Monday, March 28, 2016

A Hot Patch

Hello,
This is excellent work. I have read it again couple of times and your words meander like a cloud lost in a labyrinth. The mystery is enjoying the riddle.
Take care, -Mr Darcy

It took me ten minutes trying so hard to come up with a comment to this poem, and still nothing.
From the title, choice of words and the flow is such a breathe taking to read not once not twice but a number.
There nothing I could say to describe the feeling, the enticement from your poem.-DarkLight

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