ONCE UPON

Satish this particular piece, dedicated to our hungry children, incites the want to do more, "...something to be done for the hungry child's scream...". I, too, join you in the frustration of this mechanical world where self is greater than babies. I hope you message someday will be heard, that all children will be able to live life, and not just fly "away in a kiss". Thank you for awakening such thoughts and keeping awareness alive.- Marcia Schechinger, USA


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WILDERNESS

Powerful and moving... erudite- robyn selters

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ACTUALIS

Excellent. Enjoyed reading your poetry today Satish. Have a wonderful weekend filled with love and inspiration. Love,-Carol Brown


hauntingly beautiful, satich.. i'm so impressed! warnest,- nette onclaud

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SWEATING

an interesting read. A bit abstract, but interesting.- NightOwl

Are you subtley insinuating that Oceanus Procellarum and the Imbrium basin are elligible for food-stamps and Section 8 Lunar-Living facilities ?Personally i don't think the grasshoppers will go for it...The word is they are right-wing Conservatives...Thus, as both mom & pop Moon, you have an obligation to find work & support all planetary operations !..Frank James Ryan,Jr./FjR

nice piece- Chris G. Vaillancourt

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DIALOGUE ON NON-DEATH

a daunting cryptic image of death in a literal or symbolic way, satish! great metaphors! warmest,- nette onclaud

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ROCKS AND SKULLS

Satish upon reading your work the reader is transported to a time of terror and insanity. As I piece your works together bits of life, not life, open the doors of the reality of vaults that secured helpless people and I am ashamed that nothing could be done about it. "...I have still not come to terms with the neck high milkless gaze". Killings do not bring peace, how can leaders be so weak and fear what they do not know. Thank you for sharing your precious emotions, that one day peace will overthrow violence. Thank you.- Marcia Schechinger, USA


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Only metaphors

So far so much -

2. Let the tarp blow off; it does not matter as long as no one sees you naked.

4. Congratulations to your pet on being vaccinated for rabies !!

5. Of course, a child is afraid of strangers and cries. - Ravi Kalyani, Bengalooru

So we have to deconstruct the symbols! A beautiful poem subject to interpretations.- U K Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur

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SWEATING

nice piece-Chris G. Vaillancourt

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GROUNDING

Wonderful poem, you have a unique way of seeing and expressing your thoughts....very nice!-Sylvia Marquetta

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WRINKLING

Satish "...to draw the boundary of reasons, the second-hand stitch for the eternal wound". You know many a times I read your profile with your poems, today - with these words and the thoughts of torture so many endured in the past I am humbled, a little teary eyed at the thoughts of those who have suffered at the hands of one less equal. I thank you for the graphic, for the realism and for the bravery of such posts. May peace find us all soon.- Marcia Schechinger, USA


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HUBBLE TURNS 20

Nice poem.....hubble already 20 years old, time does pass so quickly - Sylvia Marquetta

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BURNING ACROSS THE SKY

“Can I touch your blue veins
my moon?
They had been aching to step out.” – a vivid image.- Gion Gion


The last two stanzas are nice, Satish.- medhini


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TORCHES

Desperate and horrible scene well depicted!- T A Ramesh

well written- Chris G. Vaillancourt

compelling- Lady Suki Ona-Sekinin

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JUST CRIED

Satish a talented political and peace poem written with your wonderful flair of metaphoric ideas. With blundt and bold images your goal of shocking the reader to awareness is done with extreme talent for as we know the "...the robots (are) taking over the throne". What ever religion, let us pray for peace. Thank you :)- Marcia Schechinger, USA


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CHASTE TREE

Very profound thought,Satish.I enjoyed it.- FABIYAS M V

It has been my pleasure to read your amazing poetry today. Please keep writing and sharing you poetry with us Satish. Love, - Carol Brown

enchanting poetry that swells with rich language and metaphors, satish... warmest, - nette onclaud

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