Drowning My Faith

Your words are hauntingly exquisite. Your heart speaks profoundly well. Sorrowful times we live in.-JacieStralkoDuca

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Metaphysical

A melancholy write that speaks volumes. Happy New Year.-Milly Hayward

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Be Deceived

beautiful writing. the last stanza is my favorite.-Abora

yes indeed... a most impressive write and thoughtfully enjoyed...-Neville

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Cuts and Bruises

Nice to read. But ofcourse could not get the hidden meaning in the lines.-Rajeev Moothedath, Bangalore

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Between Flesh And Soul

I Know
Not literal and your writing is personal imagery or based on allusions unknown to me, but this one feels like the #metoo.-allets

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Gifting Away

Stunning piece, very enjoyable read.-Milly Hayward

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Ennui

Excellent!
The passage of time is constant!-Laura

Celestial is our guidance.-Lawless

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When The Rains Stop

An excellent marvelous poem, Satish...............................-Bernard F. Asuncion

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Debating Point

O'siyo. Happy holidays. Welcome. Bellisimo. A mo' deep poem with whimsy; thanx :) reality-reality1

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The Final Retreat

Excellent write!
The blind eagle will “see”!-Laura

The depth...-Lawless

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The Spectrum

Wow, completely gorgeous write. Amazing work!-Em MacKenzie

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Talking Of Love

"Walking in ruins"
Love the images - allets

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Supposedly

Darkness, in all it's mysterious elements! Fantastic!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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Dragging The Clouds

Intriguing
Intriguing.-stellaluceat

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The Fugitive

A super write!
Quality seems to forever suffers!-Laura

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In Dustbath

Face of Venus is amazing to observe. A brilliant poem is interestingly penned. here. Wise sharing is done really.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Self-Portrait

Excellent...as always!-Laura

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Unending Marathon

You always write such vivid pieces with imagery that captures imagination. Another superb piece that has to go into my favourites.-Milly Hayward

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Hope And Despair

The volcano weeps and this provokes thought. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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A Suspended Rock

Excellent!
A “glimpse of lightning” indeed!-Laura

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Obligatory

Your words are always so fascinating. I truly enjoy reading your poems!-Brenda

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All the dreams

A lovely perspective of dreams. Enjoyed the last para. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Cobwebs

Is pain in the body or the mind? Are they the same? Nothing could be the final peace we search for.-Lawless

IT IS THE - ( SEARCH )* for THAT* - WHICH is DESIGNATED* as PEACE* = THAT is SUFFERING*-OUTBACK

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For No Obvious Reason

A powerful statement!-Laura

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Metempsychosis

Strange color blue.-Lawless

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Not Burnt-Out

Thanks sir for the insightful read.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Enigmatic

Spiritual. God bless.-Tabassum Tahmina Shagufta Hussein

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Ignition

In a strange way the contrast between the the fluttering butterfly n death were brought together. Captivating.-Tabassum Tahmina Shagufta Hussein

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Trinkets

Loved
The scrambling nouns.-allets

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A Big Idea?

I liked the poem. While reading I could relate to it. As if the feelings were mine. Thank you.-Tabassum Tahmina Shagufta Hussein

Ever so often in life you come across one exquisite piece that lightens your way
Through fancy brevity it’s enhance with a touch of magical ambiance to help read
Yesterday we can learn by are mistake let in flight for one to really breath in
This piece is loaded with positive messages of hope long to cope with reading in.-Mario Vitale

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Ecce Homo

This intrigued me, nicely done, got my little mind working overtime on this one. great job done.-Dawn 

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We The Faithfull

Wow...I love your work ...it is so deep and unlike anything I have ever read.-Jason Vancelette (AKA Pharaoh33)

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Don't Alter The Red Cape

I was drawn by the title and held to the very end.. there is something I like very much here.. maybe its because I love nature...-Neville

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Undressing

Enjoyed the abstract verse. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Writing in Air

Dear sir, I just have read this poem. It's really been created with devotional touch. Alluring!-Prashant Kumar Choudhary, New Delhi

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Beat the clouds

Multilayered and thought provoking lines. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Recreation

It's beautiful!!!-pinarello

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Opening A Window

Thank you for spelling "lose" correctly, it seems to be a hurdle these days. Well everything is.
No reply ever needed my wise one.-Lawless

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Heartache

Wow, quite deep really but expressed so well. Nicely written and presented.-dalton 

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Small Birds

Insightful lines worth pondering on. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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It Matters

Woooohoooo! Was my first reaction upon reading this poem.-Krista DelleFemine

Beautiful Satsih.-Jamadhi Verse

Bravo!-Khoi-San

This is really lovely!!-Reena Sharma

WAO.-Kayode Steve Adaramoye Esq

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Embittered

How long the struggle
will continue to understand
the color of blood? ....so touching and impressive. A beautiful poem so nicely executed.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Secrets Of Unknown

<3 !!!-eleven_eleven

I really like "fighting with
I really like "fighting with shadows of ghosts" good stuff.-fuche_bu

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The Nightmare

A brilliantly written message!
Extraordinarily penetrative!-Laura

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My Story

Lovely composition, sir. I especially liked these lines:
moon bled to death,
when you left in dark... -Sangeeta Das, Delhi

Well written though esoteric.-KH Prabhu, Kumta (Karnataka)

Truly a wondrous story, deep in it's reach... keep them coming.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Recreation

Satish, such a well thought poem...........10++++++++.-Bernard F. Asuncion

Knack of recreation out of anything and every thing is laudable as it is very difficult achievement. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik

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There Was No Prelude

Great write, philosophical write, satishverma. You give us a great deal of food for thought with your words.
Now that scientists, through DNA, proved we all evolved from one woman and one man (Adam and Eve) your words are even more profound. It's true. See the following article:
Adam and Eve DID exist! Scientists discover all humans are descendants of ONE couple
https://www.mirror.co.uk/news/world-news/adam-eve-exist-scientists-discover-13641589.-Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet

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Godsend

Evocative lines hinting at the windfalls. Liked the read. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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The Vinegar Test

Forgive me kind one,but I am lost a bit here reading this. I can see the sadness is obvious. Could you briefly explain this write. I surmise it has to do with dying away flowers? Now some might read and fully understand others may read and not understand and not inquire. But because it felt emotional to me I would like a better understanding of your write.-JacieStralkoDuca

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When The Attack Comes

beautifully criptic.-olivia2002

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No Hatred

The experience of your words is haunting. You have come through an episode that remains deep inside. Yet no hatred. I hope I am reading this correctly.-JacieStralkoDuca

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Living Dangerously

Your poetry is so intense and intriguing. This is no different. I am slowly learning your style, as it’s so distinctive and cryptic.-The Prince

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Piercing Mind

Wow! Insightful and transpiring. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Sorting Again

lovely writing-
Love blooms in hush,
like cranberry. It heals soul,
half moon, half stings.-Mahtab Bangalee

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What Else Does It Mean

"torn love"
what a concept! stirring write - allets

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Open The Doors

Absolutely gorgeous write. Well done!-Em MacKenzie and Sean Fitzpatrick

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No More Halts

Beautiful and incredible vocab!-Sean Fitzpatrick and NA

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Nothing Happened

A shot.-Lawless

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In A Basilica

Thanks for the insightful verse. -ANNAPURNA SHARMA, NELLORE

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Lips And Wordless Miracle

This is absolutely stunning....your work always is....I look forward to reading your posts every day...knowing it will make me think..rather than picking random pieces of poets who's fortes lie obviously in some other field....Blessings.-Jason Vancelette (AKA Pharaoh33)

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With Apologia

Propter alii ipsum sacrificauit!-Laura

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Buoyancy

terse vivid lines,
sharp images,
subliminally soothing
well written .-costa siwale 

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I Speak

"TYPICAL SATISH'S STYLE". Beautiful poem Varma Ji.-R R Gandikota , Kakinada

A poignant verse. TFS.-ANNAPURNA SHARMA, Nellore

Very nice
I share
Thursday,15th November 2018

I speak not because
I must suppose
and choose
an occasion to repose

it is my duty
towards humanity
as it has been thrust upon
by an almighty and shown

I must share
and dare
to remain among
even if they are proving wrong

Human life is miserable
not for one but for all to struggle
to come out of itis big challenge
as we are sitting on the tough edge

let us not vitiate it further
and cause fear
in the minds of poor and downtrodden
speak on behalf and stay happily driven.-hasmukh mehta, ahmedabad

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The Undefined

Oh the shadows of the night shall fall, the sun shall scorch the day and still no rains come our way, but in the stillness of the night I will cry out to the dry winds to change into a soft Autumn rains.-Slightlyslimer

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Afloat In Words

A Side Journey
Slipping int the world of Satish is always an adventure - allets

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Fair Play

I agree with Prince This poem is so skilfully written:
Today I climb a red
mountain to know my height.-BOB GALLO

Some lovely writing here! Unusual imagery that really captivates the imagination.-The Prince

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Not Negotiating

Sometimes fate leaves no chance for negotiation. Thanks for the verses pregnant with profundity.-ANNAPURNA SHARMA, Nellore

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In Exile

Graffiti spreads everywhere.... thanks for the insightful read.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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No

last stanza nice imagery /// wonderful poem.-Mahtab Bangalee

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In Starry Dusk

This is completely stunning work. Great work!!-Em MacKenzie

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Reply To Fea

A nicely woven poetic piece. - Uche Ahunanya 

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My Affairs

Thanks sir for the profound share.-ANNAPURNA SHARMA, Nellore

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An Unasked Eulogy

Outstanding!-Laura

We are shadows amongst the energies of the sun and moon.-Lawless

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Finally Injured

Tough Tulips
Enjoyed this one. It's election day in usa nov 6 tuesday. The lines were not too long this morning. best wishes.-allets

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Karma

Marvelous!-Diamond

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The Stranger

As always the lines dig deeper than their outward appearance. Thanks for the philosophical share sir.-
Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Facts Of Life

Thought provoking, thank you very much.-Poetic Dan

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In Disguise

I don't always comment but I always read your poetry. Such clever word choice, just enough to paint the picture but not too much to over egg.
The imagery and darkness in this piece is thought provoking. I'm always taken on a journey with your poetry. Nominated.-Darren

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This Kind Of Time

Nicely wriiten the lines which reflects the present day situation.-debasish verma, Ghaziabad

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Autumn's Harmony

Beware of that which is unwritten!-Laura

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Hope In Undoing

A maverick way to present a life journey. Very engaging. Thanks for sharing Satish. Enjoyed.10+++-Petals Azureblue

Well conceived and elegantly brought forth with insight. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Satish.-Chinedu Dike

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Endless Search

A superb piece with great visuals. loved it. -Milly Hayward

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Living Dangerously

I will get the tan
in moonlight only. My scars
will remain invisible in silver. - as always insightful and with an in-depth meaning. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Thousand Moons

Satish has been dazzling me for quite some time now but with this poem I melted. Its crisp, beautiful and oozing with pure beauty!-Maple Tree

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Deciduously

Enjoyed reading the profound lines. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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With No Anger

The emotions flow beautifully through of these verses.
Excellent poem.-Hans Vr

Satish, such a well penned poem.......10++++++++++.-Bernard F. Asuncion

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For Pythia

I like your imagery although I think my lack of knowledge of your homeland limits my understanding. I do appreciate your poems.-fuche_bu

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Not Holding

I am still following a riderless horse!!-BOB GALLO

I absolutely loved this... If only life was so simple they we turned over a page and there was a blank page when we needed it to forget about the hurt etc within our lives and we could carry on until the next time we happened to need another blank page but instead we carry on regardless.. take care.-Em (marmite)

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Unjointed Time

This piece gave me a lot of thought. My feeling is at one level its a ghost story and the character is talking to his fathers shade as a means to work through his grief and yet at another level that it is instead a metaphoric view on someone who feels thier life is crumbling around them. Who fears the future but accepts that the answer to his future lays in the ghosts of his past. I would love to know your thinking behind this piece.-Milly Hayward

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Being Watched

As always an insightful read highlighting the hapless and helpless of life's game. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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In Full Moon

nice poem- like to quote
Be some tender―
to me, I am carrying
a burning glass.-Mahtab Bangalee

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The Bleak Landscape

The dead stanzas being the words unsaid. When an action could be just and corrected if only someone cried out for help and extended a hand to help pull you in from the tide's pull. Very gripping! i loved the energy!-splattercore 

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Pure As A Flame

Enjoyed your work of fire. Love this as always my friend!-Troylato

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Homeward

"Will you catch a
butterfly for my reluctant wine
I had invited the black roses."
Wow. This is the most beautiful thing I have seen in a few weeks.

I am also stunned by the sheer neckedness of moon reflected on this piece!!-BOB GALLO

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Ideation

Your poem helped me not get rid of poetry as I sometimes do in a panic... can't really explain this comment of mine very well except to say thank you for sharing.-Debera

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Pure As A Flame

Enjoyed your work of fire. Love this as always my friend!-Troylato

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Midnight Happening

Wow....amazing work.-Jason Vancelette (AKA Pharaoh33)

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Oh God

An insightful read. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Revelation In Dark

excellent poetic expression-

You begin and end
in sameness. The trust will
veer you back home.-Mahtab Bangalee

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Soaked In Glory

Your work always shows the emotion of the heart. The beauty of this work always shows through.-Troylato

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Whirling Dervish

interesting poem. Is this related to the whirling dervishes in Turkey?-fuche_bu

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No Vilification

Understood.....-Hope

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In Quicksand

Most philosophical poem.-R R Gandikota , Visakhapatnam camp

Your poems always have the flavour of deep philosophy!-Kumarendra Mallick, Hyderabad

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A Broken Chain

Your words too are broken and heartfelt.
You birthdate is a special one.
Thank you.-Lyn Paul

Bees ready to fly away! ! !
Thanks for sharing this poem with us.-Edward Kofi Louis

Sometimes the design goes awry.
Ptosis. You are called for―
a fall. But you refuse
to die.
You survive the clouds, the
first moon, the brown eyes.
Me before the sun.- - - - - I can not say I fully understood the poem, still its beauty makes me come here again and again to read and enjoy.-Bharati Nayak

A great poem indeed. Like to read again and again. Deserved to be poem of the day.-Anil Kumar Panda

A great philosophical poem so nicely executed. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.-Kumarmani Mahakul

A fabulous piece of work! Many congratulations for this beautiful poem being chosen as POD!-Dr Dillip K Swain

The tie that binds two hearts that once connected has gone...Marvelous expression is vividly seen in every line...I love it..Congrats for being chosen as POD.-Jez Brul

How truly lovely. Congratulations on Poem of the day and very well deserved I might add.-Sarah Persson

Heartiest Congratulations for selection of this beautifully conceived poem as Poem of the Day.-Ratnakar Mandlik

Satish, such a splendid poem of the day...........
Congrats for being chosen...10++++++++++++-Bernard F. Asuncion

nice writing
The shrine of a (intentional error) flier
insurmountable thinking for poor hunger!.-Mahtab Bangalee

Not a poem that we would put in our pocket.-Chainsaw

An interesting peculiar write with a pleasant flow. Enjoyed the style. Congrats for POD selection.10+++-Petals Azureblue

Day Of Anxiety

I like that sense of "keep going even though things may be dim". The simple, almost gloomy visuals with the utterance of "I will not give up" almost like a promise to yourself. Sometimes, all we can do is be in the moment, even if we feel helpless.-Poet on the Piano

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What A Scenario

The imagery in this is so vibrant an absolutely superb piece. Certainly for me one of your best more recent pieces.-Milly Hayward

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No Semblance

A subdued sense of guilt defeated by an irrepressible longing! Priceless weave!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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Futility

The oncoming greyness of weather tied up so well with fading recollections! Fantastic write!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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Do Not Wear The Dreams

always love it when someone slips the word sanguine into a poem. Great job.-fuche_bu

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Waist-High Sunk

Thanks sir for the intriguing read.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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In The Labyrinth

WOW !!! A most excellent piece of writing. I am a fan of your work-GaelicRogue

Truly enjoyed this write and appreciate you! Great work my friend!-Troylato

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Inauthentically?

I hear voices resonating through you work here. Keep hold of your nature and allow the planet to breath again. Nicely done-kevin browne

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Chaste Energy

Tantalizing write! Karma at it's best!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

great imagery.-Jayesh

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Recalling

As always another deep and thought provoking piece.-Milly Hayward

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Some Questions

How our minds work! Sometimes it's really beyond imagination and unfathomable. It can do wonders and create havoc. -Sangeeta Das, Delhi

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Your Voice

Beautiful and creative write my friend. Beautiful.-Troylato

I am a fan of your writings, this piece confirms it.-GaelicRogue

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Bioluminescence

I really love your last stanza. Nice write.-Crystal Hope

Wonderful imagery and an excellent poem. Thanks for posting! -Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet

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Stone-Faced

You might be my favorite poet right now.
No offense any other writers that I totally love...
I just always make it a point to read Satishverma's words.
Always an intrigue... mysterious
Makes me read them over and over again.-Hopefulwoman

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Overbalancing

Well said - a balance is difficult to achieve. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Difficult To Understand

Congratulations
On your 3000th post on PostPoems. Glad you came. It is a nice lantern. - slc-allets

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Gleanings

Ever so humble!-Laura

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A Big Idea?

I liked the poem. While reading I could relate to it. As if the feelings were mine. Thank you.-Tabassum Tahmina Shagufta Hussein

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Backtracking

Thank you for sharing such poem dear poet. Far fetched imagery. Love the underlying theme. You give ur readers the liberty to interpret your poem with the colours of their minds. Regards, Sincerely-Tabassum Tahmina Shagufta Hussein

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Contraptions

Dear poet thank you for such gift. Overwhelming. Beautifully beautiful. Loved each lines. “talking to the clouds” loved, loved n loved it. Thank you. Regards, Sincerely-Tabassum Tahmina Shagufta Hussein

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Silver Trails

Dear Poet, thank you so much. When I was reading your poem, I realised so much to learn. Thank you again for giving readers the liberty to interpret your poem with the colours of our imagination. Regards-Tabassum Tahmina Shagufta Hussein

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Armless Enemies

Contemporary. Feel like composition of words are like a tapestry. An abstract one.
Best regards, Sincerely-Tabassum Tahmina Shagufta Hussein

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Ancient Sins

Beautifully obscure. And the charm of obscurity is hypnotic.
Best regards, Sincerely-Tabassum Tahmina Shagufta Hussein

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Fair Play

An interesting share. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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The Jealous War

Bold and defiant!-Laura

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Dream Hunters

very inspiring and I enjoyed reading it.-Star BG

This is a running water poem, so perfect.-Medusa

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Did I Ask More?

interesting writings-
O God of half eaten
breads, why do you lie
on the petals only?-Mahtab Bangalee

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Mode Of Dying

A sagacious poet’s observation...
“Obligation to the truth”-Laura

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Scissor Hold

Veritas!
A Superb Write!-Laura

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The Eternal Quest

The QUEST goes on, Sir.-R R Gandikota , Kakinada

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Wounded Doves

high powered writing -

Blooded sky bids
sad farewell to humming―
birds. My half-brother
weeps silently.

Taking final call
of human chain, from the
foster god. I return to
my grass roots.-Mahtab Bangalee

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In November

Strong use of imagery that is really affective.-Kylie

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Nonaggression

Stunning lines! Especially, the last two!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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Una Corda

Wonderful and so very profound.
Your words are powerful and your poetic language refreshing. I enjoyed your poem immensely.
Thanks for sharing. -Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet

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Wounded Veils

Ruminative and soulful.
'...why would I become a child? ' -Sangeeta Das, Delhi

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A Scare Comes Back

It's scary to think this may happen again. It only takes one sadistic person with the knowhow to inflict horrible death on people they have never even met. Very topical piece.-Milly Hayward

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For Whom The Moon Spills?

Loved those last two stanzas.-Benjamin Lockwood

I like eject mercy of my veins.-Vanessa Gatley

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Becoming A Legend

am trying to understand
the message... yes
something else should
have happened
in the dying light?
thanks am still
thinking.-Manonton Dalan

Satish, such a well crafted marvelous poem...........-Bernard F. Asuncion

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Mesmerized

Brilliant!-Laura

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The Middle Ground

Thanks for the intriguing read.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Mending The Omens

A suspense and a longing blended in this beautiful piece!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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Message from Star BG

Your poem rewriting script inspired this many blessings.

"I shall borrow your smile,"
and float upon its energetic waters.
My breath merging with yours
as we drift in a realm of no time.

I shall borrow your arms hug,
and let it be my life preserver,
as it catapults self into dreams.

And I shall savor the charge from your heart
that travels inside our kiss.

A kiss that will be anchored in my memories forever.-Star BG

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The Futurist

Some excellent imagery here. A very enjoyable read. I think each of these stanzas stand well together and on their own too.-Milly Hayward

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The Random Bites

Last two lines- extraordinarily extraordinary!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

wonderful diction.-Jayesh

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Somebody Melts

Stunning self realization , amazingly penned!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

beautiful imagery.-Jayesh

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Nobody Will Die

if it is a cosmic joke
you can start laughing at any time.-Hopefulwoman

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A Window Burns

A spurned lover indeed!
An Exceptional write!-Laura

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Evoking Images

Truly evoking imagery and poem.-Sangeeta Das, Delhi

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Eyes In Sky

Death and Birth; beautifully juxtaposed!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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Rewriting The Script

This is about a yearning, at the same time, there is a backdrop of a macabre mystery of sadness in it! Your writes always slip through the reader's fingers, leaving a lot unsaid!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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Giving You Space

Thunderous! An amazing portrayal of helpless separation!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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Untold Journey

Thanks for the poignant read sir.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Moody Effect

You used some fantastic words to describe. Good work.-Crystal Hope

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Closed Chain

nice image. - slc "The pollen in the wind/will not land."-allets

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Different Renderings

Enjoyed this write my friend. Your pen is always on fire!-Troylato

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Traveling Constantly

Somehow, this rings a real bell for me. Probably shouldn't have let that novice steer the ship.-Hopefulwoman

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Trying To Sleep

Captivating!-Laura

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I Don't Need Any Approval

There is so much denial in this, yet positivity is the underlying theme!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

Wonderfully put.-Jayesh

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Possessing You Again

You question Time ( when) . Perhaps you speak of the non existent!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

wonderfully put.-Jayesh

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The Will

a marvelous piece.-Crystal Hope

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Streaking Alone

Quite a thought provoking read. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Two Intersecting Lines

VanGogh's sin! Thunderous piece!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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Flares

Exquisite imagery of nature. One merges into the serenity of mountains. Enjoyed the verses Satish ji.
GSP Rao, Camp Dubai

VERY GOOD POEM.-R R Gandikota , Kakinada

Love the shape of your poem. And for a nature lover like me, such poems are always a treat.-Sangeeta Das, Delhi

Could picturize the bursts of love of springtime - wonderful. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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The Clan

I really can't find the words to adequately describe this poem.
It's like acceptance of self, defence and sorrow all bundled up together.
Regardless. It was fantastic to read.-CJ Maleney

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No Violence

Genderless, Godless- the write veers towards finding something beyond divinity in nothingness!
Ethereal!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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Unrisen Horizon

Lovely poem. -Sangeeta Das, Delhi

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The Great Leap

Stunningly penned; especially the last stanza!-Laura

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Seed Money

great format and message.-Jayesh

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Eternal Verities

I don't understand how people are still under-appreciating your work. I love it still. The sodden hint of formaldehyde touched with a glint of truth and disparity. Well done once more.-Nicholas Browning

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The Blooming Blood

Lovely and creative write my friend!-Troylato

Creative and yet sad. Good writing.-MissSharon

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Massive Explosion

What a well written post my friend! Because of the way I was taught as a child I DO have hope of a fabulous eternity after death with Christ in heaven. And...if what I've been taught is not true, what have I lost to have had faith? BUT....if those who do NOT believe are wrong they face an eternity that will not be pleasant in the least.-MissSharon

Great and creative write my friend!-Troylato

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Feeding Silkworms

Lovely
"Again the mountain
slips. The terrain becomes pathless,
placeless. "
A hauntingly beautiful sentiment.-j.d.wade

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Soaring High

Judging comment:

Oh, another beautiful poem about purpose - one's purpose in life; the ultimate purpose of life; the world's purpose in our own life. I somewhere along the lines, found all these questions in this short and crisp piece. Built on the foundations of sad imagery, the verses take me into a very different world than what the poet himself feels - does poetry only make the poets help realize and put together their thoughts and feelings, or somewhere do we as readers take bits and pieces from them too in our minds, or do they just end up like piled up newspapers - read, abandoned and forgotten in our cupboards. Thank you.-gumshuda

So brilliant. I have been wrestling this question myself of late. You have carved this into the most beautiful question.-Tanya Southey

Wow, this poem is amazing.-Bless_Poet

Congrats on the win!-mossgirl19

Congrats on the win!!-Ren

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Eternality

Judging comment:

Your words have clubbed in a mixture of mystery and curiousity in its every line. Having read this piece multiple times, I am still left wondering if this piece talks of a personal dilemma or contains some hidden deeper meaning in it that needs to be found by the reader.-gumshuda

Congrats on the win.-Mark

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Will Meet Again

Raw and thundering!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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In Disguise

Thanks for the intriguing disguise. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

POEM IN... DISGUISE ! -R R Gandikota , Hyderabad

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Receive Your Children

A powerful write my friend.-MissSharon

Great write, love the style!-Troylato

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* The Dead Tiger

Mindblowing sir... Short of words to comment...-Indranil Bhaduri

Striking imagery here.-Yacov Mitchenko

the nesting eagles, I choose
this bitter absurdity of large wings
under the sun, where they will announce the shade,

a lonely patch of life, of signature
kill of future, the metamorphosis of a street
into unending wait;
-----
powerful words great imagery painted! ! ! -Catrina Heart

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Unending Rope

I enjoy your poetry sir. I am intrigued that you never comment on the poems of others. Whatever the case, keep posting and I shall continue to read.-spinner

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Taboos

Hmm.... so I had to look up "aperitif" and I found out it is an alcoholic beverage taken before a meal to stimulate the appetite.

I feel a sense of uneasiness in this piece. Like you are purposefully familiarizing yourself with this darkness, this alcohol that consumes you, and instead of having that control of how much you consume, you drown in it.

Something I admire about your poetry is that it so distinct yet I often have to read lines again because I could take several interpretations. Perhaps there is only one meaning, but when I read the short verses you write I have this sense you put every word in place for a specific purpose.

When I read this, I felt like I was falling, that sense of remorse yet not being able to pick myself up. That loss of substance, "no flesh", "cleaning the words on the whiteboard" - perhaps the inner voice of your mind.

Okay, so now after almost finishing my comment and reading again, I see you have placed this in the "nature/environment" category. I'm tying this to being immersed in that darkness/alcohol with being immersed in a flood. There's a sense of hopelessness too.

Really interesting piece.-Poet on the Piano

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Come Again

...and the warring
struggles continue...
Excellent!-Laura

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Dying Art

I don't always understand the contexts of your poetry but it is always captivating and most thought provoking and this is no exception.-Milly Hayward

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Foetus Was Not Moving

This poem is full
of haunting symbolism. Excellent write.-and_hera_met_zeus

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Sides Of The Truth

Swallow all the darkness
of crying earth, I impel your
nails to scratch the sun........touching expression with nice theme. Beautiful poem.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Frightening

Can visualize the turbulence all around, frightening. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Disoriented

I really enjoyed this piece and if you read it over you can take different things from it.
Regards.-CJ Maleney

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I Survive You

WoW!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

Such a deep write, beautiful style and the words just hit hard. Fantastic work!-Em MacKenzie

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Looming Large

nice poetry. loved the tittle looming large and in put of nature as this was very effective.-lowpoem 

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Tempestuous

Wonderful.-abstractempo

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Relics Of Words

nice stanza-
Let the mother resolve,
who was the immortal son
of the bruised earth.-Mahtab Bangalee

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Frightening

Can visualize the turbulence all around, frightening. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Incinerated

As always a curious and deep piece.-Michael

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Unheavenly

Great piece.-Crystal Hope

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Sacred Committment

Delightful verses, Satish ji, graphic in imagery and an undercurrent of affection.-GSP Rao, Hyderabad

Quite moving. Good poem.-R R Gandikota , Hyderabad

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In Trepidation

This is a well written beautiful write. I always enjoy your work my friend!-Troylato

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Looming Large

The Assumption
Is that there are garden prayers and that butterflies can declare them over (on the surface). The thing about personal imagery is the puzzle and the internal codes which I totally agree the reader can not be written in or permitted access. All that survives is undaunted and unsuppressed emotion - not too shabby. - allets

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Many Injuries

Concealing the wall
yellow lilies try to bluff me
from underground. Spring was
still afar.

The second existence
was not possible. Trying to
go again for a trial......so touching and impressive. Beautiful poem.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Demanding Answers After The Chemical Attacks In Damascus

Such A Powerful Title
And a map to the imagery of Satish the poet. Wowed! - allets

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Some Stupidity

For Those
Who do mayhem and disrupt the calm, this poem - allets

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My China Broke

Everything you write that I read hits notes so deep.- Hopefulwoman

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Consecrating Muse

Great expression. It is here that the mythology and reality meet. Thanks:
Indeed you discover
Yourself, reading the myth of modern
Sisyphus and floating rock.-Rajnish Manga

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A Noble Life

I feel like I've read this before. Something strikes me like deja vu. Very intimate to me, thank you.-abstractempo

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Disturbances

Excellent writing Satish
Thank you for sharing.-Mario, Lucien, Rene Odekerken

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Endless Search

Thank you for the interesting share. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Some Stupidity

For Those
Who do mayhem and disrupt the calm, this poem.-allets

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Wrapped In Stigma

Interesting and thought provoking write my friend. I enjoyed the read.-MissSharon

Awesome write my friend!-Troylato

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Unanimously

a fantastic piece. Very good work!-Crystal Hope

"A chilling meet begins between the sparring wheels" What a statement. Thank you.-abstractempo

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Fighting One Another

I feel a presence.
Jessamine's smile.
A bright planet was going to
take birth. Nobody wants
to be left behind. I take the pen........so touching and impressive. A beautiful poem nicely executed.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Absurd Myths

I liked this and the questions it raised.-Mr. Darcy

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Battered Faith

Very stark. An accurate read for today's feel. Thank you for the vocab.-abstractempo

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The Sterility

Very good poem, enjoyed reading it.
Couldn't help but notice in the second stanza last line, is "thruths" suppose to be "truths"?-Fenrir

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To Know Not To Know

Two sides of a coin. You
take turn to kiss the hands
of benevolent god.........here is the essence o the poem. A beautiful poem shared amazingly.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Blue Valley

A typical poem needing a number of reads before being comprehended. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Reviled And Revered

Love this style and wonderful write!-Troylato

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Returning Your Message

A fantastic write.-Crystal Hope

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Waiting To Happen

Sometimes the inner sorrowful situation of a castle is something opposite of what we see from outside.... am glad to read it from you....thanks for sharing Sir :)-Tahsin.Z

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Being The Untruth

The poem is a treat for the mind. Brain and the heart will have to work overtime
to come to terms of these poetic expressions. Thanks, Satish Sir. -Rajnish Manga

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Reverberations

I hope the lonely man rises from the ashes and lives another cycle. Enjoyed your poem sir.-spinner

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The Nature

Enjoyed the dissection of true nature. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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I Want Bliss

Your vision is remarkable, Dear Poet. For example:
What does the silence
say? You need to erect a
god's temple on funeral ground?-Rajnish Manga

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Give Me Something

The silence opening up the blood trails that stayed with me how we weep.-Robin Carretti

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Was It A Warning?

My comment couldn’t do justice. Poetry here, Poet.-Persephone

"Love was an execution
drug. It works
inside, not outside. "
Astounding observation!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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In Deep Anguish

Your writing is fantastic.-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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Light Was Failing

Very good! The last stanza, great end lines.-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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No Snobbery

Satish,
oh this is very good indeed!
Particularly like:
"No words will follow me
I am going unwritten. "-Unsub

Excellent point of view!
Snobbery eliminated!-Laura

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A Poem

Great write! Loved the flow of these spoken thoughts!-Troylato

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Prophesying

Excellently executed! -Laura

I wish I could understand this.-abstractempo

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No Snobbery

Satish,
oh this is very good indeed!
Particularly like:
"No words will follow me
I am going unwritten. "-Unsub

Excellent point of view!
Snobbery eliminated!-Laura

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Was It A Warning?

"Love was an execution
drug. It works
inside, not outside. "
Astounding observation!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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It Is Absurd

sounds like an intense
sounds like an intense situation. The imagery of the anarchist in the cauldron is stark. I like this poem.-fuche_bu

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Burning Across The Sky

Very realistic, you can relay your re-actions to the mood stating.-Domic Sands

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It Comes

First off you have used a great deal of grammar that is simplistic to taste. I liked the flow. Further, you have grown in your work as an artist type poet. Really liking your work. Words of nicely woven linguistic terms. Fashioned in a great experience type work you got here. Try reaching out to your fan base it may surprise you. Even you who may think otherwise. This piece is wonderful in its presentation. Lastly, subjects change and there maybe a pattern to this equation. Mark the one willing to let go & explore.
This incredible piece makes one really think. About the seasons the air we breath and the touch of a hand to hold. Savor each memory that is presented. I may come across as being cold at times but i really have a special place in my heart for poetry. Everyday i search for the latest poem that comes across feeling very positive to me. Grasping the dear message that each poem has been presented. you show your growth with each delicate penned piece that I come across reading. Thank you for the chance to have read.-Mario Vitale

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