Mode Of Dying

A sagacious poet’s observation...
“Obligation to the truth”-Laura

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Scissor Hold

Veritas!
A Superb Write!-Laura

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The Eternal Quest

The QUEST goes on, Sir.-R R Gandikota , Kakinada

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Wounded Doves

high powered writing -

Blooded sky bids
sad farewell to humming―
birds. My half-brother
weeps silently.

Taking final call
of human chain, from the
foster god. I return to
my grass roots.-Mahtab Bangalee

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In November

Strong use of imagery that is really affective.-Kylie

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Nonaggression

Stunning lines! Especially, the last two!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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Una Corda

Wonderful and so very profound.
Your words are powerful and your poetic language refreshing. I enjoyed your poem immensely.
Thanks for sharing. -Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet

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Wounded Veils

Ruminative and soulful.
'...why would I become a child? ' -Sangeeta Das, Delhi

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A Scare Comes Back

It's scary to think this may happen again. It only takes one sadistic person with the knowhow to inflict horrible death on people they have never even met. Very topical piece.-Milly Hayward

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For Whom The Moon Spills?

Loved those last two stanzas.-Benjamin Lockwood

I like eject mercy of my veins.-Vanessa Gatley

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Becoming A Legend

am trying to understand
the message... yes
something else should
have happened
in the dying light?
thanks am still
thinking.-Manonton Dalan

Satish, such a well crafted marvelous poem...........-Bernard F. Asuncion

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Mesmerized

Brilliant!-Laura

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The Middle Ground

Thanks for the intriguing read.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Mending The Omens

A suspense and a longing blended in this beautiful piece!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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Message from Star BG

Your poem rewriting script inspired this many blessings.

"I shall borrow your smile,"
and float upon its energetic waters.
My breath merging with yours
as we drift in a realm of no time.

I shall borrow your arms hug,
and let it be my life preserver,
as it catapults self into dreams.

And I shall savor the charge from your heart
that travels inside our kiss.

A kiss that will be anchored in my memories forever.-Star BG

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The Futurist

Some excellent imagery here. A very enjoyable read. I think each of these stanzas stand well together and on their own too.-Milly Hayward

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The Random Bites

Last two lines- extraordinarily extraordinary!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

wonderful diction.-Jayesh

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Somebody Melts

Stunning self realization , amazingly penned!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

beautiful imagery.-Jayesh

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Nobody Will Die

if it is a cosmic joke
you can start laughing at any time.-Hopefulwoman

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A Window Burns

A spurned lover indeed!
An Exceptional write!-Laura

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Evoking Images

Truly evoking imagery and poem.-Sangeeta Das, Delhi

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Eyes In Sky

Death and Birth; beautifully juxtaposed!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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Rewriting The Script

This is about a yearning, at the same time, there is a backdrop of a macabre mystery of sadness in it! Your writes always slip through the reader's fingers, leaving a lot unsaid!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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Giving You Space

Thunderous! An amazing portrayal of helpless separation!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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Untold Journey

Thanks for the poignant read sir.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Moody Effect

You used some fantastic words to describe. Good work.-Crystal Hope

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Closed Chain

nice image. - slc "The pollen in the wind/will not land."-allets

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Different Renderings

Enjoyed this write my friend. Your pen is always on fire!-Troylato

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Traveling Constantly

Somehow, this rings a real bell for me. Probably shouldn't have let that novice steer the ship.-Hopefulwoman

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Trying To Sleep

Captivating!-Laura

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I Don't Need Any Approval

There is so much denial in this, yet positivity is the underlying theme!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

Wonderfully put.-Jayesh

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Possessing You Again

You question Time ( when) . Perhaps you speak of the non existent!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

wonderfully put.-Jayesh

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The Will

a marvelous piece.-Crystal Hope

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Streaking Alone

Quite a thought provoking read. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Two Intersecting Lines

VanGogh's sin! Thunderous piece!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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Flares

Exquisite imagery of nature. One merges into the serenity of mountains. Enjoyed the verses Satish ji.
GSP Rao, Camp Dubai

VERY GOOD POEM.-R R Gandikota , Kakinada

Love the shape of your poem. And for a nature lover like me, such poems are always a treat.-Sangeeta Das, Delhi

Could picturize the bursts of love of springtime - wonderful. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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The Clan

I really can't find the words to adequately describe this poem.
It's like acceptance of self, defence and sorrow all bundled up together.
Regardless. It was fantastic to read.-CJ Maleney

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No Violence

Genderless, Godless- the write veers towards finding something beyond divinity in nothingness!
Ethereal!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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Unrisen Horizon

Lovely poem. -Sangeeta Das, Delhi

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The Great Leap

Stunningly penned; especially the last stanza!-Laura

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