FUTURITY

These are trying times indeed, east and west, though I'm tempted to say waste..- noah count

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SLAIN ROSES

Sir: I so enjoyed this write. As always !!! Thank you for always posting here and your books are marvelous. - Lady Dragonwyck 

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GRAY DAWN

excellent.- Poet Destroyer A

Nice poem.- Matthew Horstkotter

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WHAT ENDING

good one.- Poet Destroyer A

Nice poem.- Matthew Horstkotter

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SEPARATED OUR LIVES

It was sad to read this but I found these hopeful lines, "I was nearly buried in quick sand. Now I talk to trees, the carpeted clouds, and move again." Keep moving and enjoying the beauty of mother nature. Best regards.- LightH2O

multiple windows turned into walls and poems died. not a soap opera......................a deep sentimental drama!- nimal p. dunuhinga

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SEPARATED OUR LIVES

multiple windows turned into walls and poems died. not a soap opera......................a deep sentimental drama!- nimal p. dunuhinga

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UNTITLED MONUMENT

wow. I love the line a brusied truth becomes a rose. This is perhaps out of order but I would like some wisdom from you. If you had to change something in your life from before, if you had to, what would it be?- TerrorShaun

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Tracks Were Obliterated

"The shadows collapsed and thoughts walked in dark into the trap." much enjoyed poem.- LightH2O

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HUMBLED

Wow! that ending stanza is so deep and positive.- LightH2O

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FROZEN

These are trying times, indeed. Unfortunately, made more so, for now we all can see the stupidity and ignorance of hatred in real time. Well done, my friend.- noah count

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Historical Grief

I love the imagery this poem brings to mind. "...time becomes a paper weight."- LightH2O

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LOCKED DOOR

Grace is there where violence is not.You hind positively and beautifully.- P Nasarudheen, Kasargod. Kerala

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WRITING ITS DIKTAT

"Life should not burn like coal,..." love this ending line.- LightH2O

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HOLDS ME GREEN

Powerful!-LightH2O

This is a dream to read...phenomenal.-Deletesugarspit 

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CHESSBOARD

Morning, Sir. Very thought-provoking write. I ALWAYS enjoy your writes. Have a good week. - Lady Dragonwyck

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HUMMING NIGHT

Much enjoyed! Happy Father's Day to you.- LightH2O

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UNLOST EXISTENCE

collecting the light in these fragile hands - great thoughts my poet- after vision

Very nice.- Dana Kongo

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BENEDICTION

"Time sits for a while, when we mourn in silence."....."The river dries up, sucked in by laments of earth." You see with eyes wide shut while your spirit speaks from the feedback of each diminutive electrical connection of your amazing being.- LightH2O

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THE AIR WAS SCENTED

"you preached the immortality of a sick downloaded wisdom."... "Adjectives had the advantage over nouns." My Oh my! you are terrific, I bow to your lovely spirit. Hugs!- DeleteLightH2O

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FACE OF TRUTH

"It took a whole night to see the face of truth! You shows truth with each nightly poem you share with us. Thank you for sharing such beautiful-deep reflections.-LightH2O

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HEART UNSNAPS

Your sensitivity amazes me, first stanza graved my heart, so gripping. Recommending.- LightH2O

Without doubt a stunning read Satish - the unsnapping heart can really be felt. Recommended.- DeleteFay Slimm

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A TOUCH OF CLASS

"The philosophy of being is quietly murdered." love your deep lines and observations that come with the experience of a wise, reflective spirit such as yours.- LightH2O

Wow the metaphors are amazing!- DeleteLady

Very smart and well written "my eyes climb the hill" is just one great line. This is so anguish driven if you ask me. Theres no hope. :(...Thanks for sharing!- DeleteGary Loftis

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THE TERRIBLE

"You worship the setting sun, rape of dawn will continue." you reflect the pain of the unattainable and the truth of beauty and sadness. Your deepness astonishes me. Thank you my dear friend for your souls reflections. Recommending! (although I find almost all of your work should be recommended).- LightH2O

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MY POEMS WEPT

Wow....enjoyed this- BigMescan

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HE

Your poem here casts a spell of unique feeling and your lines spill the beans of quality diction and imaginative splutter. Well done Sir! -M.D DINESH NAIR, VIJAYAWADA

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THE END

Dear Sathish Verma Sir, I appreciate your lines over here for their blends of poetic charm and luxury of thought. The title 'The End' remains little understood though! -M.D DINESH NAIR, VIJAYAWADA

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ANOTHER STROKE

Dear Satish Vermaji,
Most of your poems submitted here are fine indeed. But many of them are left not responded because you are never bothered about being responsive back to those who write comments on your poems. I am wondering why a talented poet like you remain indifferent to the presence of your peers over here and become a bit sociable at least occasionally. You can become dearer to many here by doing so. Please don`t remain incorrigible. I am sorry for writing this response.-M.D. Dinesh Nair, Vijayawada

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HEART UNSNAPS

Without doubt a stunning read Satish - the unsnapping heart can really be felt. Recommended.- Fay Slimm

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A LOVE THEME

A rose is one of those strange flowers with thorns for its protection and often is the flower to give to a love one during courtship when people are still on their guard (thorns) despite being attracted (flower) . Some fear to touch flowers because of that but not sure since you have a break between the 2 stanzas. Sometimes thorns can prick hands and cause bleeding wounds. The moon a light in the evening, followed by the sun in the day, but no kiss all that time? Not sure about snow on the eyes, but realization that it may be too late for anything to happen.- Imelda Ortega Suzara

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WANDERER

Unique and emotional....Greatly enjoyed.- leahlopez

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DIGNITY

I liked this poem addressed to the impending Danger.I invite u to read my poems and comment.Thank you- Soumita Sarkar

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ANIMATION

Im so glad i got to read this poem Satish- Charmaine Chircop

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INSULT THE DEATH

Hello, I am Brazilian and I am very happy to read his poetry on this site. I can not write in English very well, but I heard some of his poetry. A big hug.- Fernando Paixxão

There are many more wonders left to be seen!- Deletejust Arun

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WANDERER

Nice work. It comes to conclusion all in the last line. really nice- Robin

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FLESH AND BONES

Good and beautiful thoughts. Nice . Congrats, Sir-WILLIAMSJI 

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EMPTINESS WAS SCREAMING

In a jungle of untruths, you being a lone soldier for the truth, You begin to doubt, what is moral? Truth or the untruth.- Birds of Monsoon

Good write,filled with emotional images;]-DeleteWeeping willow

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CARRIED MY FATHER UNSIDE

Outstanding... committed is the pen to hearts-words-  Emancipation Planz

A powerfully written journey Satish - thanks for sharing-  DeleteSome Girl

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RANDOM SIN

Some interesting imagery in this sharp-edged write.-  Robert_Haigh

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WHITE ROSES

a penchant... a bouquet... a meticulous lodging of poetry ...- Emancipation Planz

Where do you get so many lines each night? "Stormy winds erased the clusters of white roses." your mind is like a kaleidoscope never ending in creating beauty.- LightH2O

Dark lead the dark, so poignant of today's world.- Birds of Monsoon

"With no regrets, life declares the fall of our incorruptible icon". Sounds like a bite from the '72 "Nixon Tapes"...written by Nixon HIMSELF!!!!- Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR

Stormy winds erased the clusters of white roses. this painting of uncertainty? I grabbed. Thank you Sir!- nimal p. dunuhinga

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A LOVE AND HATE STORY

It is quite difficult to me to catch the full meaning of these verses, where words are used to create a dark athmosphere, as dark as the senses of the leading actor. A sort of madness permeates the poem.- Mario DE PAZ

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WANDERING FAKIR

Always original, tfs.- LightH2O

I recommend.- Jenessis

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FIREFLIES

I love fireflies and this is an interesting view of them. Your always incredible write. - Lady Dragonwyck 

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ART AND DESIRE

Art and Desire artistically capsuled.Good.-P Nasarudheen, Kasargod. Kerala

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AGAINST DEPORTATION

Wow! I'm truly glad I have 'stumbled' upon you. Your writing is amazing. I have sent a 'friend request', hope you accept! ~ Namaste- Winter Rose

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NIGHT LIGHT

Anything can happen in the night light, touching and beautiful! - Have a great weekend. - Anne Lise Andresen

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FALLING BRICKS

I understoond? maybe 10 but even 5 are great.-Bazyliszek

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YOU BECOME A STRANGER

"Life had the absurd walls a wounded center." I hear you..., keep on writing and giving us from your never drying well of inspiration.- LightH2O

I love the stark simplicity in expressing complex emotions.- Birds of Monsoon

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MOTH-EATEN

Such exquisite pictures, such lovely portrail of life, sadness, beauty... "Life was to be read as a book, pages moth-eaten and yellow." You amaze me!- LightH2O

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