Sunday, January 31, 2016
Saturday, January 30, 2016
Bouquet Garni
Your musings are connected to the jungle, yes? Have you read "Burmese Days" by George Orwell?
Thursday, January 28, 2016
Tuesday, January 26, 2016
Forgotten Hills
This poetry seemed to echo what i often in my breezy days would hum.. Quiet a hill song! Thank you Sir! -Purabi, Gandhinagar
Excellent. It smells earth. Best. - Supratik Sen, Hyderabad
Nostalgic and evocative poem, Satish ji.-GSP Rao, Hyderabad
Excellent. It smells earth. Best. - Supratik Sen, Hyderabad
Nostalgic and evocative poem, Satish ji.-GSP Rao, Hyderabad
Sunday, January 24, 2016
Consecrated
the simplicity brings out the need to read in between the lines. This is elegant and beautifully written. I hope to see more from you.- Allyssa Treglown
Saturday, January 23, 2016
Friday, January 22, 2016
Bliss Of Another Self
Wednesday, January 20, 2016
Taking Off
I like them all... especially the 2nd one. Well done, Satish. -Lin Lane
Nice your words reverb.-germanamericanchurch
Nice your words reverb.-germanamericanchurch
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Tuesday, January 19, 2016
It Does Not Matter
Intensely passionate utterances. A poem of unusual depth. Bravo !-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )
Temptation
Saturday, January 16, 2016
Death Was Pure
hi mom satish my name is graham im from namibia africa i read your peom Death Was Pure and even tough its short it touched me and now i sit here and cry thinking of the only love i lost my grandma thank you for the sweetest memories. i intend to get married this august and it hurts to know she wont be there, i was wondering if maybe you could write my something for my wife to be so she would on our special day know that i truly love her pls mom satish your truly.-morinsHUSBAND
Friday, January 15, 2016
In Chains
Away From The Home
Very thought provoking write. Hope 2015 has been a good year.-Lady Dragonwyck
Thursday, January 14, 2016
You And Everybody
...your writings still fascinate me... very well thought out.not everyone likes or wants to hear the truth but the truth does set free those things we can't see all by ourselves. Debera
Metaphysical View
A fascinating insight on the human condition, and the combined process of living and ageing in a constantly changing world!-Oojah Smith
Black currants are amazing so it is the the descriptive power of these words, your voice is unique.-germanamericanchurch
Black currants are amazing so it is the the descriptive power of these words, your voice is unique.-germanamericanchurch
Wednesday, January 13, 2016
Blameless?
An interesting mystery about an anxiety that has become real? A thing undiscovered or ignored for too long? Hope you will share what is behind this expression.- shearerjon
Tuesday, January 12, 2016
The Brightened Fire
Wow, this is really incredible writing. So powerful. -Helenmatherrogers
Fury Of Juggler
Mr. Satish verma has an impeccable pessimism which sometimes are shaped into beautiful poetry, this is one of them ! He has an inimitable style too !-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )
Monday, January 11, 2016
The Melting
"...like a moth..."
a comparison of concepts using as or like: I love this moth burning truth! - allets
a comparison of concepts using as or like: I love this moth burning truth! - allets
Sunday, January 10, 2016
…… Stunned Me
This is very deep and sad. Yet beautiful in the way you present it. Very nicely penned-Poison_9901
Images Rhymed
Bravo satishverma . Thank you for sharing.- Ramin Ara
Nice write.-Thoughtful Depictions
Dope metaphors . tfs .-Jesse bob
Nice write.-Thoughtful Depictions
Dope metaphors . tfs .-Jesse bob
Saturday, January 9, 2016
Lips Will Measure
Friday, January 8, 2016
Solemnity
A poem filled with sorrow. Most poignant. All good wishes.-Christine Shaw, UK
Time Crossing
Satish your talent parallels with your cry for peace. May we never forget those who were lost to prejudice, the Holocaust, and war. I remain with you in my prayers for peace.-Marcia Schechinger, USA
No More, No Less
Hi Satish very well said and very strong content ,its a sad state of affairs but it's a truth for many countries .My best regards.-Pattra Shuwaswat, Netherlands
A Long Night
Your first poem is particularly powerful Satish. In my opinion, there is always a poem in someone's tears. When you see a person crying, it would be difficult not to have an emotional reaction. All best wishes.-Christine Shaw, UK
Day Of Anxiety
Sometimes less is more. I found that here Satish. Thank you. All good wishes.-Christine Shaw, UK
Simple, thought provoking. I liked it! Thank you.-Betty Janko, USA
What an interesting poem, Satish :). Thank you for sharing... Warmest! Rufus.-Rufus Brughs, Nigeria
Simple, thought provoking. I liked it! Thank you.-Betty Janko, USA
What an interesting poem, Satish :). Thank you for sharing... Warmest! Rufus.-Rufus Brughs, Nigeria
The Nature
Hello Satish, a well thought out poem on peace, like the last verse, well written .-Edwin Jepson, UK
Flares
Beautiful imagery here. Nature in all her glory. All good wishes.-Christine Shaw, UK
Brings to mind songs of my native blood, a oneness with all the beauty of Nature... irresistible, because it is a part of us...-Granville Holt, USA
Brings to mind songs of my native blood, a oneness with all the beauty of Nature... irresistible, because it is a part of us...-Granville Holt, USA
Evoking Images
Images indeed, on the cusp of dawn may lie the whisper of muse... hopefully we can learn to listen...-Granville Holt, USA
Being Watched
A powerful emotion, spoken but not said... enjoyed.-Granville Holt, USA
Living Dangerously
Hello Satish, a poem full of interest for the reader, well written with powerful wording.- Edwin Jepson, UK
Hello Satish- You always deliver a powerful poem that is dramatic and well expressed. You again have done so and it is greatly received. Sending warmest wishes.-Nancy Crossland, USA
Hello Satish- You always deliver a powerful poem that is dramatic and well expressed. You again have done so and it is greatly received. Sending warmest wishes.-Nancy Crossland, USA
In Exile
Beautiful language, Satish, with very rich images. Thanks for sharing.-Elizabeth Olesen, Denmark
DESPERADO
Are people really desperate to become saints? I believe, real saints have become saints without any thought of getting the prize of sainthood. It is we, who are left behind who grant them the honor and prize that they have honorably and saintly lived and served among us. Otherwise, they themselves, I believe, never have counted themselves as saints.-Elizabeth Olesen, Denmark
Wrapped In Stigma
Hi Satish, I am amazed at the wide scoop of your coverage in this poem. This is a rhapsody, pleasant to the ears. Enjoyed.-Reyvrex Questor Reyes, Philippines
The Blooming Blood
A fine poem , full of sincere emotions, Edwin Jepson, UK
I like this poem. I know you got these words from deep inside. A very good write. Warm regards.-Conrad van den Bergh, South Africa
I like this poem. I know you got these words from deep inside. A very good write. Warm regards.-Conrad van den Bergh, South Africa
Massive Explosion
Your choice of metaphors - impressive. The first two stanzas remind me of a galactic phenomenon, the third and fourth of something to look forward to and the last is a feeling of great 'loss'. But your category states 'Peace' so it's hard to tell. Would love to hear your explanation, Satish. It deserves 5 stars though for being a thought-provoking poem. -Jacinta Ramayah, Malaysia
Your Voice
Wow Satish this is a powerful poem with an undercurrent of meaning. Intense. All good wishes.- Christine Shaw, UK
Hi Satish,intense and emotional to the core. Enjoyed. -William Willis, Scotland
Hi Satish !!! I really like this poem. I find it to be a very emotionally intense alluring to several deeper meanings, depending on where you are from in this world. An excellent write. Thank you for sharing. Warm regards.-Conrad van den Bergh, South Africa
Hi Satish,intense and emotional to the core. Enjoyed. -William Willis, Scotland
Hi Satish !!! I really like this poem. I find it to be a very emotionally intense alluring to several deeper meanings, depending on where you are from in this world. An excellent write. Thank you for sharing. Warm regards.-Conrad van den Bergh, South Africa
Thursday, January 7, 2016
Sunday, January 3, 2016
THE GIFT OF ABANDONMENT
Abandonment is not gift Satish.. only when we are saved... This is a great write..-Silent One
Bringing Down
Ode To Now
One reads and floats - nothing else will do here - Happy New Year (I pray for your health and contiued wealty of necessary words). allets
One reads and floats - nothing else will do here - Happy New Year (I pray for your health and contiued wealty of necessary words). allets
Saturday, January 2, 2016
The Goodbye
The depth in this poem is incredible. A beautiful piece. Very much enjoyed and liked.-Helenmatherrogers
Friday, January 1, 2016
Return to Myself
Every line makes the reader think. In complete awe. I would have stopped at 'history was an aberration and not use rags to riches.-Supratik Sen, Hyderabad
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