Disturbed Age

Quite a bit of food for thought, thank you.-Lawless

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Marigolds

An interesting share. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Endless Yearning

The stream must drink its own
The stream must drink its own water to survive. Nice poem.-fuche_bu

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Thinking Off •••

of course, I'd help to think through the meanings with you and help guide each towards a better life. hand in hand of course. great writing, my friend.-kevin browne

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Squeezing Out

Medusa is an old friend. Mythology is just that, a myth. Stories told are just that, stories. I'm living the apparent and the stillness is what I seek.-Lawless

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In Trepidation

I await the consequences. I have caused torment.-Lawless

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Condensation

Always intriguing. And thought provoking - allets

Sunbeams sound nice... and warm. Your writings are always so intriguing.-Hopefulwoman

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When Horizon Meets The Moon

Why do you talk
without words? The prophecy
of a hollow bust comes
true. You become your own enemy.

After war there is a war.
Can you find peace in my verse? ......intensive expression. Beautiful poem shared amazingly. Thank u sir.-Kumarmani Mahakul

Fine imagery...vividly penned thoughts...10++++.-Jez Brul

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Conceiving

An sublime composition. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Preface

Extraordinary as always.-Lawless

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Updated

Loved it! Hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - SSmoothie

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Reviled And Revered

Favorite of favorites. My ancestors' skulls thank you.-Lawless

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Benevolence

Like a two faced monster, your poem unveils the ambivalence of benevolence. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Unyielding

"Sexism was chasing a
gibbous moon whole night.
I ask the virtuous dark,
will you be a hangman?"

Equating sexism to darkness (evil) - like it.

"Targeted love was a bliss
for a dying man. You need
to walk on a fine line to
attain the liberation."

I need help understanding this stanza. How I interpret it - a dying man's last wish was for love, but most likely is not willing to take the necessary steps to open up to it, or be patient enough with another to allow it to happen.

"Despite the coveted prize,
killing was more convenient.
There hangs a tale, you
cannot play the tune again. "

Instead of pursuing the love, he gave in to his contentment and "killed" love by neglecting or otherwise not "attaining" it. (At this point I realized that the man might be "the darkness" personified as "sexism" in the first stanza; maybe his "sexism" (misogyny) is the preventative force of his failure to love or be loved). EDIT: By neglecting or not otherwise attaining love, his having "killed" love (personified via the moon, his lover) has removed love from (at least) his world forever, therefore he is no longer able to "play the tune" again. Also, making a reference back to the first stanza's "will you be a hangman" line with the line "there hangs a tale" - love that, too.

"Without the hyphen, the
other side becomes blue.
A belief starts the tremors
in the sleeves of a headless moon."

This stanza confused me more than the second one. Not in a "it doesn't make sense" kind of way, but in a "WHAT COULD IT MEAN??" kind of way. My interpretation - I honestly have no idea what the hyphen refers to, but I'm guessing that either the moon or a lifeless 'corpse' (the corpse being love, in this context) turning blue; really good imagery, by the way, either way it goes. His "belief(s)" that "start the tremors" being his sexism again, the tremors representing the disgust felt by the "headless moon" (which might represent either love personified, or the potential lover, at this point; I'm not certain), or the tremors might represent the last feelings of the corpse that is love/the lover being traumatic, maybe the tremors are both because of trauma and disgust. Hard to say.

I don't always dig deep into a specific poem, but when I do, I'm full of ideas that are probably all incorrect. Sorry in advance if I'm misinterpreting it. Lol!

Good write! Saving this to my favorites list.-Terthas

Welcome to a brilliant realm. You will not receive a reply from the teacher. The teacher only teaches. Over 2,000 entries here, he has only his work to share.

We have much to learn, not only here, but from everywhere.-Lawless

I see. Lol.-Terthas

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Moon Burning

I wish I could understand the
I wish I could understand the last line but I don’t need to, thats the joy of this piece :) Blessingss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
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Forces Unseen

Another strong work!
Another strong work! Blessingss
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Appropriatly Speaking

I do love your works this one
I do love your works this one especially the last line fulfills the poems intension perfectly! Blessingss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
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Hidden Sojourns

Satish, such a fantastic write.-Bernard F. Asuncion

You always think of the windows,
When the doors were shut.
Beautiful lines. Well crafted poem.-Nudershada Cabanes

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The Assaulter

Thumbs up!! Keep writing and responding to other posts. -Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi

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Being Watched

Very relevant to many circumstances. You are quite the teacher, for this I thank you.-Lawless

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Oh God

We await the opening or the door slammed shut.-Lawless

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After Eyebaths

Wonderfully executed poem. Enjoyed it.-Nudershada Cabanes

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The Drowning

Yes, we are all caught in this world Drowning. Lovely imagery. TFS, Satish Verma ji.-Leonard Dabydeen, Brampton, Ontario, Canada

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Little By Little

Excellent poem Satish, Thank you for sharing.-Mario, Lucien, Rene Odekerken

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Threnodial

This is very interesting. I'm curious to know what inspired you to write this. -Kay 

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Seminal

A philosophical poem sir. Keep sharing your thoughts. -Annapurna Sharma, Vijayawada

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Being Watched

Very relevant to many circumstances. You are quite the teacher, for this I thank you.-Lawless

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Unforgiving

I see the sight, please keep writing.-Hope

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Myth of Suicide

Pathos well expressed in words. TFS. -Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi

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Climbing

This is a unique expression of rebirth. Even as flowers will have to wither to give way to fruits, and ultimately seeds, or as in the mythical bird, the Phoenix, which rose from the ashes after being burned, or the pine cone that has to be grazed by fire in order to sprout. A thought-provoking poem.-Editorial Board

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Being Watched

Very relevant to many circumstances. You are quite the teacher, for this I thank you.-Lawless

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Walking in the woods

A thought provoking read sir. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Bruised Spots

Beautiful, I wish I could understand the darkness.-Hope

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Only To Live

Satish, such a good poem.-Bernard F. Asuncion

The last part of the poem is an absolute beauty.-Rajnish Manga

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Misdemeanor

It’s slightly elusive but very well written, I enjoyed the read.-Mark Heathcote

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Nothing Left To Hide

This is a nature poem at its best! I like the combination of nature, the seasons and the human emotions all meld together bringing out a write of vivid imagery and talent. There is a weight
of sadness behind each line and it takes the reader along with the writer on a journey. A captivating write.-Meena Krish

Oh wow this is fascinating.-Em (marmite)

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Cutting Edge

A thought provoking and cutting edge read sir. Happy Holi sir!-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Each word has been inked with heartfelt pain. Your pen has immense power, sir. Keep writing and responding to other posts.-Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi

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Interactive

Sounds Like
Trump's Presidency - I'm jus sayin'.-allets

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It Was No Magic

Fugitives
"the names of fugitives" - I see my poetry as that too.-allets 

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An Elegy

"paper thoughts"
Never saw writing that way - works for me nicely.-allets 

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From The Edge

It Is Good
To read a poem and come away emoting and not knowing why.-allets 

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Kidnapped

About Time
"...the /mystery of the clock..." Lovin' me some great time images.-allets 

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The Eternal Quest

I really like this piece. Thanks for posting.-Terthas

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Downhill Journey

Excellent write. Thank you so much for sharing it with us here.-Derena

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Broken Armour

oh i like the message of the poem, the many keys to surviving in this world good piece of writing.-sette 

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Killing Yourself

Not
a happy poem - sitll reading u.-allets

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Where Dreams Live

Simple Image
"The books are our god." So much hangs on "books" - allets

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Flying Glass Shards

Thanks for the stirring share.-Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi

Soul-stirring!! -Chirasree Bose, Hyderabad

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