Witty expression,Satish Sir.Indeed there are many people who even after committing the most heinous crimes don't feel ashamed rather they begin to justify their brutal acts by using most abusive words.But justice will be done at last and Janus will open the gate of hell for those criminals.In this mundane world these criminals succeed in escaping from being penalized and their brutal acts filled the pages of the historians but they should not consider this respite as a boon but it is the filthiest bane in the guise of boon for them but they realize it not.Very nice composition,Satish sir.-IFTEKHAR AHMED, KOLKATA
How brilliantly the title of the poem is beaming in its every line Satish ji. Wonderful to read about the god of beginnings who will trap the light (as if that's possible) and open the doors. The hyphenated connection between the third and the fourth couplets speaks volumes of our futile, artificial, superficial and plastic connections and reluctance to address the pressing issues despite using verbosity and other instruments of war. When we commit a crime as heinous as rapes, we do forget, don't we, that we are also raping humankind by insulting our moms (ah precious moms, our mammas) and mother tongue is bound to break into unnoticed tears. This is one of your best, from all aspects. -Supratik Sen, Kolkata
How brilliantly the title of the poem is beaming in its every line Satish ji. Wonderful to read about the god of beginnings who will trap the light (as if that's possible) and open the doors. The hyphenated connection between the third and the fourth couplets speaks volumes of our futile, artificial, superficial and plastic connections and reluctance to address the pressing issues despite using verbosity and other instruments of war. When we commit a crime as heinous as rapes, we do forget, don't we, that we are also raping humankind by insulting our moms (ah precious moms, our mammas) and mother tongue is bound to break into unnoticed tears. This is one of your best, from all aspects. -Supratik Sen, Kolkata
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