Olive Branch

Ok a great way to place the words to pleasant effect the subject matter like a butterfly on a good wind spiral was always just beyond my grasp. - Just Arun

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RETURNING HOME

I can't even rate this one because I do not understand what ABC is. Did the person end up committing suicide or kill someone or was just killing time writing a poem?- Jim Horn

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STATECRAFT

I don't completely understand this, but I like it.- Casey Vittetoe

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Catch a Butterfly

in the truth that might be untruth..colors are immitates..nothing is as it seems...right sight gives the wrong picture.-Poet Asa

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HETEROSEXUALITY

So long as the rocket propelled grenade doesn't have the letters, I, S, I, L on the bodywork of the unit., I'll take my chances on that whisper blast... And that's virility at its apex , or should I say climax ?- Frank James Ryan, Jr. / FjR

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UNEVEN PATH

What...-Ally Evans

enigmatic beauty!- sathyanarayana

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Clauses

I too required many readings. Spellbound. One of the best poems read in the recent past. -K Pankajam, Chennai

I am silenced! Read many times! -Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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BETWEEN TWO CENTURIES

There are many ways to interpret that poem. I saw and felt the struggle to cling to the innocence and comfort of the past and to dare to reach for the wonder and fear of the future. Even the use of words revealed conflict between meaning and understanding. There is also a deep sense of irony, in that the progress of science only opens more questions and reveals more that we do not know.-Gaelwynn

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THE FIREBRANDS

Very well done; a joy to have read.-GaelicRogue 

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THE WARS

I'm not sure what this means/is about but it is beautiful and it feels good to read, especially the last stanza.- Brittany Strang

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Pouring

Wonderful storytelling. Liked.- Lenny Gazbowski

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Exchange

Nicely written..liked..x-Jazmine Reid

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Foursome

delightful.-Lenny Gazbowski

Intriguing piece.-eastegg18

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Smashing The Road Signs

Good going, come rain, come snow.-Sreelatha Chakravarty ( @Sreelatha_Chakravarty )

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OFF-LIMITS

Not quite sure what the meaning is, but seems profound in some obscure way. Keep up the good work.- FuckIt WhyNot

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INTO THE LAIR

this is a beautifully written piece.-Chris G. Vaillancourt

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Glorified discreetly

It's a wonder as to who was destroying the sweetness!- Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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MANY NAMESAKES

Wonderfully drafted poem shared. - Kumarmani Mahakul

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SEPARATED OUR LIVES

Lending always such multitudinous ponders, absolutely adore your works.-Єɳɬеӏесհɣ

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FLAMES

Excellent interpretation of 'flames' that continue to burn and brown the inside and the outside. A pleasure to read! -Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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BLACK MOON

Don't know what to say! The periphery of the poem has no limit, the I seems to be travelling everywhere... excellent Sir! Regards-Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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PANTHEON

well.anas pulikkad

dark night knows no tunnel.-David Wetzel (leafsailors ghost)

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Creative Shame

A splendid read with many layers of possible interpretation. However, the central theme hovers around creative shame, in the form of death; of values, of the physical, of a nightingale in the woods. Warm regards,Supratik

P.S I couldn't resist myself from taking the first lines of each stanza to get this!

"Neglecting the presence of choiceless
pain,
Looking inside, beneath the rags
of awakening,
Till the arteries explode in the limbs.
I will knead the invisible universe,"

-Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

Satish ji, I am particularly charmed by the first stanza that so vociferously acclaims life, against all odds of pain and circumstances. Warm regards,- GSP Rao, Hyderabad

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WANDERING FAKIR

Morning. Like this write very much; but, I always enjoy your thoughts. -Lady Dragonwyck

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