Suicides

You seem to post quality, image-filled poetry daily seemingly without any effort whatsoever. This is an excellent little piece.-Sir Lancelot

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WRAPPED IN STIGMA

A scattering of interesting personal images...Very different! Little vignettes of life! Lovely - I could visualize them well. Carry on writing! Hugs! -Aqua Marine 

Lovely images! Not sure what you are writing about. Second stanza is my favorite!-Kim Rodrigues 

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Last Freedom

wow! this is an incredible piece!!
loved the plot!
keep writing :-Shadowine 

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The Secular Ethics

Very awesome read. I like how your writing flows together, to make me visualize everything that's going on. Many stories on here do that, and that's why most of the stories I read on here are good because you all are very talented and gifted, I visualized everything as I was reading it. Great writing. I was wondering can you return the favor and just check out my post about the connection between Superman and Jesus christ thank you. -B-law

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A Revival

Very awesome read. I like how your writing flows together, to make me visualize everything that's going on. Many stories on here do that, and that's why most of the stories I read on here are good because you all are very talented and gifted, I visualized everything as I was reading it. Great writing. I was wondering can you check out my story. -B-law

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Rampage

Woe..very deep and great usage of words...I like it s lot!-Pharaoh33

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Carnality

the misery of live V. death
very interesting piece of work.-willyweed

The departure of death... death hangs around looking for an opportunity. I read it twice.-rrodriguez

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Vigilance

This is a lot to take in. I think I have to be in a clearer state of mind to interpret it appropriately.-abstractempo

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The Earthen Death

Wonderful and thought provoking sharing done definitely...10-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Existential Plight

Satish
Good poem. See my You Are Not Superior To Me And Vice Versa. Also, Satisfaction. -Robert Murray Smith

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Loose Threads

State of mind wonderfully unfolded through this verse rich with rhythm and rhyme. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik

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Aham Asmi, I Am I Am

I held you on to my breast.
Give me your fangs
and give me your venom.
I was blue and I am the death.

Wow. Marvelous. A poem of pure passion and delicate feelings.
10+++ for the poem. Thanks for the sharing. -Subhas Chandra Chakra

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For Something

The tender touch.
It reaches you inside. You
start trembling
like aspen, ready to fall.

Full breasted, a
crimson moon will spill
the buttermilk for
a rosarian.

Two beautiful stanzas from a very beautiful poem.
Thanks poet for sharing it.10 mark's. -Subhas Chandra Chakra

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Fierce Mooning

Last lines very effective, I enjoyed this read!-slithr

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Furious Wounds

Dear Satishverma, Ni hao. Good Struggle With Emperor Constantine's Dictating Christianity Be Empire Building (called the Bible) Month, in the USA, to you. Thanx for the excellent write. A subtly musical and very cool poetic tapestry, weaved well with imagery, insight, emotional integrity; liked the veracity and earthen realism, bravo. Consider entering a poem into weekly Starlite Cafe Challenges: 'A Bird's Eye View, Anew', or, 'It Takes Three Plus One (to make a collaboration)' :). Thanx for all you do! Enjoy your eve'. Sayonara. Matutinally Yours.-reality1

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Cracking Of Dawn

Wow! Extremely deep, I'm still absorbing all of this-well done--Brenda

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Claustrophobia

Nice. No equal to you the way you write emotions. Regards, -Seshu Chamarty, Hyderabad

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IN EXILE

Interesting imagery about death and truth.-The Seeker

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Gather The Sun

A lot meaning in words, a powerful poem that creates an impact with every read, well written Sir. -Madhumitha Murali, Bangalore

"I gather the sun in my poems" - such a wonderful last line following a very powerful poem. May the 'gathered sun 'shine out from your poems. Thanks for sharing.-Arvil Meallem, Israel

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Synopsis

A great poem. I would value your comments on my: The Mind Nos.1@2. -Robert Murray Smith

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Abstract Thoughts

A wonderful poem. Thank you. See my poems The Mind Nos.1 and 2. I would appreciate your comments.-Robert Murray Smith

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Ascending Paresis

Why the wealth brings-
the change of life?
A wandering pain
caves in, where the moon
looks sick in its paleness.
Beautiful. Highly appreciable lines.
10++ for sharing this poem.Subhas Chandra Chakra

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Staircases

'Why the pink words
float in black eyes?
I swear, I will not look
at the moon again- - -A beautiful write.Want to read it again .-Bharati Nayak

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The Essence Of Nothingness

Start the fight afresh, good one sir, namaskar.-Gajanan Mishra

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Carnality

the misery of live V. death
very interesting piece of work. -willyweed

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Ghostly

Was this translated from another language?-abstractempo

I loved this!-Dandylion

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Unhitching

This piece gets inside my head and convinces me that it is real. All the corners that the reader connects implement a valuable number of transitions, at the same time painting a natural display of multiversity as the world does of God.-abstractempo

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Tasting Blood

Deep, I just threw some bread out for the birds it's night time, am I wrong?-almostdead

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Moving Shadows

The formatting at first has the impression of a haiku, but after reading the lines it's clear that the piece is not. I respect your ambitious formatting, only to me it feels like you were trying to replace something that wasn't there. Moreover, I wish you would instead say "send pink rains" rather than "send the pink rains" because the reader doesn't really know what you specifically mean. By putting it under general terms, the reader may interpret that for themselves.

An excuse to blow out all the candles and (burn) the limbs.

The three lines in stanza #2 are initially seen as separate, but when in putting them together as one straight line their value is more adequately observed - Not to change the structure, but to make sure it's making sense - and when doing so you realize that it's written incorrectly.

It's those little things that compromise a good work's potential.-abstractempo

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Wounded Path

I have read two of your poems and it saddens me that more people haven't seen them. Your words are beautiful and difficult and deserve a much larger audience.-JustABird

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Otherness

"Fear hauls you up on the
brazen rocks, you stand
alone in sun to find your toes
breaking the sound waves."

This is superb.Thank you.-lysistrata

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Visualization

"The misty moon has scattered your shadow over my cage
Watch how this drowned bird would turn into a passionate wave."

That's my poetic answer to your "Visualization"...
I like it.-lysistrata

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Degenerating

Truly beautiful imagery that really made me stop and think, exceedingly well done, look forward to seeing more.-W. G. Simms

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Silver Trails

I love the way you put words together. Powerfully and interestingly written! I also love the refusal to accept half-dead poems. Great line!-VH42

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Today

Dear Satishverma, Ni hao. Good African-American Music, Caribbean-American Mths, in the USA, to you. Thanx for the excellent write. A musical and cool poetic tapestry, weaved well with imagery, insight, emotional integrity; ethereal and real relations in time, space, and life make it worth reading again and again. Consider entering a poem into weekly Starlite Cafe Challenges: 'A Bird's Eye View, Anew', or, 'It Takes Three Plus One (to make a collaboration)' :). Thanx for all you do! Enjoy your eve'. Namaste. Matutinally Yours, james-reality1

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Botanically

Some of your images in this one are really powerful! I also love the line, "I will not accept a half-lip." The last stanza is fantastic!-VH42

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Regenerating

I like the way you put words together. I especially like the third stanza.-VH42

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Smiling Buddha

Dear Satishverma, Ni hao. Good Struggle With Emperor Constantine's Dictating Christianity Be Empire Building (called the Bible) Month to you. Thanx for the excellent write. A dark yet musical and cool while hot poetic tapestry, weaved well with imagery, insight, emotional integrity. Consider entering a poem into weekly Starlite Cafe Challenges: 'A Bird's Eye View, Anew', or, 'It Takes Three Plus One (to make a collaboration)' :). Thanx for all you do! Enjoy your eve'. Sayonara. Matutinally Yours, -reality1 

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Sovereignty

I like the juxtaposition of the breast tumor, which blocks the flow of milk (and possibly the flow of a life) and the "tragic flow of history". Also the image of "an Adonis to stitch the wounds of angels".-VH42

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Eternal Cuddle

Eternal cuddle? The term actually made me chuckle a bit.-Celeste Silver

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Saturn Will Shortly Rise

I really liked this a lot-there's so much meaning and thoughts in this write. Well done--Brenda

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Gather The Sun

"I gather the sun in my poems" - such a wonderful last line following a very powerful poem. May the 'gathered sun 'shine out from your poems. Thanks for sharing. -Arvil Meallem, Israel

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LIVING DANGEROUSLY

Great write Satish..-Silent One 

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DECIDUOUSLY

Nice ... Beautifully said ...-Probir Gupta 

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