Laughing Skull

Each word helps the other to create such a beautiful and uplifting poem. Thanks, for sharing this well penned write.-Sue_Pinkston

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A Paragon

The poem is a superb creation, i enjoyed reading the following lines
Unorthodox. The nature
reveals its move― in the galaxies.
The earth is in―
mid-life crisis.-Shakil Ahmed

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The Right Moment

A masterpiece! I just bow to your write! Thanks for sharing!-Sofia Kioroglou

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Toxicity

A very beautiful poem, i enjoyed reading the poem, well-write, thanks for sharing, if you find time please read some of my poems and leave your comments.-Shakil Ahmed

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Change Of Life

Very gifted poet, I sincerely enjoyed reading your poetry. It's beautifully painful, real and also shaped by history, time and human experience.-Agatha Eliza

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Irony Of Gist

With no ring on your finger -
you fell free, but life lingers.-Liza Sud Russia

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Change Of Life

 Verily, facing by standing in times of challenges can only change life.-Abdulrazak Aralimatti

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Faraway

your poems are superb! Give me a few reasons why I like your thoughts, which are sometimes wild as the victorious tiger and otherwise tamed river..Thank you for sharing your wonderful imagination here Satish Vermaji! !-Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

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Unheavenly

trust a man, fine message sir, namaskar..-Gajanan Mishra

Brilliant capture, I hope humanity answers those unheavenly deities in steadfast determination.loved the image of vultures, made the scene all the more gruesome.-Miraj Raha

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A Soul Dies

Liked great write.-Dark Wolf

I really like this.-John Holmes

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Pebbles In The Pond

Deep with imagery to sigh for my friend. Murder when translucent indeed has much sadness.-Fay Slimm

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Ode To Loneliness

Ah - so profound this read about loneliness - the phrase "mossed in misery" did it for me - thank you for sharing such depth of description Satish.-Fay Slimm

Great last verse.-Nobby66

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Descending

Fabulous writing. Liked much x. -Helenmatherrogers

Great poem a lovely read.- Kacie

Magnificent!-Boutheina

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Consumption

utterly pretentious and empty.-Imrie

Nicely written.-Dark Wolf

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Unasking

Fantastic almost apocalyptic imagery, loved & liked - Arturon

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In Sleep

Great write liked.-Dark Wolf

Very clever poem Satishverma.-hutch

Awesome!-Boutheina

Beautiful write! Liked!-Wanderer

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Nightmare

Nicely written.-Dark Wolf

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Faithful

Liked.-Dark Wolf

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Yielding

Superb poem. Liked.-John Holmes

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Laughing Skull

Several good lines in this. The last stanza being the best. Good job here.-heritage

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Self- Annihilation

Of course, Mr. Verma is intensely original in his thought, diction,and cadence. A praiseworthy attempt.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Aham Asmi… *

Advaita philosophy turned into a good poem. Nice execution of rhyme and rhythm-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Heterosexuality

I like the feel and the mystery of the poem.
I would add a question mark in the first stanza, after "harpoons." -ChicagoSojourner

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Historical Grief

Beautiful imagery.
love these lines-
I step outside the house of thoughts.
The death begins the counting and
jasmines start crying.

I hear the over-worn desert
blowing the sand.

Night melts in hissing sounds,
time becomes a paper weight.-J Nair

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To Be Nothing

this is deep, really deep and exotically painful.-Urbanpoet Hader

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Between Two Centuries

Good job!
Very thought provoking piece.
Take care-Cindy

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Deliverance

Use of quaint phrases makes an unique expression. Mr. verma a style of his own which leaves an indelible mark on readers’ mind. -Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Fireflies

Deep thoughts and speculation about human nature and world at large. Some fine lines fibrant with poetry like, ” come, stand beside me, sadness is going to find me again.”-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Knuckled Down

Great poem. I enjoyed.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Claim For Fame

Your expression is quite exquisite.-FLETCHER

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On The Gallows

Miracles falling like hurricanes would be welcome - world status is not worse it is just faster in reaching the populous via satellite aka internet. Free Press - a cure and a curse: nukes and parasites - luck and survival. -allets

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ONE MORE ANNIVERSARY

Beautifully done without one word about the loss suffered.-Dan Cwiak

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Contrast

Interestingly penned down (Y) -Subhashani ( @Subhashani )

A love poem of interesting nuances . Good cadence.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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You Become A Stranger

So lovely....
It is her charm
That makes me to feel all the time warm
I wish her to prepare for final d-day
And wait for the wedding day

The journey has to stop somewhere
For more meaningful venture
I am sure to be stranger
But she has accepted it like bright future.-Hasmukh Mehta, Ahmedabad

Nice, and wonderful to read and the sense is palpable.-Seshu Chamarty, Hyderabad

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Logistics

You've painted a picture with your words.- Azalea Hazel

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On The Brink

Oh the roses were bleeding due to carelessness.- CITY OF SAILS

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Stillbirth

A surrealistic attempt but poetry is not lost.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Home Coming… Hypothetics

A smart wise love poem. Enjoyed reading.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Song Of The Last Siren

Poet has deep understanding of nature and mankind. Somewhat prophetic, of epic grandeur.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Historical Grief

Beautiful imagery.
love these lines-
I step outside the house of thoughts.
The death begins the counting and
jasmines start crying.

I hear the over-worn desert
blowing the sand.

Night melts in hissing sounds,
time becomes a paper weight.-J Nair

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Suddenly So!

Wow !Enjoyed reading your poem.
Great opening-
Your truth always happened at wrong time
You were guilty of telling lies to death

nice imagery:
*jumping up and down in a stinky swamp,
one day you were caught behind the epigram
encysted in perversity
* Some of the days
burned like dry wood-J Nair

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Moth-Eaten

Yes, 'you still cannot read the eyes'. However, the poems will continue to burn. A stimulating read. Best. -Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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Welcome Sir!

An universal truth, nicely painted by Satish Verma, an impressive poem!-Akhtar Jawad ( @Akhtar_Jawad )

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A Living Soul

An exquisite thought process woven into fine texture of a poem. Consummate skill over manipulation of language.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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The Birth Of A Public Stance

Great reading of history and a great poem. Fine cadence.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Breaking Dawn

Great penning sir.- Bewitched First

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FOR A DESIRABLE WORLD

Very well written and expressed Satish...-Silent One 

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Singing Woods

"...The autumn was praying for the/well-bing of pine needles in fog..." To obscure (fog) that which has died (pine needles) with a season for dying back - the new Sandburg. :D -allets

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Blood Draped

"...false ceilings..." -allets

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The Candle Burns

As always. ...Spreading the wetting/ agent between the eyes..." was especially haunting. - allets

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UNDER THE CLOUD

I really enjoyed reading your poem, Satish...Nicely done! My regards! :)-john fleming 

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Flickering

Lovely tfs.- Angel mia LOVE

"the dialect of contours"; "the lap of a dandelion" -- Beautiful imagery, my friend.- Raymond scott.

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Flowering

Excellent poem! - Chris G. Vaillancourt

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Timeless Affair

May your timeless affair with yourself be one that will lead you a place of joy and inner peace. A very profound poem.-Avril Meallem, Jerusalem, Israel

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Heights

A completely different expression of your words ... the emotion came through with startling clarity...-Debera

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Trail Of Blood

Deep write, but well penned...-listener

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MASCULINITY

A pen is a small instrument but in your hand it becomes a very loud voice! I like listening to it…John Wulf 

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TIME WILL TAKE REVENGE

Powerful write! May the victory some day shift…-John Wulf 

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New Dictionary

I truly wish I understood this because it sounds so profound... - Stiltskin's Gold 

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The Difference

Beautiful imagery.Simple romantic picture touched with an alluring pang. A dismal beauty of highest order.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Celibate

I like how this is really quirky. The first verse drew me in then the rest is making me ponder your inspiration for this! Love it! :-)-Liquid Poetess

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Shadows Are Thinning

A very powerful, deeply moving poem.-Avril meallem, Jerusalem, Israel

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In The Intermittent Love

Too many images Satish. But so what...the content is clear from various shades, and yet you say metaphors didn't kiss, but I guess you are right, they wouldn't when hate would have to be the topic.
Your poems tempt me to do a stylistic analysis; something that would help readers in understanding how objectively a poem can be viewed or reviewed; some day maybe I will...when my show-off feathers will fade. In the interim, do keep posting. Yours.-Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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My Poems Wept

What a wonderful write, dripping in wonderful imagery. Well done indeed!
All the very best,-Ben Pickard

A beautifully sad poem filled with imagery one can feel
while it was been read. I liked the links between nature and human emotions..it flowed and walked hand in hand..lovely write.-Meena Krish

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Egocentric Wind

Beautifully written.-Busy Poet

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Timeless Affair

I like this. I sense the existiential, "void/no-mind" inspiration behind it. Maybe it is because of this I find it hard to understand the flow or meaning.
The words themselves are abstract and painting. The colour of this poem is purple. (for some reason or another :)-Mason Robb

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Unfog The Sky

Another accomplished piece of writing from you, Satish. Well done.-Ben Pickard

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Catch The Sunset

What a beautifully written piece. Read twice and enjoyed immensely.-Ben Pickard

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Buddha Sleeps

Expressive and a meaningful write. - Seema Chowdhury

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Dying To Live

Fine poem with a pervading consciousness of death.His sense of outrage and violence has also mellowed down in the meantime.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Another Blossom

Hi Satish
when we reach away from what life has given us we do so in hope and certainty
that it can change and we will fly away like the swans to a new day.
your words paint bright pictures, some sad but most hopeful and inspiring.
May your flight be fruitful and you find what it is you seek.-colin skilton

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Waking Is Painful

Hi Satish
strong words and thoughts here, as always the cold light of dawn gives the truth in all its coldness and serenity and sometimes its that reflection that leads us to the truth of most situations and we embrace its clarity so that an answer or begin again to find an answer that is truthful.
Thank you for sharing with us. A good poem.-colin skilton

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Full Stop

Hi Satish
a three way split on this one road in the sense that the writer is looking at three ways to find solace and understanding and then concludes there is only the one path that lies not in the deep trench of life he once was ready to turn over and sow the seeds of love an life he once treasured for so long
now he is looking elsewhere and the words change once more with the mood of the story as he moves further away from what he has held dear and now wishes to return to a home enviroment that he hopes to find and return to, no more commas needed because there will be no more full stops either as he walks fully prepared to find that goal and realises that pain and jealousy will not solve anything so he moves away from their thorny side . Interesting write my friend and enjoyable.-colin skilton

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Spider

Very thought provoking write. I always enjoy your writes.
Have a marvelous day and week.-Lady Dragonwyck

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Faithless Autumn

Satish
autumn is nearly upon us and your words bring on that feeling we get, what will it hold, what will
it take away from us and we yearn for spring but know winter will come upon us.
enjoyable poem and well written and enjoyable.-colin skilton

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Answered…”

Deep insight.Fire borne on congealed tears. Brilliant powerful composition.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Omar-2

Good poetry. Nice imagery.A sense of resentment pervades, verging on poignancy.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Roots That Clutch

A beautiful passionate write !-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee ) 

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Helix Now Uncoils

It's a privilege to read this poem. Thank you for sharing this. Best. -Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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