Priyanka Bhowmick

HOMECOMING
wonderful lines Sir...and the script has been excellently penned down.

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Sara Lokken, Marty Owens

MOODS

Sara Lokken :Beautiful, agonizing....this must be your inner child. -Sara

Marty Owens :Nice...Enjoyed....Marty

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Catrina Heart

SECRET WAKE
Savage

Vultures and tigers have eaten the flesh
Juicy and fresh as blood still dripping out
Under the sizzling rays of afternoon sun

Sanitizing

Bacterium and viruses germinate
As creature of darkness to immunocompetence

Wolves play their harps to the extinct ethic minority
Slaughtering sliver of innocence and feelings


Your piece have inspired me to write this poem..............CT

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Nikunj Sharma

SUN’S INHERITANCE
very thoughtful and sensitive poem, yes the world needs a burnout sun , not the cold fading moon that falls on many stars. good write.

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paul claxton

Prozac

different,but so good,u have a good collection of poems,interesting

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Sandra Martyres

SERENE REVENGE
This poem has so much philosophical depth to it - a provocative and thought provoking piece Satish...brilliant write thanks for sharing..10+++


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Kristin Reynolds

ANNIVERSARY
That was a very deep read, full of truth. The first 2 stanzas I understand very well - machine had failed me...3rd eye of the sun...key's chasing unbroken latches...yup...gotcha - awesome. Blessings, Kristin

Carol Brown - Satish Verma

Hi Satish....your fine poem can translate to many cultures with truth....I can see this to represent the plight of the Northern Plains "Sioux Nation" Native Americans who were rounded-up after the (so-called by the pale-faces) 'Sioux Uprising' and hung in Mankato towards the end of the 19th. Century....Jim

Martin Owens, Carolyn Devonshire

I enjoyed reading this..very nice...Marty

Great poem filled with unique and clever images. I especially like the way you describe the mushrooms popping up and wearing "white caps to see the game." Also, there is much truth in the way books can open "a museum" to the reader. Well done, Satish! Love, Carolyn

Donna Golden

Lovely poem, Verma. I especially enjoyed the third stanza. Hugs, Donna

Patricia Adams , christopher higgins

GENOCIDE

christopher higginsVery powwerful write. The images in this piece are so powerful that I had to go back and try to get it all. Your writing speaks volumes to the world and its shortcomings. I hope you will continue your journey of writing and exploring the world.
 
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Earthborn

THE TALE
Verma. a very poerful recount of / the return of bernazi/. My God! whats happening to us:/ it is not violence! it is nature! I am tempted to beleive you.

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Eatrthborn

DANCING OF GNOMES
a startling piece. versification and language very ENTICING. The theme is very well handled and the lines move with grace in spite of the morbidity that permeates the atmosphere. I love the lines:/ the gnomes (goblins) are dancing.

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Xraided

Death is Not a Ceremony

I like the freewrite form, and I love "air will kiss the lips of fire" I really quite like how you can tell a story and be poetic at the same time. To a lot of people poetry is just ryhtming words together, when it really isn't. I love the way you put words together and I must admit I am impressed with your choice in vocabulary. I give you kudos. Awesome write.

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Thys, South Africa

SIGNIFICANT

Satish Verma: Man has a spiritual sharing with god. A part of him is there in human.

Thys, South Africa: I hear what you are saying, and if I understand you correctly, that type of talk could be seen as blasphemous; by the doctrine of my youth... But, I am not a yound man anymore; and have learned much about the fables we have been told as children and how removed it appears to be from what could be truth.

From my own estimation and conclusions; I gather that Someone as Great as God, must somehow encompass all. Therefore, like man; God must know good and bad, have a freewill to choose between the two; and in order to be seen as All Good, have a great "track record" and integrity in choosing good... my estimation is, that He has always chosen good. That would make Him a Good God, across all dynamics, know and unknown, not?

What do I; we know? Not much, and most of our convictions, based on either stories or own estimation. Need I say more?

Love Always,

Thys

Satish Verma: My earlier comment was a bit understated. Creation is part of creator. The soul of man is fractional essence of a big soul our God. So God lives in every being.


Thys, South Africa: I am much comfortable with it being said that way.:) Thanks you kindly for a very valuable comment.

Peace for you my friend.
Love
Thys