"helpless victim lies in wait, to be dispatched" maybe your feelings from your work helping others? keep your energy up, blessings!- LightH2O
Once again ,pure poetry this particular poem resinates with me- leafsailor
"Stoically I rode on the wings of pain/to watch the descending values". Brilliant line in a brilliant poem. Loved it.- Patrick McFarland
Roads taken by words explore - roads taken by actions observe the truth-Some Girl
I love your imagery, very powerful, the last stanza is my favorite- Brennan Marcell
Once again ,pure poetry this particular poem resinates with me- leafsailor
"Stoically I rode on the wings of pain/to watch the descending values". Brilliant line in a brilliant poem. Loved it.- Patrick McFarland
Roads taken by words explore - roads taken by actions observe the truth-Some Girl
I love your imagery, very powerful, the last stanza is my favorite- Brennan Marcell
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