Perception

Yes, I know what you mean purnimamanhas,, yet I too feel drawn into Satish Vermas words. It is as if somewhere deep inside lays a glimmer of primeval understanding, something I cannot really put words to. It just makes me stop, think, read again, carry on with my life and then revisit.- Netty

I am too new to this style pf poetry.. I always click your posts in the anticipation that it challenges my understanding. Clearly, you are too mature a poet for amateurs like us. And the best part, with out understanding much, I hit the like button :)-purnimamanhas

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Naming

Intense and beautiful! Very Nice.- Wanda Huff

Love the imagery. Splendid read and write.- Brandon Whitten

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Occupation

How long these protests will continue? O mother. Nice flow in this poem shared on. -Kumarmani Mahakul

Excellent choice of wording flows with meaning..fantastic imagery.- Chris G. Vaillancourt

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The Fall

brilliant piece of writing! loved every word!-Lenny Gazbowski

too intense.. I liked the style and choice of words.-purnimamanhas

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Annette Abraminko

This morning I opened the Forward Petry Site and read two one your poems (which I commented on) and I was truly moved by your words.  Your words are unaustentatious illustrating stark truth without judgement.  I find that illuminating and tremendously profound.  I am moved.  You paint more profoundly than an artist with oils and allow your readers to absorb your words and take from them what they wish or need for their own journey without apportioning judgment of any sort.  This is a great lesson and I am grateful.

After reading the two poems, I read what you had written about yourself and then visited your Sewa Mandir web site which I read with interest.  Please could you tell me where I could read the research papers in English?

I wish to thank you and I shall continue to look in Forward Poetry to see what else you share there.  

Kind regards, Annette Abraminko

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NOT QUITE A PRAYER

VERY GOOD!! I love the way you have with words!! Thanks for sharing.-Joel Thornton

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Disbelievingly

Code of particles feel the entire life. When I cry.....like diatoms....in eyes erase the sun. Beautifully presented poem shared on. Very nice job done.- Pintu Mahakul

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DIMENSIONS

The first stanza -- arrogance before the gods, No. Second stanza -- a sacrificial gift and a true response, third is awesome -- dance with all your might! loved the dimensions.-David Meade

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Silent Prayers

Poetry.- David Wetzel (leafsailors ghost)

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Contraptions

Oh beautiful!xxx.-Karen Fromtod

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Armless Enemies

well, a deep piece it is indeed.-BrotherNewton

Nice.-Sagar D Rebel

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BEAUTY OF PAIN

unique and powerful writing.-  Chris G. Vaillancourt

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Revolt Of A Sutra

Brilliant Write! Loved Then Liked!-puds1957

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A Big Idea?

A Little Twisted For Me! Loved & Liked!-puds1957

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Cocktail

Gathered before the god of the evening we wonder, your poem calls us to be in the poet mind.- David Wetzel (leafsailors ghost)

Stanza 3...Line 3....Did you mean to write ecstasy? Check it out... Now, about the poem..I must admit that your message here was clearly "M O O N S" over my simple mind...as opposed to my arms...Sterling imagescaping though... throughout.- Frank James Ryan, Jr. / FjR

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Voices

A Lovely Write! Loved & Liked!-puds1957

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One Rendezvous

A right imagination and an awesome poem.- Gangadharan Nair Pulingat

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*On 100th Birthday of Alan Turing

Yes what actually happened ? a powerful poem , I have been interested in the story , this was a mind of amazing agility and deep mathematical beauty sad old men made his life miserable because of their inflicted judgment ,Your poetry stands aside in its voice .recommended.- David Wetzel (leafsailors ghost)

People who travel ahead of time have to commit suicide! - PrEmJi PrEmJi

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Spinning

Thank you for share! A bleeding flag of love my friend, between the comets, may not be shoot, may I suppose, guess, that will fly all by itself?... Please don't lose hope, please look around, now more people than ever are awakening, we may find the means to open up..- Elena S

The poem speaks directly to my poet task. - David Wetzel (leafsailors ghost)

You speak of the pain between the intangible, an indefinable place but never the less a place sensitive souls can feel. Thinking of you, take care.- Light H2o

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Sovereignty

Beautiful poem. Loved: The echo was searching the sky. -jennie charles

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UNATTENDED

Nice opening lines.- Seema Chowdhury

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Life Moves On

This is nice. Specially the second stanza.- Lina Guerrero

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PARTY

Butterflies like democracy are allegedly symbols of freedom ...That is unless they are caught in a free fall landing of fire and chaos... "Farenheit 451" comes to mind here, as it seems that we continue to burn & destroy our tools of knowledge and opportunity in realizing that this world we continue to abuse and destroy is NOT ours to abuse, as it is NOT our world AT ALL ! - Frank James Ryan, Jr. / FjR

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BECOME MY FATHER

sigh ,this poem of yours holds a somber note such a long time it takes to heal these souls sir, I see the shimmering time in the distance.- David Wetzel (leafsailors ghost)

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INTERRUPTED

Great observations create a very interesting collage in your unique style. Best to you always. - Light H2o

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VALENTINE

And why not! In the life that we are in, even 'in medias res' seems peripheral. The poem just goes inside! -Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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FRACTURED TIME

I like that.. Very nice.- Royal Scribe

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The Ritual

Really nice piece you have created here . - Chris G. Vaillancourt

really nice piece" ...............................................................................nice so now to knock on the door.- David Wetzel (leafsailors ghost)

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No Rescue

A magnificent web you weave. Well penned. - Brandon Whitten

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ANOTHER TOMORROW

Really liked this poem, well written, imaginative. really really liked the last few lines:

Into the orphanage enters the day
riding on the dust of history.
My journey begins into time
to change into another tomorrow.

Not sure I understood the meaning of the poem, maybe you can explain it to me.-Thomas Heath

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FUTURE HIDES

Good morning. A thought provoking write as always. -Lady Dragonwyck

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INCARNATION

Very well done.- GaelicRogue

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Body Script

Great Write Strong! Liked!-puds1957

Powerful, thank you.-Madeira

life is by a thread amen brother.-T.G.Raymond

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CUP OF SORROW

All artists have their own personal meaning in the work they do, and I am not sure exactly what your's is here, but whatever it is, this is a lovely and deep thinking beautifully written piece, nicely done.- Flyingawayheart

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ON THE EDGE

wow. man that's good! flesh eats grass. petals know the music of death in fragrance. Genius! so much genius you possess. I am humbled. - Bo Raven S.

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A River Flows Underground

So descriptive and I love the imagery. Great poem, satishverma!-RazorRon

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Time Crossing

While I hold the pen and think to write I know time is crossing from word to word. Beautiful one.-Pintu Mahakul 

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TRAILBLAZER

very beautiful. evocative. transcending. I would reconsider however, selling your home of curse. And buy a condo of blessing.- Bo Raven S.

Very Compelling piece of poetry.- Electric Peace

An evocative write, expressive and deep.- Seema Chowdhury

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BLACKENED CROZIER

Motherhood dismayed!! -RAJESHWARI SRINIVASAN, MUMBAI

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STONE CATCHERS

incredible. this style never gets old. it's exciting and humbling to await your creations. The ants were waiting for the death of the lamb. That's creative and thought silencing. Usually it's the wolves that wait. But I never expected to see the ants. great mind you possess sir. a giant's mind. - Bo Raven S.

good form and good choice of words....well written, very well spoken.-  Electric Peace

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Night Light

Beautiful imagery. Lovely write.-Chris G. Vaillancourt

As usual, lovely poem.-jennie charles

Beautiful piece Satish...I really enjoyed it. :)-Gyrocaptain

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Boat Capsizes

True! Remarkably crafted!-Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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PINK REMINDER

the colors are indeed changing. wonderful powerful images and symbols. surreal and sublime.- Bo Raven S.

Wonderfully poetic phrasing in this gem of a pink reminder my friend. I will not forget the "golden amnesia" of those "hot greens". First rate read.- Fay Slimm

just to journey a wave of words from your sea of mind yes , a poets delight.- David Wetzel (leafsailors ghost)

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LIKE A FIREBIRD

Powerful read! Love the delivery.-Stormi 

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