Hear My Voice

The house in on fire? Hm...i think the poem has really good potential. It is not specific and yet very specific and that is quite fascinating and will get any good readers to think more and that is very good. I would say also, make the last stanza four lines to make it look cleaner, but some poets like to make the last stanza a little more vague or sudden so it's okay if you don't want to add two more lines. Poetry is not limited to rules always. I really love the piece and would say keep writing, but perhaps organize the thoughts more.- nina 

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Improvising

'Like a snake girl,
the black tresses trailing
behind the heels.'

a rare beauty, time kept decades long tresses.-Terry Craddock

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MESSAGE from Paul Brookes (manchester United Kingdom

I hope I'm noy being too presumptious but ahvingI have been spent a most pleasent half hour reading some of your poems I cannot say what pleasure the have given me and how glad I am to have discovered your poetry talent. You have a wonderful way of weaving your words and the reader is never disappointed. I've written here because it would take to long to make individual comments on each work as the site is very slow at the moment. Thank you for the joy your poems have given me personally and I look forward to more from your golden pen Yours: O) Andy-Paul Brookes

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The Thinning Faith

This poem blew away my thoughts it is so profound and so well written it was a joy to read thanks-Paul Brookes

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Ripple Effect

Every verse resonates with this very day.
Specifically the second one, seeing as I'd earlier been perceiving the beaches sand; the Sun exposing its true caramel and gray, then the lack of Sun - when a cloud came by - taking on a beige, a black and a gentle blue.

You must be a shaman.-abstractempo

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No Vilification

Now, I don't cry over spilled milk but...
This was interesting. I could try to assess this logically all day but I won't get any where. The ambiguity adds to the charm. I could imagine this being part of some sort of short, abstract film or a part of a movie that's repeated to show significance to the plot. I did enjoy the mystery of trying to figure this out. The line "Golden knife?" seems to stand out to me for some reason.--OGTheGreat 

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Improvising

'Like a snake girl,
the black tresses trailing
behind the heels.'

a rare beauty, time kept decades long tresses-Terry Craddock

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Some Question Marks

If question marks have to leave, let them. I enjoyed reading the poem. Time and again I remind myself of those who make ezines like these possible with their unobtrusive contribution...cannot thank you enough.-Supratik Sen, Kolkata

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Unmoving

Indeed, poetry is an investment for posterity.
Good imagination, good thought, good poetry. -Sylva-onyema Uba

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The Stings

Momma told me
Just at the moment that things get really hot is the moment when one must wonder if they are or are about to regret that awesome, atomic infusion of energy. Or whether the pit viper will strike. I wonder.-Lantz Pierre
This is an imaginative poem replete with imagery.-Robert Murray Smith

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Half – Being

Very good questions finalize this lament against alienation. Another compelling read from your talented pen Satish.- Fay Slimm

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All The Empty Hands

The Moon

and a bottomless lake - a cross-sensational image permeating spectra of time and the elemental - wondrous line - allets

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Ninth Month

Such an interesting write, lots of food for thought as all your writes are-well done.-Brenda

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Pick Up The Dawn

I liked this quite a bit. It had a very earthy vibe to it. Which, considering the category it was submitted under, is quite fitting!-Kurt

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Faces

A lot of food for thought-well done.-Brenda

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