I have not read a lot of your work or even know the volumnity of it... but I really appreciate this piece the “tantra” allusion in the first stanza and the 100 lamp et al further along possibly from the gospel parables. Nice. High level stuff. This is New Yorker quality...-ishmael
Monday, September 30, 2019
There Was No Prelude
I detect a hint of Dylan Thomas here, but I need to linger on this awhile.. I am interested. This is good ...goood.-ishmael
I'm letting this one sink in more.-JacieStralkoDuca
I'm letting this one sink in more.-JacieStralkoDuca
Sunday, September 29, 2019
The Essence
Such a perceptive piece of work, sir Satish...-Bernard F. Asuncion
" All the comings
and goings were vague
who will stand the ground."
An intricate life song, philosophical as also intriguing. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik
" All the comings
and goings were vague
who will stand the ground."
An intricate life song, philosophical as also intriguing. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik
Hurricane Lamp
An interesting story of the lamp... TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Friday, September 27, 2019
Classical Entry
If this doesn't win, I'll be very, very. I dunno. mad.-nourayasmine
Nostalgic Return
Hmm, interesting portrayal of nostalgia... TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Thursday, September 26, 2019
My commitment
Interesting commitment. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Wednesday, September 25, 2019
Divine Revelation
Through awakening we should perceive the new horizon of life. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned.-Kumarmani Mahakul
Monday, September 23, 2019
Don't Touch The Black Sun
Hope has no flesh in the black sun and we should not touch. You have penned an excellent and wonderful poem.-Kumarmani Mahakul
I Will Speak
Very good poem, Varma Ji-R R Gandikota , Kakinada
Good, found at least a way to release the locked up emos...TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Good, found at least a way to release the locked up emos...TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Sunday, September 22, 2019
Nothingness
Were you loyal
to humanity? What was
religion of god? the religion of God. dear Satish Verma, you are redifining God and religion with this simple question. thank u dear .. -Drtony Brahmin
to humanity? What was
religion of god? the religion of God. dear Satish Verma, you are redifining God and religion with this simple question. thank u dear .. -Drtony Brahmin
Thursday, September 19, 2019
Avatar
though forgetting self
but the revelation
yeah; its pull the self out to the.........../// wonderful expression.-Mahtab Bangalee
but the revelation
yeah; its pull the self out to the.........../// wonderful expression.-Mahtab Bangalee
Wednesday, September 18, 2019
Truth Hides Behind Sun
Profound and very well penned. I really like this one very much....Peace..-Mike Mezz
Deceiving Self
Learning any art with responsibility is important. Death is truth and learning this art is also excellent...10-Kumarmani Mahakul
Arts In Telling
A question is always a question. An answer is never an answer.-James Michael
Tuesday, September 17, 2019
Monday, September 16, 2019
Believing In Myths
Arrival of spirit is noted by time. An excellent poem is very brilliantly penned.-Kumarmani Mahakul
Against The Tide
Unwritten Affair
As If Life Has Stopped
Sacred Horse
In depth lines... TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellor
Sunday, September 15, 2019
Saturday, September 14, 2019
Friday, September 13, 2019
Straight From Dark
AH ! HIDE & SEEK* ! THE ATTEMPTED - MEASUREMENT* of ETERNITY* = ( MAYA ) ! . . . . . . .-OUTBACKS
No Epilogue
Sell The Mocking Birds
Perhaps selling the mockingbird is a more serious offence than ' killing' it! Explosive write!-Sukanya Sinha Roy
Courtesies
Intrigue of intrigue
I never know quite what to say. I just keep reading you everyday. And I always reread what you've had to say.-Morningglory
I never know quite what to say. I just keep reading you everyday. And I always reread what you've had to say.-Morningglory
Fall In November
Profound lines. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellor
Thursday, September 12, 2019
The Crescent Moon
A streak of light breaks the myth and The Crescent Moon motivates poetic mind. An excellent poem is well penned.-Kumarmani Mahakul
Wednesday, September 11, 2019
Myths Of Ariel
Deep.
gravity the cause of our demise,
pulling and dragging us down
to look into its eyes
bring us down to it's size.....
life.-Faizel Farzee
gravity the cause of our demise,
pulling and dragging us down
to look into its eyes
bring us down to it's size.....
life.-Faizel Farzee
Not A Dream
i have to come back and read many time to understand this one. i will leave comment soon-Truth Bringer
Monday, September 9, 2019
Sunday, September 8, 2019
This Panorama
Blatant expressions of the darker side. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Friday, September 6, 2019
Motionless
A short but most intimate trip down the memory lane. Thanks for sharing.-Ratnakar Mandlik
Not Like Anybody
I really like this free form verse. Short, but deeply moving.-Willys Watson
Preternaturally
Proclaming
i am loving the line fishing in an aquarium was prohibited. how are you coming up with strokes of genius?-Truth Bringer
Wednesday, September 4, 2019
Exodus
At The End Of Game
The fools create their drama
they offered me free entry and participation
I kindly deferred their offer, said I had prior arrangements
they said you must come for its all about you
but you know me not, I replied in earnest, for indeed they don't
don't know any of you from Adam and I don't care to know
oh!, never mind that, they replied...we made it all up
we're good at fabricating, distorting and creating fake news
and so its our drama and we'll have it, with or without you
Do whatever you like, I said to them
I do not have the requirements or qualification to participate
in a Fools Drama by Fools.........-Yenson I Can't.....
Love...
I hear your words
And my heart feels
How I wish love was always real!-Traveler
they offered me free entry and participation
I kindly deferred their offer, said I had prior arrangements
they said you must come for its all about you
but you know me not, I replied in earnest, for indeed they don't
don't know any of you from Adam and I don't care to know
oh!, never mind that, they replied...we made it all up
we're good at fabricating, distorting and creating fake news
and so its our drama and we'll have it, with or without you
Do whatever you like, I said to them
I do not have the requirements or qualification to participate
in a Fools Drama by Fools.........-Yenson I Can't.....
Love...
I hear your words
And my heart feels
How I wish love was always real!-Traveler
Every Moment
Time has the
wings of golden eagle. It
flies on the peaks of thoughts - candid shot. An insightful read. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
wings of golden eagle. It
flies on the peaks of thoughts - candid shot. An insightful read. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore
Tuesday, September 3, 2019
Convulsions
Death is a natural process. It comes on way. Death is truth for all. This is a very brilliant poem well penned.-Kumarmani Mahakul
Your Tresses Of Night Shade
When we meet at the end of the road, may our faith not be separated by ‘the headstones’! May we be enriched by that ‘bronzed man’!-Laura
Beautiful words from you. We shall all meet with the truth one day and accept everything.-dusk arising
Beautiful words from you. We shall all meet with the truth one day and accept everything.-dusk arising
Uprooting Dandelions
Interesting
Intriguing title.
Poem blew my mind.-vjochum
dandelions
Intruguing as always. Read you every night.-Morningglory
Intriguing title.
Poem blew my mind.-vjochum
dandelions
Intruguing as always. Read you every night.-Morningglory
Monday, September 2, 2019
The Solemn Pledge
First two stanzas: portrayal of an immense space and fleshless- ness!
A truly wonderful take on spiritually!-Sukanya Sinha Roy
A truly wonderful take on spiritually!-Sukanya Sinha Roy
The Land Pulls
An exceptional write as always!
Accepting our failures as well as we do our accomplishments...
is an accomplishment!-Laura
Accepting our failures as well as we do our accomplishments...
is an accomplishment!-Laura
Sunday, September 1, 2019
Dwarfing
We have become stupid with our pursuits. The sculptor creates art, where others fail to grasp its beauty.
I just never know where my mind will go when I read your poetry. Poetry being the key word. Something lost at times in this chat room which I selfishly enjoy.-James Michael
I just never know where my mind will go when I read your poetry. Poetry being the key word. Something lost at times in this chat room which I selfishly enjoy.-James Michael
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