September Woes

A beautiful poem. Your joy in writing is ever evident.-John Cardwell

I like the metaphors, and the mood they create in this poem. Some people think "the blues" is something "bad" and is to be avoided. I'm not one of them; there's such beauty and a sort of pleasure in being able to see the beauty and the pain in the world all at once.-Laz K.

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Ephemeral

Lively Write.-allets

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Living In Wax Palace

To me this poem has a sad and haunting feel.-Poetic Beauty

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Becoming A Totem

Fire and bullet - an analog.
BLACK LIVES MATTER-allets

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Give Me Something

A beautiful blend of modern and timeless. The pain is palpable.-John Cardwell

Tears left on murder beach is a powerful line. Give me back my tears...
If only we could retract our tears and the pain we feel in life over a certain event that has happened.
This has a bit of a horror or murder mystery feel-Poetic Beauty

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Voiceless Screams

What a beautiful expression.... Voiceless screams...the title of the poem says it all! Superb Satish ji!
Lovely lines...The other side of pain meets a
moon. You want to suffer silently.-Giti Tyagi, Karnal India

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Absolutely Dumb

Nicely composed poem with good thoughts and advice.-Padma, Hyderabad

A thought provoking composition. TFS, Satish ji.-Prem Nizar Hameed, Kochi, Kerala

Lovely expression...
Humanity needs lullaby

The expression in the second stanza 'Freedom from the unknown' somewhat reminded me of Jiddu Krishnamurthy's very enlightening book 'Freedom from the Known' where he has mentioned the need to free ourselves from whatever binds us.

Beautiful poem Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, karnal

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For Whom The End Waits?

Beautiful. Thank you for sharing.-Hawaiian_fire

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Like Haikus

Love your three haikus, merged into one!-Elizabeth Olesen, Denmark

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Point End

Heart touching lines...
Cremation brings some memories
of pangs.
Beautiful poem Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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Such was Our Planet

When tragedies continue and lies abound, it is always nice to look at books and search for what worked in the past history, whether religious or secular. Thanks for this nice poem!-Elizabeth Olesen Denmark 

Interesting read Satish, Take Care. - Edwin Jepson, UK

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Veils Have Strings

Thanks for sharing!-Westly Shaw, USA

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Some Sequelae

I always enjoy my time picturing your images in my mind, flipping through multiple possible meanings and trying to decide which of them I enjoy most. Beautiful poetry. Thanks, once again, for sharing.-John Cardwell

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No Miracles

Such lovely expression...
I want to marry
you of last birth again.

Lovely poem Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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Open Wounds

Exceptional expression...
Scapegoats run toward
the fire of jungle. Himalayas are
falling in deep sea.
Thanks for sharing Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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With No Mistake

Once again, hauntingly beautiful poem! So compact - yet filled with mystery in every phrase.-John Cardwell

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Alone In Myself

this has wonderful metaphors...the second stanza just blew me away...

It is doubly hard when we can not even find a lost love in our poetry...the words just seem empty, vacant...like we are writing in a vacuum....-jacob erin-cilberto

I find your style fascinating. Mysterious, puzzling, delightful! More please.-John Cardwell

Strong imagery here and your second stanza is intriguing. Lends itself to much thought. All good wishes Satish.-Christine Anne Shaw

I love this, it's so nostalgic and classic feeling. Every line is beautiful and genius, but I especially love 'Under the tongue, you hide a word.' And 'Will never find you again, in my poems. My book torn, my pen broken' it's actually inspiring me to write some of my own poetry as of right now. Thank you for sharing this, it'll be a piece I'll be sure to keep rereading!-Colacat

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Poetry Of Dreams

Hello Satish
Hoping all is well with you and those you love. The bestest of wishes. - allets

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Moon Was Not Rising

Interesting imagery, mysterious symbolism. Fun to read, and re-read.-John Cardwell

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It's New Model

Your lines are such a gem Satish ji...
the centuries
old chandelier crashes on the floor of god.
Somewhere the man embraces crime.

I have penned a poem which I posted today. I request you to read my poem posted today - 'It's An Open Fight, O Lord' . I would love to read your views Satish ji.-Giti Tyagi , Karnal

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Greed And Hunger

Beautiful lines...
It is very cool for
candles. I feed the flames my blood.

Thanks for sharing Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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