Paralyzed Words

All desires have become
wants. And anonymous hurts convert
into scars of an unhappy life.
How true it is!-Padma, Hyderabad

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Near The Sun

The enlightened message of your poem was very touching. One the world should sing in dark days such as these to inspire hope again. Thank you for sharing your poem with us.-Carlos Lorenzo Estrada

Some great imagery here. I felt as though I was in the heat of the desert with no shade to provide escape from the burning sun. The coolness of night would have been most welcome.-Chris Shaw

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The Fabulous Dream

The current scenario and dreadful life are well depicted, Satish jee!-Padma, Hyderabad

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The Fabulous Dream

very good.-pratanubanerjee

This world IS too much, and the last line hits home... Brilliant work! 🥀-mdelleviolette

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Drowned Faith

Such a beautiful poem packed with many emotions and effects, Satish jee!-Padma, Hyderabad, Dec 23, 2021

Sir, its a true learning experience to read your work. this one conveys intensity of emotions words and images.-N K Jyothi, Mumbai

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Stillness Prevails

pure beautiful poetry Satish that I need not understand anymore than the wind in the reeds and yet sense somewhere that I do.. -Dale Costello, Australia

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Poem On Thorns

Excellent dear poet!-Dr Dillip K Swain

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Standing In Queue

It was the carnage of moment.
The brutality of its strength
casts spell.

There was a quick about-face.
Dark night
will paint your face, with stars.'
(a great write
thanks for sharing, dear Poet)-L. B. Mek

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Coding An Ocean

As they say, silence speaks volumes.
I have a question. In the third stanza, will it perhaps be "a simple touch" instead of "a simile touch"?
I could be very wrong though, so forgive me if I am.
A good sad write, in just a few words. Enjoyed reading it!-Shruti

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Let It Go Hollyhock

A beautiful smile to react
with my voiceless noise, the book
of an unprinted epic of grief.
In a happy moment, grief is smoothly expressed.-Padma, Hyderabad

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The Meaning Tremble

sheer Poetic, sublime
I'm in love!
with that last stanza..
how very kind of you
to choose to share
your poetic genius, Guru!
thank you.-L. B. Mek

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Roses Don't Bleed

It's the language of poetry. -mdelleviolette

These posts still make no goddamn sense but at the same time they do.-eyeofvortexyt

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Stillness Prevails

Brilliant!!!-L. B. Mek

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Soldiers in Line

Ah! What an expression, Satish jee! There's no end to water in eyes! Every stanza talks about pain.-Padma, Hyderabad

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Travesty Of Stars

Daybreak, awakens
to shade our nightmares
into reality's scenes..
Moon hides, till our eyes
can be blanketed in stardust, dreams
we the pinnacle of Earthly evolution
merely, tadpoles on fishhooks
in the face
of a universe's, true might..
(a brilliant write!
thanks for sharing, Guru)-L. B. Mek

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A River In Your Eyes

The story of tears and feelings boldly said, Satish jee!-Padma, Hyderabad

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Some Fairy Tale

so morbidly true,
there are so many who profit from other's pain
whilst complaining
about the stresses and strife, in their lives.-L. B. Mek

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Taking Sand Bath

but we still gather
either side, of that same locked door:
some who believe in miracles
others
who are adamant about merit...
(in the words of the great Li Bai:
'Lifting my head I gaze at the bright moon
Bowing my head, thinking of home.')
another brilliant write
thanks for sharing, Guru!-L. B. Mek

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Incendiary Dreams

There is no pain when
sunsets. I will find my peace
in the darkness of a burning heart.
These words are inspirational and encouraging, Satish jee.-Padma , Hyderabad

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Not Like Me

Fantastic. I am very impressed. To say so much with so few words is a true talent. Please, keep it up.-C E Thomas

Such powerful imagery and the second stanza so beautifully penned.-woundedheart

never go to sleep angry, we agreed
and so
we've spent weeks, without sleep
so I'll hold the bell
you - pull the cord, we'll
ring-in our submission
at the same time;
and let the moon, spotlight
another's, stubborn romance...-L. B. Mek

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In God's Shadow

I believe that one Absolute is that God, Shiva, Allah, YHWH,
Higher power, is LOVE and that God indwells each being, embodied
or not. i am grateful that you are here. Are you the most prolific
of all the poets here?-saiom

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In Emptiness

always an interesting and worthwhile read Satish.. cheers DC.Dale Costello, Australia

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Cosmetic Effect

when hypocrites, dare
to test limits
in their hypocritical faiths
then, pause - remembering
that taste of failure's regrets
'to infinity and beyond: onwards
to indignation's, spatial nations'.-L. B. Mek

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Trapped Wishes

you, at your subtle poetic best
poetry to meditate over
than merely read,
thank you, Guru.-L. B. Mek

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Pray For the Observer

Most of our lives is spent living , very few observe objectively and among those very few are able to act in a constructive fashion. As usual strong symbolic poetry Sir.-N K Jyothi, Mumbai

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Under The Lens

This is so beautiful and graceful. Thanks.-KlineXcreed

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Message from saiom, https://www.postpoems.org/

Dear Satish,
Does your name mean God is truth?
I had the honor of visiting india for 2 months in this life and
my guru said that I had lived in india 500 years ago
I am disturbed by the precipitate decline in guests in the last month and wonder if there are any poets you could invite to join us
Thank you for being here and for your prolific pen.-saiom

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Hyperaesthesia

a friend is experiencing hyperaesthesia now
' You generate your
own rains to wash the stains.' beautiful
dear Satish please invite fellow poets to join us here, including those
ho have not yet penned a poem.-saiom

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Cascades

Short, yet the wording has a nice touch to it so it works. Good job!-debtoroftrust

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Gordian Knot

'The elected path
haunts us. Where the moon
sinks in dark sky'..
and we ask, who - elected?
just so we have an answer
to lament over...
(sadly most of your context in this write was lost to me, but still
a wonderfully weaved poem,
thank you for sharing: Guru)-L. B. Mek

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To Tell The Truth

beautiful
'Cannot hear your echoes
from the valley of tears.'-saiom

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Were You A Maneater?

Waiting and expectation will definitely trouble anyone. You expressed it well, Satish jee.-Padma, Hyderabad

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Were You A Maneater?

Love the word usage and also the 'complex simplicity' in your writing. Well done!-debtoroftrust

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Moonlight Through The Filters

no matter how bleak or macabre
its underlying, nihilistic content
when its written: this poetic
it can only be inspirational, as Art!
(another great write
thanks for sharing, Guru!)
'In moment
of hubris, all chandeliers
will crash
and prehistoric dirt, will cling
to hairy legs.'
brilliant imagery,
how deeply your metaphors
can be excavated, to mine
the treasure's in your wisdom-L. B. Mek

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How to Say, Salaam?

I feel the role of a human being is well explained here and violent thoughts about a person too are informed precisely, Satish jee. Well written.-Padma, Hyderabad

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Shrine Was Beautiful

The poem justify the beauty Bravo/1-LeeAnn Azzopardi

Beautifully written poem. Compliments.-Aarzoo Mehek

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Night Is Done

What beautiful language you use.-David Wood

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Laws Of Chemistry

Nice, Satish. "Wipe off the dream"-allets

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I Will Cry Silently

Luck matters for everyone. A good poem, Satish jee.-Padma, Hyderabad

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Your Thoughts Live Around Me

Periodically, you stretch and find the exact combination of sounds and subjects. The last two cracker (fractured) Haiku ran over me and left me in the tall grass. Deah as female. You rock!-allets

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Who did not Die?

A good poem and emotions well expressed, Satish jee.-Padma, Hyderabad

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All The Dreams

Grapevines don't grow in the dark. They need sunlight.-Sharkylang

Poetry, depicting
the grapevine of outed: Trust
betrayal's whispers, in the dark
aiming for the moonlight
of ambition's thread marks;
voicing
our lacking capacity, to comprehend and empathise
with all the abundant suffering, that surrounds...
this be inking of poetic tears
a cry of despair
for the trajectory of humanity
in our perpetuated abyss of stagnated
'black stones
globalised Angst
of Nothingness'
(a great write
thanks for sharing
Guru!)-L. B. Mek

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My Story

some poetry, just surpasses
whatever praise we could - ever, come up with
and so, all we can do
is read and accept: gratefully
with the utmost sincerity..
thank you, Guru!
'This, was exotic.
A single
drop, throbs
in space.
I walk on blades.

I think farther
from―
The relics of disasters.
You, love
to read palms, Talking
of slaughter

moon, bled to death
when, you left in dark.'-L. B. Mek

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Your Journey

'Upgrading clock
was not a wise decision.
Who will read the past?'
(fast forwarding your timing, a foolish mistake,
qualifying your future's timing, a silly decision...
trying to progress, without first
knowing yourself
a formula for failure,
aspiring for what you can become
without acknowledging, where
you came from
a choice, you're bound to regret...)
and all these, just trying to unfurl your first stanza...
A great write! Guru.-L. B. Mek

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In Cross-Hairs

Crimson fog
Nice.-allets

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You Are Being Watched

• Inheriting a non religion, carrying stones on wings―you wanted to fly.

Obviously, you're not talking to me, since none of that applies to me, my reaction was, "Why send this to me? So who is it meant for? Let's begin with, what's a non religion? Obviously, not a religion, but doesn't that mean every field but religion?

Sure, you have intent for how it's to be taken, but does intent make it to the page? No. Does the reader have the smallest shred of context? Again no. So by the end of the first stanza the reader is confused, and a confused reader closes the cover, because there is no second first-impression.

• In the hot and humid land, a cult grows in one's own squeezed moon, playing with words.

The problem with talking to the reader is that every word makes sense...to you. But... "The" hot and humid land? There's only one? Naa. "A cult grows." So that only happens in a hot and humid land? Naaa.

Sure, it makes sense to you, because for you every word points to ideas, images, and events, all stored and waiting in your mind. But for the reader, every word points to ideas, images, and events, all stored and waiting in *YOUR* mind. And if only you were there to ask when it's read. But you're not.

Write from your chair, of course. But always, edit from that of the reader who needs context as they read, and who will turn away if it's not there.

In school we're not taught the skills or techniques of writing poetry, so some time spent reading some texts on those techniques would be time wisely invested.- JayG

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Undressing

What a great poem.
Sometimes we really should stop and just marvel at our world in splendor.-Paul Bell

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Bowls Are Empty

Barefoot I walk on the
hot ashes, after the collective suicide
of the utopia, without a war
These are impressive lines, Satish jee. The way you gave importance to light in the poem is admirable.-Padma, Hyderabad

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Beat The Clouds

'It was waiting to
fall, the colossus under the
rains of silent eyes.'

'You cannot kill the
hunger, eating dry leaves
of beautiful scape.'

(but we can use
the embittered salt
in the rain, streams
of our eyes

to soften, the dry leaves
of ill-fate - at least enough
to imbue them
with malleability, enough
to render them, comprehensible...)-L. B. Mek

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Not Pure As Roses

A brilliant intense selection of language that coveys deep feelings. A good 5*-David Wood

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My Knowledge Was Raw

Call it quits? Irretrievable?
Truth comes back when we are on fire.
Over your thoughts, the tears float.
A genuine way of questioning and quest for truth is well depicted, Satish jee..-Padmavathi, Hyderabad

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Not Negotiating

I love where this poem is leading us..thanks for sharing your work..-Dale Costello, Australia

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Chained Love

I Saw truth
sittin' in a tree
k-i-s-s-i-n-g.-allets

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Man Breaks The Man

Depth in meaning, A good depiction, Sir!-Padma, Hyderabad

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Death In Peace

I was just remembering today that Sai Baba
said 'God looks on sin as a mother on her baby's
first halting attempts to walk'. When God is
waching it is done with total love. I had the honor
of being at his ashram for 2 months-saiom

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Time Takes Its Revenge

There was no endgame.
Who had nailed the lake? I live in
the moment. Have you seen the death laughing?
A lovely composition that depicts the value of the present moment and life. Nicely written, Satish jee.-Padma, Hyderabad

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Who Had Spoiled The Show?

If I could nominate this poem I would, it deserves to be read. the physical structure itself is perfectly poised and the reader has no choice but to dwell ever so briefly before the next stanza, this, coupled with your punctuation (and obviously the actual content itself) creates an unbelievably powerful poem.-Lost star

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Let Me Say

Why did you kill the
trees? They cry. The invisible blood
drips at night. Don't do it with clouds.
These lines tell me about the hurting heart and pain of the person, in fact. Nice read, Satish jee.-Padma, Hyderabad

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The Adored Angel

That first stanza is absolutely perfect poetry.
Enjoy effulgent days and exquisite nights.-Starward

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All Prophets Fall Down

Hi Satish, I love the content of this write, Yes, all prophets fall down. We are all, only human and we so easily make mistakes. We can but hope that they can be forgiven. A deep write, my friend.-shadrach hah

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The Epicenter Trembles

Where will you keep
the cadavers known and unknown?
The cargo of words has to be unloaded.
Thoughts beautifully expressed, Satish jee.-Padma, Hyderabad

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Green And Red

Beautiful.... beautiful poem dear poet. Top score-r Dillip K Swain

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The Pain Outlives

the imagery and deep meaning in that last stanza, is just beautiful
thanks for sharing, Guru-L. B. Mek

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Who Was Disappearing?

I don't know
in your choice imagery, that analogy of a black hole
could be easily swapped for that forever sleep
we know awaits us, eventually
and some, seek mercy in sleep
only
they seldom, align that same sleep
with its consequence of disappearance
and its compressively sans, promise
of non existence...-L. B. Mek

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Question Of Existence

You cannot take your Life, without
the witness of water.'
(even that waterfall, cascading
from your pleading - blinking
its all, witnessed
it all counts
and its Never too Late!
simply
search for that ounce of sincerity
you still have
to cling to,
and wage a path for your Truth
to be that,
which accompanies you
to the other side.
Burn, and shed
all your regret's and repentance
this side,
of that six feet divide
Never assume, its ever: too late!)
thank for sharing: Guru!
(I'm sorry,
if I've once again, hijacked
the meaning of your words)-L. B. Mek

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I Was Moonstruck

It's great, use few more pages... To make it good.... And Also pics too... Though i loved what you write without them.-mr_invisible

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The Storm In Sea

One of your best.-James Michael Schwab

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Pain is Flowering

A good poem with an emotional touch, Satish jee...-Padma, Hyderabad

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Messages from Postpoems.org

 Glad to hear it. Much in the news. Be well. ~S~-allets

Mother Winter
Daughter Spring

Mother Winter has white hair.
She moves slowly.
Makes everyone hush and sleep.
In soft blankets of flakes.
Can blow cold windy truths.
But also gently send nourishing snow.
Without her, Daughter Spring cannot grow.

Daughter Spring
Gently blossoms
Seemingly dull seeds
Peek open the cheery beauty
She laughs as the brook
Bursts radiant smiles as the daffodils
Slipping through Mother Winter's hugs
She is eternal maidenhood.-AngryLaughter

"Peek open the cheery beauty" Last spring Jason put out a call for a return to beauty in poetry. This does that. thanks for the share/response.-allets

Drop by drop, icicles melt, as winter slowly turns to spring.-saiom

Sacrificially, wielding his body scepter,
the icicle, winter king,
slowly drip drips away
ordaining winter turn to spring.-saiom

What was that? I heard
the familiar tat tat tap tat.
It woke me as I nestled
warm as snug in a comforter
against the chill.
.
There it is again. Pat pit pit
as hot slippered feet push
away the habitual night
hibernation , warm
knuckled hands wanders
absently to each eye's corner
and shovels out dreams.
.
Again! The head tilts
to listen and confirm. Chit
chip chit chit. I shiver off
the less crisp coolness
of the winter room
and, old memories
fill midnight void.
.
The first thought thaws
and I smile leaning a dry
nose against the sweated
window to watch the last
snowflake
walking across
the front porch.-allets

Beautiful Lady A!-Beavis

Yes it is a beautiful poem... and the last line is delightful-saiom 

Ya wecum - where's everybody? - like me - vanishing into reality.-allets

Emerging from reality to say: all the above poems are amazing! Such a talented bunch here.
*
Snowflakes walking across the porch. I'm so in love with that.-patriciajj

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Would You Kneel?

A beautiful verse, that depicts emptiness and human emotions, Satish jee. Lovely.-Padma , Hyderabad

Sir
This beautiful poem reminded me of Emperor Ashoka's story and his pain.
Conscience creates a meme
Very iconographic line.-N K Jyothi, Mumbai

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Bridge Collapses

milk of our Truth's
as sinew threads, bridging
our nightmares and realities
these: curdled Fear's
we Knowingly, surrender to...
(thanks for sharing, Guru!
and inspiring,
my little scribbled reply)-L. B. Mek

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Amaryllis Blooms

the last stanza .. seems an ode
to all parents, all lovers.-saiom

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Analysing Myself

sweet and sad-saiom

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Turn off The Lights

How beautifully you said that pain makes you rich, Satish jee. A lot of emotions make us live, struggle and face the challenges in life. A lovely poem, indeed!-Padma , Hyderabad

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Nightfall

I love this poem! The last line in particular is spectacular... 🙏🏻🌜🌹-mdelleviolette

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Revenge

How would you be like a big
charming red rose? Even if broken from
the stem the beautiful smell will never go.
A lovely verse, Satish jee.-Padma, Hyderabad

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Why Some Roses Are Black

maybe to survive, like Cleopatra?
A lady of power, at a Time
of sword gyrating: masculine oppression,
yeah, maybe it was just to survive...-L. B. Mek

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Poetry Vs Poverty

I like your straightforward questioning with boldness, Satish jee. Emotions well expressed.-Padma, Hyderabad

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From Thoughts To Thoughts

Brilliant!!!
I read and learn: Guru
(the First Poet, was the first born
with the gift of sentient thought;
the First, Poem: is yet to be written)
'in my humble opinion'
('Do not avail
the sedition in this poor land.
Wheat color of the temples
want to follow
the burning sun, to take away
our differences.
The legacy of the moon
does not want
to flood the meanings.
A breathless call
was from white sky,
who was the first poet
of this wobbly world?')
who indeed...
I doubt we'll find out,
even after we've crossed
that six feet, divide-L. B. Mek

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You Were Within Me

flowers,
imbued with the love, of those plagued
by the fate
of the title 'meek' - destined to inherit,
the 'Literal' devastation
we'll still, stubbornly title
our dystopian remnant of Earth
with unshakeable, Pride!
(such a profound write,
thanks for choosing to share!)-L. B. Mek

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Trying To Become Whole

this is beautiful.-OutsiderL.T

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Waning Moon

a beautiful poem your specificity creates the theatre of action for us...thank you-saiom

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My Candle Burns All Night

Beautiful.
I lack the context, but your language is strong and your symbolism is precise.
You are very good at this - and in a way that this website doesn't help - but from what I can infer, the stories you tell in poems I'd wish I I could read in prose.
Thanks for sharing, it's a pleasure to read and well done,-Ookpik

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A Bird Song

The city sinks in creek.
Invaders had snatched the pen
from the empty hands, of lost truth.
LOVE this part, this is so good, really enjoyed this write.-Katzie

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Smoking Guns

'Honeybee
hive is swaying in storm.' this triggers 100 thoughts thank you.-saiom

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A Game Within A Game

Words tend to die in the large
grind. Only dried tears were left on the
rocks. A name was erased slowly.
Memories and men are forgettable. Even identity will be erased as time passes by. Well said.-Padma, Hyderabad

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I Select Limited

digging to learn form other's mistakes
maybe?
to insure we no longer repeat them, unknowingly
maybe?..
insightful words as-ever, thanks for sharing.-L. B. Mek

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Not My Philosophy

'How not to die
after becoming wiser than god.'
and this is why I cling to humility!
so such notions will never present themselves to me...
that 'God complex': of Entitlement
where All, is True
if you Will it - so: Tyrannically
as part
of your Warped sense of reality...-L. B. Mek

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Holy Vision

The wounds of love make me search to trap
the honeybees like the stolen gem.
A heart-touching one, Satish jee. Emotions well expressed.-Padma, Hyderabad

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A Sea Of Moons

Your use of imagery in this poem is excellent.-Starward

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Bee-Stings

Your words were dipped in honey.
This was genuinely a good way to put it figuratively. I like your wording.-FLboy555

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Dying is Easy

A verse with a deep meaning, Satish jee....-Padma, Hyderabad

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When Agni Licks

Trying to turn negative thoughts into positive ones and move on is the duty of every human being. You have explained it beautifully, Satish jee.-Padma, Hyderabad

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The Virgin Blood

wonderful work.- pratanubanerjee

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Who was Unseen?

Excellent message and very goooooood poem.-talestocryover 

swaying in the breeze.-maenad

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Ash In Eyes

'Do you
think a triangle of love can be made?'
sometimes, and Yet
mostly I look up
at the round Moon
and the round Sun
and the round Planets above us,
thinking
maybe, All - is Cyclical by design;
this Earth that moves beneath our very feet, hurtling
yet gripped in-place
a looping status of miraged Space
freedom - on a gravitational leash...
but then
isn't the inevitability within hierarchal pyramids,
that, which subjugates humanity into a cycle of self sabotage,
Every generation;
from ideology to logic, faith to science,
Love to Nihilism..
there's a seemingly endless need in our conceptualisation of the Universe
to insure, just like Our finite experience of existence
every Idea we contemplate, must first
be imbued with that Fallible capacity to self destruct, to End
to acquire a necessary, Death
because, that's all we know
and Everything: we Fear...!-L. B. Mek

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Dark Skinned Love

I want to see how much the moon bleeds.
Small words scream. Winter will not go.
Very touching lines and verse, Satish jee..-Padma, Hyderabad

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Reincarnation

"No patience for peace"
well said!-allets

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You Know How To Bleed

'It is not possible to remain
human. Primitiveness rules. Rivers
of heart have started drying up.'
(but luckily, those foolish few - like me
are still naïve enough, to dream
our fallible dreams, of humility's: Unity)
thank you for sharing,
I read and learn, Guru!-L. B. Mek

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You will not Smell Poison

If you are referring to one of the Covid-19 symptoms in your title.. how interesting a thing to note!- Gerard Haughey, USA

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Extraordinary

I too, have met that ghost
and a part of me
survived, to warn others
about that, which asks
for you to invest: everything
for a chance, of accumulating
a random, Something
from Fate's reward
of far-too-often, Nothing..
to warn them, Awake
I've plastered my fingertips, numb
and ink my words, scarlet
so as they resonate...-L. B. Mek

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God, What is Your Real Name?

'Suffering' be thy name
for that is the God
that visits us, the most...
'Life is all the sweeter for the suffering', some say
while I, Beg:
let me sample Life without it, and I promise
you'll never find me lamenting, for the boredom of my peaceful existence...!-L. B. Mek

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My Precious Jewel

millenniums later, and it still
clings to all that revolves
on our individualised interpretations, of Sappho's: Love...
intriguing as always
thank you, Guru-L. B. Mek

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Where was My Pain, My Pain

Beautiful!! 🦋🙏🏻🌹 I love your writing, and "Wuthering Heights" is one of my favorite novels!!-mdelleviolette

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All The Questions

This is beautifully worded and structured.-SirEdwinSantosIII

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Unmasked Tulips

Being submissive to someone is depicted in this poem. And the search for love continues. A good composition, Satish jee...-Padma

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Are You in Frenzy?

A lovely poem that talks about the realization of a person who is loved and loves, Satish Verma jee.-Padma

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How to Speak Unspeaking

This is beautiful, a tapestry of metaphors.-mdelleviolette

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Some Questions No Answers

'You were walking under the
dim light of fireflies to burn the sky.'
such vivid imagery, utilised to its most potent capacity..
another great 'searching' poem to add to your vast collection, thanks for choosing to share, Guru!-L. B. Mek

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Litany for None

Thorns are better than words! A nice concept and well-expressed thoughts.-Padma

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Two Small Eyes

To our dismay, “the neighbourhood of snakes” will always be there.-Laura

much better than that 'Tyger, tyger' poem
the world loves endlessly
in my humble, although controversial opinion lol
as-ever, I read and learn: Guru!
(a hedgehog
for a fugitive God
amongst the snakes, swarming
this tiger poetry, we
painstakingly, rhyme scarlet
with every syllable
we, shamefully hide in the white
of our write's'...)-L. B. Mek

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Mr Satish Verma with all do respect, the misplaced question mark there is so unsettling:
"The monarch lands on
my book to read the verse?
meant for the moon."
It doesn't belong, for it is absolutely meaningless to put a question mark in the middle of the sentence, where the sentence is not even finished!!
So it must be a mistake. In the past few years, few times, I mentioned these ocasions to you via comments for you have sometimes these missplaced question-marks. But you never corrected them. So, it shows that you only throwing the poems there, never coming back to them. But as an audience (a good one) I need to know how many more unwanted mistakes you leave there on your poems without never bothering to change. This, by itself worries me because your works are already very abstract and sophisticated, so, it is impossible for a reader to see all those propeble mistakes clearly, like the question marks. This is distancing you from the reader, for readers must somehow matter, otherwise why do we even bother to post??
Don't get me wrong I love your silence and respect it, but nothing in extreme could be healthy. The universe is proportioned. This is a philosophical fact my friend.
Anyway I am a fan. A fan about to resign.-ddavidd

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Waves

Satish Verma,
Yes indeed…
Earth does have
‘many enemies waiting’
to pounce and inflict pain upon the complacent and vulnerable.-Laura

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No Poison Between Us

I will sever off my
thumb one day I will not write
a ballad for you. I am not a slave of words.
Beautiful lines. Asking someone to see and feel through your eyes is something sensible and great, Satish jee. I loved the concluding stanza very much.-Padma

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I See In Dark

Great stuff, still can’t figure out what you mean. Are you a guru? You’ll never respond. Cool-ass dude!-
Johnny FN Lawless

I agree with the other comment.-Saxon Crow

Brilliant!
'The innocence will not
break. Moral sense will not rise. I want
to bring the leopards of love.'
that solitude of self love, an appreciation of self worth, to encompass your island of enlightenment, knowing
not a lot of others, will invest the time to reach your level of awareness, so silence is your chosen merciful response...
as always, I read and learn, thank you: Guru!
(even if by example alone, you lead us thirsty fish, to glean that pool of water - in that abundant dessert of modernity's: wilful ignorance)-L. B. Mek

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What Was to Come?

Who will be my escort to
stitch the shadows of broken dreams?
I need to know the power of your love.
These are the lines that sum up the whole poem and keywords. 'I need to know the power of your love.' Good write, Sir.-Padma, Hyderabad

None can predict the end and none can be escorted that moment. Whatever your quality and longevity of life on earth, anicipating the end is truly scary and raises many an eyebrow. short and sweet verses Ji.thanks for sharing.-Dr John Celes, Coimbatore

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The Another Tale

The behaviour and change in mind depend on a person's attitude. It is well depicted in this poem, Satish Verma jee.-Padma

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Extraordinary

Wow. “I need so many legs to reach you.” I identify with that line. Thank you, Satish!-Jayne Miller

Jayne,If I am not wrong,couple of years back,,we used to share a site for a very long tine.-Satish Verma

Yes! I didn’t forget about you or any of my writing friends. I’ve just been busy surviving! I have truly missed everyone!-Jayne Miller

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Immaculate

I've read an alarming amount of nihilistic write's this morning
glorifying life's ending? and your poetry
is the answer I wish they could all comprehend
to see how futile it is, to waste life
assuming nothingness is better, when every road we turn
and each step, we climb
shows us greener fields, further from reach and a lilting path
to a sheer drop, to something even more horrific
than our laments, keeping us awake all night...!
'how to reach out and help, anyone
when life is devalued, with each propaganda: warped breath
and, our very own safety cocoon society
convinces us, is all: that's left of future's: hope...?'-L. B. Mek

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Half - Promises

The old memory which is useless has to be slipped, Sir! I loved your comparison of this with a one rupee note. Lovely.-Padma

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A Virgin Grieves

drink your sacred herb
and breathe easy, knowing
all is: as all can be
however sobering, a depiction
that may be, of our reality...
Thank you! Guru-L. B. Mek

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Dimpled Pains

Hoping for the best and leading life is the best part. A lovely poem, Satish jee.-Padma

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By Kisses

Really love the last verse,
Really love the last verse, the engraving on leaves is beautiful. Much enjoyed this poem. sue.-sweetwater

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The Little Was Big

A lovely verse with meaningful messages, Satish jee..-Padma, Hyderabad

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The Fabulous Dream

'I am sad. This world
is too much. I can not read
the unreadable. Poems will kill.

The believers die under
a canopy. After the war, the religions
fail to save humanity.'
if our civilisation ever, learns
to appreciate genius like yours
whilst, you still draw breath..
we'll have evolved, enough
to warrant our hope
for survival and empathetically humane: growth...
I read and learn: Guru!
thank you-L. B. Mek

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The Massive Glory

Artificial love makes two ends meet! This line tells a lot of things about love and life. A nice way of expressing, Sir...-Setaluri Padmavathi

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Mythical Thoughts

I doubt you ever read my scribbles
but for some crazy reason, your words below
elucidate the inspiration for the feeble effort, I posted today:
'Love stings.
And fog covers, the aura
of falling leaves― green
yellow and red. I survive
the quake.

A tiff burns the fingers.
I will not hold the pen.
The blank paper shivers.
Who will write the
wet poem?'
(thank you! Guru)-L. B. Mek

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Life Has Become A Constant

Wishes and emotions were expressed well...Good poem, Satish jee.-Padma

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Avant-Garde

Very straightforward way of saying things will satisfy us sometimes. A good write.-Padma

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Soldiers In Line

they're swimming in their shared tears of regret, dear Poet
one regretting it foolishness, in blind belief
the other, its foolish capitulation in the face
of all-things: Greed!
thank you, for sharing your profound wisdom: Guru-L. B. Mek

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Parenthesis

Your slanted brown lives
always reflect a broken world, where
words wander to find the page of heart.
These lines are the main points that make someone realize what love really is. A lovely verse, Satish jee.-Padma

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What A Cut

satishverma,

Ready to be free…
Ready to be me…
Ready to be thee.-Laura

what a worthy dedication
to one of my all-time favourite poets,
I read and learn, Guru
thank you!-L. B. Mek

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Is it Togetherness?

Nobody can have the freedom to create love or emotions for others. Absence is common when thoughts are deviating. A good one, Sir!-Padma

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A Cup of Hemlock

imagine, what we could achieve
if we utilised half the energy we wasted
hating and belittling, those we oppose
for simply having a different perspective
that literally, has no impact on our own lives?
How absurd, when you realise
barely 10 to 20 percent of Earth is inhabited
and we're all head down busily, elbowing a path
through societies 'narrow minded' settlements...
modernity's narrow minded self observed, ignorance
cultivating
another generation of mind warped, submissive sheep's...-L. B. Mek

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Why This Madness

Life continues either it is darkness or a bright day, Satish jee. A lovely verse.-Padma

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My Baby Steps

A thought-provoking poem, Satish jee.
My love was beyond the
pain of stones submerged in the
salt lake. Nightmares visit the eyes at night.
I loved these lines which reveal much pain. Good expression.-Padma

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When Dew Weeps

'The moon was sleeveless.
It drops a hint.
You cannot blame the tree.'
we blame roots
we blame nature
we blame choices
till, we realise for our maths to work
there must first
be a value to existence, for us to lament
otherwise, we're just wasting time
multiplying null by sans
whilst dreaming, of moonwalking our regrets..
(as insightful, as ever
thank you, Guru)-L. B. Mek

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You discribed death as beautiful Satish?. Strange. But still enjoyed reading your poem.- Alan Brown, UK

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The Serene

The images of nature are well painted by your hands in words. Thank you for sharing your wonderous poem.-Carlos L Estrada

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The Last Battle

The pain of someone's heart due to the absence of a loved one is beautifully depicted, Satish jee.-Padma

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Golden Birds Are Falling

'The silver barge cannot stand
in the cyclone-unheard..Collect the
handsome corpses of them who wanted to live.'
wonderfully impactive, finale
such a sobering read
thank you, Guru-L. B. Mek

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Were You A Maneater?

Enjoyed your poem Satish. Thank you. Alan Brown, UK

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Unreturning

This reminds me of someone who has lost a loved one and they still have conversations with that person; where they once sat.-Poetic Beauty

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Return Of Light

Words can do harm and they can do good. The description in this poem are done very creatively.-Poetic Beauty

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Walk A While

Your eyes play with flying
sparks from the fireworks of the lips.
This is the best line of all which gives a deep meaning, Satish jee. A good poem, indeed!-Padma

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How to say salaam?

from Muse, by Anna Akhmatova
What just means liberty, or youth, or approbation,
When compared with the gentle piper's tread?

And she came in, threw out the mantle's edges,
Declined to me with a sincere heed.
I say to her, "Did you dictate the Pages
Of Hell to Dante?"
(and so, I too ask you: Guru
Do you dictate, your Visionary pages
akin to Grecian Oracle: truth's...?)-L. B. Mek

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Very well written enjoyed it very much. Thank you. Alan Brown, UK

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No Prophet Speaks

Incredible! I valued your expression and way of revealing truth. A tender unique way to say much more with less. To notice the disharmony while maintaining heart wholeness. Not with anger. You powerfully send a clear message with your words. Also instilling even more power from your uncorrupted standpoint within your being.-Danielle

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Lifting The Dead

Too cruel to be born again.
Life challenges the rising pain.
These lines tell me how painful and challenging life is! An insightful poem, Satish jee.-Padma

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A Bone Quits

Amen!
you're digging the Ruins
of cloud-bricked Empire, now
the mere sands of our shoreline, afterthought's
you're searching for ideological Deity's
imbued, with Morality's wafer-thin bedrocks
now belittled, to a mere fragment
of our despairingly cyclical: dreamless reality..
'antiquities: to be, or not - to be...'
warped
in-to modernity's:
to believe, or
nihilistically: yearn-for - endlessly...!'
(profoundly insightful
as-ever: Guru
thank you)-L. B. Mek

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The Voyager

Think True
You are a Masterpiece Incarnate!-Pungus

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Email from Padmavathi, Museindia.com

Commendations!
I'm delighted to congratulate you and announce that you're the winner in Editor's Pick - July 2021. I always feel happy and curious to read your evocative writings. I wish you all the very best in your endeavours that would make you successful.
Best Wishes and Regards
Padmavathi, Editor, Your Space, Muse India.

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Living In A Cave

A good poem that depicts the truth, bitter feelings, and the ultimate meaning of life, Satish jee.-
Padma

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Euphoria

Hi Satish, I found this very interesting and have read it a few times to feel your poem. Good work.-carol wiseman

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Tormenting Dreams

'The collected suicide
of the nightingales have given the worry.'
'my poems are
working crossing the pains.'
'The tulips have started
talking. Why the blood spots are appearing?'
'Humankind is becoming
rare.'
(sheer Brilliance, as ever: Guru
please forgive my rude rearranging
of your masterly lines)-L. B. Mek

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Who did not die?

'Dearth said mercy.'
'Right to kill was not religion.'
'What can be the last wish
of a stone buried in the grave'..
(Amen!
dear Poet
Amen!)
insightful, commentary
with unerringly, arrowed precision
thank you for choosing to share: Guru!-L. B. Mek

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Impersonal Sorrow

A poem with good comparisons and depth in the message, Sir!-Padma

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Your God, My God

'There
were no scars. Who washed them?'..
that element of forgetfulness
we encourage and nurture
to enable our survival, knowing
its very existence - insures
our cyclical suffering, can never cease
and will never - relent
for as long as we look up to the clouds
to judge our glaring mirrored truth's
of wilfully pathetic: self-loathing - ignorance...
(a questioning write
I couldn't help
but try and scribble a reply)
thank you! Guru-L. B. Mek

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Dream Hunters

I like be the last stanza the most in this poem and it summed it up well.-Poetic Beauty

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Waiting For Flames

I love
reading your poetry. Your lines flow in the beginning then they drown the reader. It's breathtaking, effortless and enjoyable to read. In case none have told you lately.-ashes_twisted

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The Other World

'and so silently, I let
the grudgingly inevitable, unfold: before me
knowing; regretting
will soon, be all that keeps me - company...'
(another wonderful poem, Guru!
thanks you for sharing and inspiring
my little scribbled reply)-L. B. Mek

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Confessional Gist

A very lovely verse, Satish jee.-Padma

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No Insult

Every line has meaning in-depth and talks about the consequences of situations or activities. Nice poem, Satish jee.-Padma

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My Knowledge Was Raw

'Truth comes back when we are on fire.'
another great line, from a wonderful poem
thank you, Guru-L. B. Mek

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Sleeptalking

'who lives beyond himself?
Where is the truth? The poem says in me.'
words to contemplate, deeply
thank you, Guru-L. B. Mek

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Unflappable

money was polishing the pitch,
The only fire was generating the ash.
Money is nothing but generates ash, not happiness in life. Well said, Satish jee.-Padma

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I Will Not Forego

There are many strong lines in this poem and the imagery painted with the full moon and thornless rose is beautiful.-Poetic Beauty

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Poem Nocturne

I don't' flaunt belonging.
Why do you want to show the postscript?
Nature will find you one day.
I like these lines, Satish jee. The pretentious mind always will face troubles and we don't have to be so. A nice poem, with a good message.-Padma

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In November

I enjoyed reading your poem. Thank you for sharing your work.-Carlos L Estrada

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Glorified

This is Incredible work filled with deep profound thought. Thank you for sharing this poem of yours.-Carlos L Estrada

really tense,
luv the wordflow.-PlayWrite

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In Wintering Pain

"Summer's melting green love and the sun rises in the glass of water".What an expression and imagery, Satish Verma jee! One can imagine and feel many things from your words!-Padma

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Glorified

really tense
luv the wordflow-PlayWrite

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Show Me Your Lines

'The blood dries up
in the veins.
and the memory pricks
the ocean.'
if my poetic journey ends
with me having written a single line
as profound as the ones I highlighted
it would have all been worth it...
thanks for choosing to share
your poetic genius, Guru!-L. B. Mek

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Did You Invent You

Bright stars dim. Sunflowers will
marry with the burning pyre.
What an expression it is! A beautiful poem, Satish jee.-Padma

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Time Kills You

Amen!
(only - for me, its not the Time
that does us harm
its our needlessly cynical ability
to procrastinate
and waste, our very gift: of breath)-L. B. Mek

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Severing off the Thumb

You've told me a lot of fo things. Positive things can never happen when deeds are done at the wrong time.-Padma

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The Epicenter Trembles

Satishverma,
Yes indeed…
where will we
‘keep the cadavers known
and unknown?’-Laura

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Untouchable Wounds

Nice poem, Sir!-Padma

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My Face, Your Face

Nice poem about your hands touching someone in air.-hotidris

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Evergreen

We will make another castle in the world'. These words which are filled with hope will make us move ahead in life though we're dishonored! I loved the theme and your style of writing, Sir!-Padma

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Myth Of Golden Love

'The earth needs a pause
to think about life studies.
But Buddha sleeps.

A Sylvia Plath takes turn. You want
to bloom anger against
the opioid sleep in sun.'
pure poetic Genius! in my humble opinion
I read and learn: Guru-L. B. Mek

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Dying Flames

Nice visuals...loved this one! Have a nice day!-Sherry Caayupan

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Who Was The Winner?

'Spring bursts after encounter with nuances.

Fumbling from poem to
poem. I would not find the meaning of
pain of bleeding pen.'
Amen!-L. B. Mek

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Bowls Are Empty

Very touching. Heart warming uncle.-Riju Bhargava

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Give Me Back My Love

How beautifully you said, Satish jee. Expression of saddening emotions and voicing the fatal truth made this poem more valuable. A nice poem, Sir.-Padma

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My Reticence

It's a very lovely poem with good imagery and facts, Satessh Varma jee.-Padma

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The Fugitive

great piece i like you write ,no distinction between earth and sky.-silver cloud

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Pain Is Flowering

'Trying to solve the puzzles
of life.'
'Critique will give the judgement.'
'Why did you look back?
Would you like to sleep under the stones?'
'Invent a truth like a lie'.
'Is it not you morphed cloud of
lips in fusion of love and stings?'
'The heart of a fig tree says
it with flowers.'-L. B. Mek

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Waves Rolling

We change and evolve throughout life. Many go through very harsh and traumatic lives that forever changes them and looking back you no longer see the person you want to be or the person you once were.

This poem is sad and truthful about not knowing who you are anymore and not liking the difference. Well worded and well done. - Poetic Beauty

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Out Of The Question

beautiful!
I imagine if I wasn't such an ignorant fool
and had even a small grasp
of the contextual elements in your write
this would probably be
something truly profound to read..
still, for what little portion I gleaned
I thank you, Guru!-L. B. Mek

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Knocks on the Door

A nice poem and I like these lines, Sir!
You wear the. Crown to hide the sharp
features of resurrecting truth.-Padma

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Most Bleeding Heart

A very subtle poem of pang and anger.
Rather beasts always remain beasts. Only humans turn to be inhumans. A powerful poem, Satishji.-Santosh K Mishra

suddenly love dies in my arms.
I loved this line the most and it sums up everything, Sir! A nice poem with depth in meaning.-Padma

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Nightfall

(such a brilliant poem: Guru;
forgive me, I just had to try and respond
however inadequate my words may read
aside - your poetic genius)..
those symbolic Bilberries of yearned-for, modest perfection
do indeed stain our legacies
churn our guts, till our eyes: glare Green
and somewhere in that mirage of our shadow's shed
we awaken, a small sprouting of hope
accustomed to aiming low, for being planted
in a world with diminishing light: to begin with...-L. B. Mek

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Turn Off The Lights

An extraordinarily rich write from an extraordinary poet!-Laura

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For No Obvious Reason

This is excellent and made me grasp for breath many times. The punctuation in this works really well.-Em

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Barren Plains

Very truly said and good imagery is felt, Satish jee.-Padma

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Do Not Throw The Moon

I find faces of leopards digging the tombs with gloved hands. stands for.-Reginold Jacob

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Poetry Vs Poverty

traversing straight, is a fine - trait
its just, they bequeathed us a path
so narrow: we lack, scope - enough
to envision a future
beyond, that abundantly incessant strife
foreshadowing, our every step...-L. B. Mek

A very philosophical write. Well written with a strong message.-Andy Hunter

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I Admire You

A poem in which concern and love expressed so beautifully, Sir.-Padma

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The Compass Failed

I want to meet myself..-I Ali

directionless we may find ourselves
momentarily
now and then, but pathless
is a state we can never be
whilst we yet: draw breath...
for even in our mind's
this life we traverse, is endless
in its variety and scope;
its only ourselves, that limit
our possibilities horizon's
by squinting needlessly
instead of trusting, in our ability...
The Compass Failed.-L. B. Mek

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Do Not Throw The Moon

Good writing, but I don't get the nomenclature.-I Ali

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Is This Futurism?

yep, so few know
that 'the wasteland' was partly inspired
by the miserable divorce, T. S. Elliot, experienced..
'Ignited': Indeed...!
(but its Peaches, he dared: not mangoes) lol-L. B. Mek

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No Retaliation

Thank you for sharing your poem, Satish. This is wonderful and powerfully written.-Carlos L Estrada

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Fingerprints

Like most of what you write, I love this verse. And even as sad as the outcome in this poem seems, you're a survivor.-Willys Watson

I agree with Carlos. A poem of mystery and hidden meanings that are clouded behind some obtuse images. One for the lovers of abstract poetry. -Marina

this poem really has a mystery to it. It can have so many meanings attributed to it. I enjoy reading works like this. They leave it up to the reader to decipher. Wonderful work, thank you for sharing your art.-Carlos L Estrada

A sad tale of impending death whether it be life or soul.-Poetic Beauty

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Someone Falls In The Feet

LOL this is wonderful, darn Vespa, in English it means wasp. Love the ending and yes ouch.-Teddy

because Love, stings
and yet, even one-eyed
we simply: can't resist...
another brilliant poem, Guru
as ever, I read and learn
thank you!-L. B. Mek

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The Earthen Lamp

Inspired and from the soul where all good poetry is born.-KeithMansfield

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A Game Within A Game

"All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream" -Blue Poet

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Sitting On Rainbow

A very good verse with deep meaning, Sir.-Padma

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Holy Vision

Satish i have to say your poems are VERY deep and i have trouble swimming to the bottom. But they are captivating-Saxon Crow

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Unmaking Me

Your article is detailed, thanks to it I solved the problem I am entangled. I will regularly follow your writers and visit this site daily geometry dash.-ellascottgm

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Dying Is Easy

A stunning piece of poetry. Thank you.-Teddy

'Dying Is Easy
When identity fails
you become human.'
and that:
is why, nihilism
is such an easy sell...-L. B. Mek

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The Virgin Blood

limitless, in your searching scope https://mypoeticside.com/for unearthing your truth..
I read and learn, Guru
thanks for choosing to share your brilliance.-L. B. Mek

The Stones Are Coming

'There
was no afterword after the kill.'
or satisfaction
after the stoning, instead
a new trend sprouted
and a new quest started
for that new target, imbued
with absolution's: mirage gate's...
(thank you for sharing, Guru)-L. B. Mek

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You Were Married to Me

Nice poem! Silence too speaks the mind! Hyderabad.-Padma

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In Cross Fire

Darkness in the world, bloodshed and the hazardous situation are being experienced by all of us. You've very well depicted these in this poem, Sir.-Padma, Hyderabad

Thought provoking composition, Satish ji. TFS.-Prem Nizar Hameed, Kochi, Kerala

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Who was unseen?

'I start trembling in the unchanged heart.
I want the proximity of the flame.'

'Let some light burn.'

'I prepare myself for a violent break.
And again start moving away from myself.'

'The ingenuity betrays.'

wow!
what a comprehensive and succinct distillation
of that moonlit anxiety, we all harbour.
Brilliant!-L. B. Mek

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Dark Skinned Love

'Yes it was my vengeance. '
'The wisdom kills.'
'Peel of the tangerine.'
'Small words scream.'
'Look- where I have come.'
'I want to see how much the moon bleeds.'
'How far was the center?'
'Lots of smoke.'
'Winter will not go.'
'Will you ever dance in a triangle?'
'Will wear the ochre color.'
'Dark Skinned Love'
'Winter will not go.'-L. B. Mek

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Message from Admin

Hey...
Just wanted to check in and see how you are and how things are going here on PP.
You've been a member for a mighty long time! Thank you!-Jason

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The Magnetism

Beautiful poem Satish ji! The line ...' the herd community applauds' is absolutely stunning!-Giti Tyagi

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Have You the Heart?

"I stretch my heart to embrace the history"! Ah! beautiful expression, Sir! A well composed poem with emotions.
Padmavathi

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Messages from Stella

I have had two jabs of Moderna--unrolling come the side-effects, a million plus dosed, the human trials are providing statistics; a booster may be required.
Poets faded for a while, coming back. I have not heard from bishu.
So it goes, but where? Here, polarization would be an improvement. I wish you happy thoughts. ~Stella

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In Bald Sun

deep write, read it twice to get the full meaning...
nice job.-Jeff

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Read Me

Great. Thank you.-Trenz Pruca

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Flawless Genocide

what a harrowingly - grim, title
and yet, so despairingly relatable...-L. B. Mek

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How to Depart from the Earth

It's a beautiful poem and a good question was asked in the end, Sir! Thought provoking!-Padma 

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Mythical Thoughts

'dark in equinox,
confuses the waiting
dawn.

Love stings.
And fog covers, the aura
of falling leaves'..
I read and learn: Guru!
thanks for choosing to share, dear Poet-L. B. Mek

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Unmasked Tulips

'Why disquieting
under
the water.
It is not the shipwreck. We
are swimming
to find the depth of love.'
Guru, your words
need to be enshrined somewhere
so all of time can reflect and acknowledge
such a distilled account, of humanity's
most self-destructive: trait
those festering poisons that lurk, beneath our skin
in our shallow rivers of tainted blood, 'veined-glory'
from the divisive oxygen of intolerance and hate
we've been force-fed, since birth....!-L. B. Mek

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No Casabianca

'The otherness of uncertainty
Yes it is true. In an
aquarium the golden fish eats the
dying fish,
what laughing hyenas eat?
like man eats the man.
The legacy keeps a watch
a miracle, the night will dance.'-L. B. Mek

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Mixed Voices

You have a most interesting style Satish. I’ve not yet figured out how you do what you do: maybe Mad-Lib-like substitutions, random-generation, dreamwork, drug-induced hallucinations, code book with only one de-coder ring. But don’t tell me. A magician never reveals his secrets. Another nice one!-John Cardwell

Leaving behind the baby steps and going forth can be a whole new experience and adventure yet scary.-Poetic Beauty

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Without Rhyme Or Reason

the wooden horse brings the groom...I like that line.
there is terror in love, we almost have to sneak up on it.
Trick our hearts to let in...as with the Trojan horse.
I think for me, organized religion died a long time ago.

very interesting write...there is much passion here...the moon is a very strong courtier ...
and courter .....-jacob erin-cilberto

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Carbon Copy

Wonderful poetry.-Rajeev Nair, India
From darkness to light, the original sees the flaws and fears of the copy that has not experienced that, of letting go of the past. Satish, thanks for sharing!-matthew Bill, USA

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Litany For None

Terrific poem. Thank you. I reread it several times exploring its layers.-Trenz Pruca

more bleak, in tone dear Guru
but no less profound in its Poetic brevity
so acutely you've worded, these layers of insight
like Trenz Pruca commented, it needs to be read
a few times, just to identify the signposts
to its meaningful, worth..
thanks for sharing.-L. B. Mek

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