ON READING SATISH VERMA THEY COMMENTED
Wednesday, December 1, 2010
BURNING ACROSS THE SKY
“Can I touch your blue veins
my moon?
They had been aching to step out.” – a vivid image.-
Gion Gion
The last two stanzas are nice, Satish.-
medhini
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