulent times is the master of our beliefs. :)
http://www.voicesnet.org
Marcia Schechinger, USA
BEYOND
Satish what a magnificent verse, leading the reader to think... "difficult was the truth".. and how do we find the answer. Excellent poem :)
http://www.voicesnet.org
Satish what a magnificent verse, leading the reader to think... "difficult was the truth".. and how do we find the answer. Excellent poem :)
http://www.voicesnet.org
Friday, January 29, 2010
Elizabeth Olesen, Denmark
THE HEALER
This is very arresting poem, something that needs to be read again and again.
http://www.voicesnet.org
This is very arresting poem, something that needs to be read again and again.
http://www.voicesnet.org
Thursday, January 28, 2010
Jared Pickett
WREATHS ON DOOR
Excellent write here Verma.... Wonderfully expressive and well written.... Keep em comin'.....:JP]
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Excellent write here Verma.... Wonderfully expressive and well written.... Keep em comin'.....:JP]
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Wednesday, January 27, 2010
Cortez Mccall
IN THE NAME OF ………
so deep..I feel like I was their.
come check out my work some time.
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so deep..I feel like I was their.
come check out my work some time.
http://www.poemh unter.com
Marcia Schechinger, USA
TREE FALL
Satish a beautiful metaphorical poem of seeing destruction as you come back as a "seed" and the remorse one feels for we want peace. :)
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Satish a beautiful metaphorical poem of seeing destruction as you come back as a "seed" and the remorse one feels for we want peace. :)
http://www.voicesnet.org
Carolyn Devonshire
MAKE - BELIEVE
There may have been no pearl in the oyster, Satish, but this poem is a gem! Read it a couple times now and the meaning is quite intriguing. Thought-provoking poem, Satish! Love, carolyn
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There may have been no pearl in the oyster, Satish, but this poem is a gem! Read it a couple times now and the meaning is quite intriguing. Thought-provoking poem, Satish! Love, carolyn
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MelissaluvzSheila
Happy Valley of Stings
This was a very well written piece that you have written here, I enjoyed reading this. It was good. Thanks for the read and keep up the good work!
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This was a very well written piece that you have written here, I enjoyed reading this. It was good. Thanks for the read and keep up the good work!
http://allpoetry.com
Tuesday, January 26, 2010
Andy Turner
RETREAT
Indeed, an Ashram is a fine place to stay until true peace is one with mind, body and spirit.
Then the superficial life is seen for what it is.
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Indeed, an Ashram is a fine place to stay until true peace is one with mind, body and spirit.
Then the superficial life is seen for what it is.
http://www.authorsden.com
Sunday, January 24, 2010
Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi
Go away
Respected Sir, you always manage to flawlessly capture abstract emotions in your poetry beautifully. Warm regards,
http://www.museindia.com
Respected Sir, you always manage to flawlessly capture abstract emotions in your poetry beautifully. Warm regards,
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Tim Ryerson
LISTENING
Tim Ryerson : I am listening indeed, and still trying to understand...you're way above my head, Satish, but your lines and words are exquisite! - Tim
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Tim Ryerson : I am listening indeed, and still trying to understand...you're way above my head, Satish, but your lines and words are exquisite! - Tim
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Saturday, January 23, 2010
Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi, Shernaz, Pune, U Atreya Sarma, Greenfield, Wisconsin
What ending?
Splendid...Warm Regards,Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi
Dear Satish, In your beautiful, lucid and thought-provoking poem, you’ve shown that we’re but a small speck in this inevitable, inexorable, timeless, and unending cycle of life (and death). Perhaps this stark realisation makes us realistic and free from so many causes of strife. Warm regards.U Atreya Sarma, Greenfield, Wisconsin
Where 'you' and 'me' end,There, is found 'SELF' friend.Where words leave you There Silence finds you Silence that vibrates with the Word
Silence that sheds the need for words. Shernaz, Pune
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Splendid...Warm Regards,Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi
Dear Satish, In your beautiful, lucid and thought-provoking poem, you’ve shown that we’re but a small speck in this inevitable, inexorable, timeless, and unending cycle of life (and death). Perhaps this stark realisation makes us realistic and free from so many causes of strife. Warm regards.U Atreya Sarma, Greenfield, Wisconsin
Where 'you' and 'me' end,There, is found 'SELF' friend.Where words leave you There Silence finds you Silence that vibrates with the Word
Silence that sheds the need for words. Shernaz, Pune
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Friday, January 22, 2010
Nick Bagnall, Sara Kendrick
NO TELLING
Nick Bagnall : Wow - That's deep, very interesting read
Sara Kendrick : Very interesting write in this very expressive and descriptive verse. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Nick Bagnall : Wow - That's deep, very interesting read
Sara Kendrick : Very interesting write in this very expressive and descriptive verse. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Thursday, January 21, 2010
Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
GENOCIDE
Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen : Satish, Today I am taking the time to enjoy myself reading some of my favorite poems. Your poem, “Genocide ” is one of my favorite poems for personal reasons. I wanted to let you know that I enjoyed reading it, again. Thank you for sharing. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen : Satish, Today I am taking the time to enjoy myself reading some of my favorite poems. Your poem, “Genocide ” is one of my favorite poems for personal reasons. I wanted to let you know that I enjoyed reading it, again. Thank you for sharing. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Sara Michael Lokken, Carol Brown
UNBELIEF
Sara Michael Lokken : I am getting you're talking to your father, trying to "talk in his tongue" to understand something. Maybe forgiveness- but you're going in rabbit trails. Does that make sense? I love the metaphor of the deer...so delicate, like your topic.
Carol Brown : Your poetry was a pleasure to read today Satish. I hope you have a wonderful day filled with love and inspiration. May we all be able to read your poetry here at PoetrySoup for years to come. Love, Carol
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Sara Michael Lokken : I am getting you're talking to your father, trying to "talk in his tongue" to understand something. Maybe forgiveness- but you're going in rabbit trails. Does that make sense? I love the metaphor of the deer...so delicate, like your topic.
Carol Brown : Your poetry was a pleasure to read today Satish. I hope you have a wonderful day filled with love and inspiration. May we all be able to read your poetry here at PoetrySoup for years to come. Love, Carol
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Wednesday, January 20, 2010
Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
DROUGHT IN RIVERBED
Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen : Satish, A Drought indeed.... This one makes me think. Thanks for sharing.Sincerely, Dane Ann
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen : Satish, A Drought indeed.... This one makes me think. Thanks for sharing.Sincerely, Dane Ann
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Monday, January 18, 2010
Carol Brown, Sara Michael Lokken
A TREE WAS TALKING
Carol Brown : Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry with us all here at PoetrySoup this beautiful Sunday morning. Hope to see your deep poetry posted here for many years to come Satish. Love, Carol
Sara Michael Lokken : This speaks to me of grief- trying to justify one's self to Nature, while She is talking to you through the trees with her beauty- in the hell of war. Such begging- and loss.... You know it's breathtaking.
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Carol Brown : Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry with us all here at PoetrySoup this beautiful Sunday morning. Hope to see your deep poetry posted here for many years to come Satish. Love, Carol
Sara Michael Lokken : This speaks to me of grief- trying to justify one's self to Nature, while She is talking to you through the trees with her beauty- in the hell of war. Such begging- and loss.... You know it's breathtaking.
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Sunday, January 17, 2010
Alakesh Kalita
COUPLING
'NOT TO BE LOOSE SHUNTED! '.....don't step down from the height just to make things clear sir, you are so lovely when you are mysterious, may be I was wrong. I must admit sometimes you are deadly.but still, you are so difficult!
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'NOT TO BE LOOSE SHUNTED! '.....don't step down from the height just to make things clear sir, you are so lovely when you are mysterious, may be I was wrong. I must admit sometimes you are deadly.but still, you are so difficult!
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Eldy Catindoy, Philippines, Nancy Crossland, USA
…… Distant Shores
Eldy Catindoy I agree with Nancy..:)Good day! Philippines.
Nancy Crossland Beautifully fluid writing, Satish. Very enjoyable! USA
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Eldy Catindoy I agree with Nancy..:)Good day! Philippines.
Nancy Crossland Beautifully fluid writing, Satish. Very enjoyable! USA
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Sara Michael Lokken, Carol Brown
A TREE WAS TALKING
Carol Brown : Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry with us all here at PoetrySoup this beautiful Sunday morning. Hope to see your deep poetry posted here for many years to come Satish. Love, Carol
Sara Michael Lokken : This speaks to me of grief- trying to justify one's self to Nature, while She is talking to you through the trees with her beauty- in the hell of war. Such begging- and loss.... You know it's breathtaking.
http://www.poetrysoup.com
Carol Brown : Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry with us all here at PoetrySoup this beautiful Sunday morning. Hope to see your deep poetry posted here for many years to come Satish. Love, Carol
Sara Michael Lokken : This speaks to me of grief- trying to justify one's self to Nature, while She is talking to you through the trees with her beauty- in the hell of war. Such begging- and loss.... You know it's breathtaking.
http://www.poetrysoup.com
Ch J Satyananda Kumar, Visakhapatnam
Innocence
Which god was yours, which mine?
Let us divide not truth as divine... Vermaji wonderful! Kudos.
http://www.museindia.com
Which god was yours, which mine?
Let us divide not truth as divine... Vermaji wonderful! Kudos.
http://www.museindia.com
Alakesh Kalita
COUPLING
'NOT TO BE LOOSE SHUNTED! '.....don't step down from the height just to make things clear sir, you are so lovely when you are mysterious, may be I was wrong. I must admit sometimes you are deadly.but still, you are so difficult!
http://www.poemhunter.com
'NOT TO BE LOOSE SHUNTED! '.....don't step down from the height just to make things clear sir, you are so lovely when you are mysterious, may be I was wrong. I must admit sometimes you are deadly.but still, you are so difficult!
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Saturday, January 16, 2010
COUPLING
'NOT TO BE LOOSE SHUNTED! '.....don't step down from the height just to make things clear sir, you are so lovely when you are mysterious, may be I was wrong. I must admit sometimes you are deadly.but still, you are so difficult!-Alakesh Kalita
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Friday, January 15, 2010
Lina Mistry Tandel, Varginia, USA, Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi
Falling crumbs
Lina Mistry : Dear Satishji, You take your readers on a whole new level with your poems. I like this piece almost sad to say, crumbs are mere bird food yet to a hungry person it is delectable morsel...Best wishes,Lina Mistry Tandel, Varginia, USA
Jasneet Kaur: Simply Beautiful. Well Crafted. Kudos to you. Warm Regards, Jasneet Kaur,New Delhi
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Lina Mistry : Dear Satishji, You take your readers on a whole new level with your poems. I like this piece almost sad to say, crumbs are mere bird food yet to a hungry person it is delectable morsel...Best wishes,Lina Mistry Tandel, Varginia, USA
Jasneet Kaur: Simply Beautiful. Well Crafted. Kudos to you. Warm Regards, Jasneet Kaur,New Delhi
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Joyce Bell
YOU
ISN'T IT AMAZING...WHERE OUR IMAGINATIONS TAKE US? WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
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ISN'T IT AMAZING...WHERE OUR IMAGINATIONS TAKE US? WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
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Sara Michael Lokken, Sara Kendrick
RELIGION
Sara Michael Lokken : There are many evils in the name of religion..."religion" is actually just a human's way of getting to God- but God wants a relationship, not religion....there is only one way- one PERSON. Think of Him as a person- not a set of rules. Very respectfully....
Sara Kendrick : Interesting write not exactly sure what is meant here. The third stanza seems to say that possibly someone stole someone's written material or is it something else that the priest stole??? Sara
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Sara Michael Lokken : There are many evils in the name of religion..."religion" is actually just a human's way of getting to God- but God wants a relationship, not religion....there is only one way- one PERSON. Think of Him as a person- not a set of rules. Very respectfully....
Sara Kendrick : Interesting write not exactly sure what is meant here. The third stanza seems to say that possibly someone stole someone's written material or is it something else that the priest stole??? Sara
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Joyce Bell
YOU
ISN'T IT AMAZING...WHERE OUR IMAGINATIONS TAKE US? WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
http://www.authorsden.com
ISN'T IT AMAZING...WHERE OUR IMAGINATIONS TAKE US? WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
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Wednesday, January 13, 2010
Visit.Me.On.Mars
Where He Was
I like this. It's like a story
meant to make you think.
=)
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I like this. It's like a story
meant to make you think.
=)
http://allpoetry.com
Tuesday, January 12, 2010
Marina Paiæ
IN RING OF FIRE
From contempt rose understanding.
Understanding gave rise to change...
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From contempt rose understanding.
Understanding gave rise to change...
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Sara Kendrick, Sara Michael Lokken
OF BURNING
Sara Michael Lokken :Dear Satish- trust is horrific, because it gives up need. "Like a ripe tear, I will not betray the eye"- speaks of this. Paulo Coelho once said: "We have to let other people love us, to give us the strength to go on. If we accept such love with humility, we learn that love is neither giving or receiving- but participating." I want you to be loved.
Sara Kendrick : Interesting and thought provoking write. Sara
Sara Michael Lokken :Dear Satish- trust is horrific, because it gives up need. "Like a ripe tear, I will not betray the eye"- speaks of this. Paulo Coelho once said: "We have to let other people love us, to give us the strength to go on. If we accept such love with humility, we learn that love is neither giving or receiving- but participating." I want you to be loved.
Sara Kendrick : Interesting and thought provoking write. Sara
Nimal Dunuhinga (1836, W.Sumac Ln.Apt #8, Anaheim, California-92804 United States; Male; 59)
Message from Nimal Dunuhinga
I dreamed Paris and shifted to the location a remote village school,
Marie.Antonette came running and her hair braided into pigtails
And she wore a red pinafore.
Her blue eyes
invited me to play hide & seek.
I was shocked and played my tambourine with this song.
'Really I am scared of pitfalls Marie
And do you remember 'The Bastille'? (old fortress)
The prison until stormed.(July,14,1789)
That demolished by the populace.
When the poor people begged they cannot eat bread as it's too expensive,
Then you ignored them and said; ' Better you eat cakes.'
Do you remember what happened on the following day?
I re-read the History to check whether it's you or someone else?
nimal dunuhinga
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I dreamed Paris and shifted to the location a remote village school,
Marie.Antonette came running and her hair braided into pigtails
And she wore a red pinafore.
Her blue eyes
invited me to play hide & seek.
I was shocked and played my tambourine with this song.
'Really I am scared of pitfalls Marie
And do you remember 'The Bastille'? (old fortress)
The prison until stormed.(July,14,1789)
That demolished by the populace.
When the poor people begged they cannot eat bread as it's too expensive,
Then you ignored them and said; ' Better you eat cakes.'
Do you remember what happened on the following day?
I re-read the History to check whether it's you or someone else?
nimal dunuhinga
http://www.poemhunter.com
Monday, January 11, 2010
R.Aarthika, anuradha
AN UNBORN PRAYER
R.Aarthika : i too pray for that.a very nice poem indeed,Sir
anuradha : Classical. High class poetry. Very original.
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R.Aarthika : i too pray for that.a very nice poem indeed,Sir
anuradha : Classical. High class poetry. Very original.
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anuradha
A PRIMATE IN DISTRESS
The surrealism (real surrealism) the allegory are tremendous. Very modern in approach. Resembles the revolutionary and ‘Digambara” poetry I read in Telugu.Kudos.
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The surrealism (real surrealism) the allegory are tremendous. Very modern in approach. Resembles the revolutionary and ‘Digambara” poetry I read in Telugu.Kudos.
http://p4poetry.com
Sara Michael Lokken
HAPPENINGS
This is a work of light- warming the heart of poet and reader. I love "In the panic room, no image filters." This parallels my poem, "Prescience." Just gorgeous, Satish.
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This is a work of light- warming the heart of poet and reader. I love "In the panic room, no image filters." This parallels my poem, "Prescience." Just gorgeous, Satish.
http://www.poetrysoup.com
Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi
Yes
A stimulating ode to humanity. Pathos and empathy well woven into a splendid poetry. Warm Regards,
http://www.museindia.com
A stimulating ode to humanity. Pathos and empathy well woven into a splendid poetry. Warm Regards,
http://www.museindia.com
Sunday, January 10, 2010
Brad Stahoski, Carol Brown, Sara Michael Lokken
A FAMILY DUST
Brad Stahoski : Wonderful sexual imagery here. "Thighs of a tulip valley"...Very nice string of words.
Carol Brown : I thank you for writing and sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Satish. I offer you warm greeting for the New Year with best wishes to you on your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
Sara Michael Lokken : I am getting so much from this. I am crying. You were a silver rose- the color of your beloved moon. Do I see your feminine side?:) Only the best wishes, Sara
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Brad Stahoski : Wonderful sexual imagery here. "Thighs of a tulip valley"...Very nice string of words.
Carol Brown : I thank you for writing and sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Satish. I offer you warm greeting for the New Year with best wishes to you on your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
Sara Michael Lokken : I am getting so much from this. I am crying. You were a silver rose- the color of your beloved moon. Do I see your feminine side?:) Only the best wishes, Sara
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Saturday, January 9, 2010
Dr Pooja G Bhuyar, Bijapur
One silver bowl
The last paragraph is the best, very nicely woven in words. Best wishes.
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The last paragraph is the best, very nicely woven in words. Best wishes.
http://www.museindia.com
Friday, January 8, 2010
Seshu Chamarty, Hyderabad, Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi, Lovita J R Morang, Guwahati
Secrets of my love
Love to you two lovely people. Thanks, Seshu and Jasneet. Regards always,
Lovita J R Morang, Guwahati
Beautiful...Each word is penned with compassion. Splendid indeed. Warm Regards,Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi
Lovely poem.Thanks for sharing. Seshu Chamarty, Hyderabad
http://www.museindia.com
Love to you two lovely people. Thanks, Seshu and Jasneet. Regards always,
Lovita J R Morang, Guwahati
Beautiful...Each word is penned with compassion. Splendid indeed. Warm Regards,Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi
Lovely poem.Thanks for sharing. Seshu Chamarty, Hyderabad
http://www.museindia.com
Phed
Helmeted Version
Delicious use of words!
"The transliteration of a famished lake " beautiful!
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Delicious use of words!
"The transliteration of a famished lake " beautiful!
http://allpoetry.com
Thursday, January 7, 2010
Sara Kendrick, Sara Michael Lokken
UNENDING
Sara Michael Lokken : I love you, Satish Verma.
Sara Kendrick : The use of the flowers here moon flower, morning glory, and rose brings this write to life. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Sara Michael Lokken : I love you, Satish Verma.
Sara Kendrick : The use of the flowers here moon flower, morning glory, and rose brings this write to life. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Wednesday, January 6, 2010
Sara Michael Lokken, Carol Brown
GOD OF BLESSINGS
Carol Brown : Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today Satish. May your writing take you to new heights each and every day. Love, Carol
Sara Michael Lokken : He knows what you did- and He forgives you. The water didn't drown the body, I did. You know who is speaking. It's not reincarnation. Jesus is my God. I now pass on my gifts to you.
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Carol Brown : Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today Satish. May your writing take you to new heights each and every day. Love, Carol
Sara Michael Lokken : He knows what you did- and He forgives you. The water didn't drown the body, I did. You know who is speaking. It's not reincarnation. Jesus is my God. I now pass on my gifts to you.
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Tuesday, January 5, 2010
Puttu Kulkarni, Melinakeri-Kumta, Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi
Dark prison
What a terrible experience! But this experience leads to the goal and always light will be there, affter this bitter experience. Puttu Kulkarni, Melinakeri-Kumta
Well Crafted. Kudos to you. Warm Regards,Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi
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What a terrible experience! But this experience leads to the goal and always light will be there, affter this bitter experience. Puttu Kulkarni, Melinakeri-Kumta
Well Crafted. Kudos to you. Warm Regards,Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi
http://www.museindia.com
Monday, January 4, 2010
Kimberly Hilliker, Sara Michael Lokken
ONE RUNAWAY RELIGION
Sara Michael Lokken : "Tie the thread to the moon" means a return of something... and I love "dark blood of a white soul"- which means, there is a good person behind the "adolescent crime" even though innocence has died. That is what I am getting
Kimberly Hilliker : Interesting poem. Thanks for sharing.
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Sara Michael Lokken : "Tie the thread to the moon" means a return of something... and I love "dark blood of a white soul"- which means, there is a good person behind the "adolescent crime" even though innocence has died. That is what I am getting
Kimberly Hilliker : Interesting poem. Thanks for sharing.
http://www.poetrysoup.com
Sunday, January 3, 2010
Saturday, January 2, 2010
Sara Michael Lokken
A STAR PLUNGES
This reminds me of stars, like on a flag..."emblemic".....or patriotism turned currupted. And the loss of innocence with it..loss....just loss...pure loss is the feeling. Beautifully written. -Sara:)
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This reminds me of stars, like on a flag..."emblemic".....or patriotism turned currupted. And the loss of innocence with it..loss....just loss...pure loss is the feeling. Beautifully written. -Sara:)
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Sara Kendrick,Sara Lokken
A STAR PLUNGES
Sara Lokken : This reminds me of stars, like on a flag..."emblemic".....or patriotism turned currupted. And the loss of innocence with it..loss....just loss...pure loss is the feeling. Beautifully written. -Sara:)
Sara Kendrick : Interesting write in this one. Sara
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Sara Lokken : This reminds me of stars, like on a flag..."emblemic".....or patriotism turned currupted. And the loss of innocence with it..loss....just loss...pure loss is the feeling. Beautifully written. -Sara:)
Sara Kendrick : Interesting write in this one. Sara
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Friday, January 1, 2010
Sara Michael Lokken, Andrea Fischer, Carol Brown
UNENDING
Carol Brown : ~~Satish~~Now you are winding down your year (2009 ) of sharing your amazing poetry with us here at PoetrySoup. As you begin your New Year (2010 ) I wish you the best with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. I wish you good health, all the love your heart can take and peace in your life. Love and blessings to you and yours now and always, Carol
Andrea Fischer : A beautiful poem and beautiful contrasts moon flowers/morning glory, singing dark Well done
Sara Michael Lokken : You're remembering something beautiful..."singing dark"- what a gentle contradiction and metaphor. -Sara
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Carol Brown : ~~Satish~~Now you are winding down your year (2009 ) of sharing your amazing poetry with us here at PoetrySoup. As you begin your New Year (2010 ) I wish you the best with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. I wish you good health, all the love your heart can take and peace in your life. Love and blessings to you and yours now and always, Carol
Andrea Fischer : A beautiful poem and beautiful contrasts moon flowers/morning glory, singing dark Well done
Sara Michael Lokken : You're remembering something beautiful..."singing dark"- what a gentle contradiction and metaphor. -Sara
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