METAPHYSICAL

What exactly are you saying here?-  WILLIAM SEELY

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Issueless

A pleasure to read your poetry this evening Satish. I am happy I was able to read some poetry tonight and so glad yours was among the poems I am reading. Love,-  Carol Brown

Satish now I like this, a very sad issue....-  David Williams

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BRINGING DOWN

A green catastrophe tears a huge iceburg post-coitol emptiness. The sweet nothing lol loved much the inspiration and rhythm in this read:)- Poeticizer 

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MANIA

"My soul colours the half-black berries. The sum will not eat them. Father was beaten in war of tricks I still follow the laws of kindness in filling the extended empty cups." loved that end stanza, very nice write Satish.- bubble.Gutz.br... 

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RENAISSANCE

you're so good at what you're doing....- distorted 

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SMELL OF NOTHING

I love this one and I'm glad you're sharing your poems.-  distorted 

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SMOKING CANDLE

This is brilliant. The wording confuses me in some places, a little bit. However, this is the first poem that I've read on this site, excluding a few of your others, that really displays a talented writer.-  Benarnia 

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THE WALLS

when we cross that desert green smoke ain't the only thing that we will see and not see-  after vision 

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ALL THE GRIEFS

nicely done. Raging moon will rise again-  Keke

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A Big Idea?

Interesting question towards the end :-)-  Kate Clifford

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Ninth symphony

Beautiful lines. Leaves me wondering and imagining, wandering the scenes created by your words. Thanks for sharing.- Safiyyah , UK

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Confrontation

This is a refreshing - though thought-provoking - abstraction. That it's not straightforward narrative is helpful in that it invites closer inspection, provokes deeper thought.-   Kearns

Just discovered and enjoyed your poems.... Nice to find a pen that strikes all dementions and not round and round. Great scribs!!- KayinBH

The energy and definition from this piece is just so powerful and assiduous from beginning to finish. The world currently boasts of its unfathomable diversity, yet it's seen how it doesn't matter due to the corruption of many. "Earth, receive your sons in shame. " - Great piece.-  Tanosu

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Beauty Of Pain

Satish this has a good flow to it, I like it a lot...- David Williams

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NINTH SYMPHONY

Strong lines, each line carries a wise observation. Fascinating!-  LightH2O

A beautiful picture postcard painted with words. The last stanza: "Pull up the veil./ It separates the truth./ Do not filter the pain./ We may find a god." is thought-provoking and the title is brilliant.-  Gita Ashok

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BODHISATTAVA

This last stanza is deeply touching. A spirit of light longing for light and perfection in this trialing grown we call Earth.-  LightH2O

Namaste` my friend-  Pamela Fielder Nixon

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