FAREWELL

Very interesting lines, makes me think...best to you.- LightH2O 

well written verse. enjoyed it.-  heather wilkins 

I needed to read your words -

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A grand poem!...Touching my senses! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing-  Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2


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BROKEN PROMISE

Satish this is a lovely poem,bravo. - oxox hugs -Anne Lise Andresen

hmmm... somber writing. Enjoyed! Hugs,- Catie Lindsey

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ONLY BEING

I agree with Patrick, what a lovely way to start my morning Satish. It is here 6:15 A.M. as I read your words full of wisdom.-  LightH2O

This work has pleased my morning and touches my soul thoughts. I am privileged to read such wisdom in poetic verse.-  Patrick Islington

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PINK EYES

So much violence, pain and grief, but like you say, "silence. Nonviolence accepts the evil.." tfs.-  LightH2O

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JUDGEMENT

Wow! this is very strong "The rape was only your fault, you had to die." a very hard card to deal with. But nice to know the soul had left for home.-  LightH2O

this is the fire of truth,so well done . tears on your thirst-  leafsailor

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FALLING

Great observations, well penned.-  LightH2O

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A SPIRITS TALE

Interesting work..I am not sure that I understand the meaning..Sad though..-  Sara Kendrick

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PREDATORY

sO much to ponder about..powerful poem...Charma- Charmaine Chircop

I really like this poem, but i especially like the line "they were fighting with broken swords"- Kennedy Elizabeth


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CANNOT HOLD

That last stanza is so strong and deep...well penned.-  LightH2O

This gives me shivers,, it is a poem to the senses our world to day of deception and fear ,quick death justified by all,.this a way of speaking dreams ,i think this is a masterful piece of work ,but it still is completely honest,really fine-  leafsailor

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REMINDER

This is so touching, that angel taking the bullet without blindfold, purity is courageous... and then the "... gods of masses..." this title slaps me back to reality.-  LightH2O
Sure, Time must not look back...................its not meant to do so. a nice write.-  seema chowdhury

we walk the same path,this poem reaches in the lighting is there i really love your work-  leafsailor

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NEW GENERATION

the metal children how well you see them-  leafsailor

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PREDATORY

Brilliant!-  LightH2O

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RETURN ON D-DAY

I believe there is only one on this earth who writes like you.

very original

what a journey- Dan J. Mazurek 

Morning, Sir. I really liked the last stanza. I always enjoy your writes.-  Lady Dragonwyck

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A SPIRIT’S TALE

First stanza breaks my heart, that poor mother. The other stanzas paint a sad picture also. -  LightH2O 

Nice write and good flow of words to bring this message to light. -  LightH2O

So true and sad. Great write. -  allenpaulson

The wind blows/ the leaves fall./ And the bones grow/ cold in the ground/ and no-one is satisfied. A poet friend...RH Peat- allenpaulson

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FALLING

It is exciting to see the replenishment of new poetry here everyday when I log on. I enjoy the diverse poetry so I am never bored by most of what I read. I am happy to have read your poetry this morning Satish. I hope that you might be able to find the time to read some of the other poetry here also. Love, -  Carol Brown

What a poem! The world is really going to hell in a hand-basket and the devil and his demons are dancing in glee.-  Jancarl Campi

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