Head And Torso

Amazing finish. We are only temporary shells of the soul.
Once again, 3 min. to feel this one. I do not watch the clock as one might think. -Lawless

Outstanding!-Diamond

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An Opening

Astonishingly so!-Laura

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Yellow Roses

A thought provoking piece and enjoyable read.-Milly Hayward

The simile of fishing for words without a line is a good one. I liked the extended reference to water with the reflected moon and emptying hands.
The questions are mystfyingly thought provoking.-Mr. Darcy

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Obstinacy

A deep write of understanding.. Hug-Derena

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A scare comes back

An intense poem, touching upon the subtle line between secularism and fanaticism. TFS. -
Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

A well penned social criticism.-P Nasrudheen, Kasaragod.Kerala

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One Cold Morning

I decided to read each 1st/ 2nd and 3rd lines together and I found it interesting:
After a
dawn December
the dew drips

Good shower - moon was recently washed
trees getting ready
I collect the elixir

braiding the clouds
to drink the sun
to die again.-Mr. Darcy

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The Syntax

the only thing I can see is try.-onepauly

deep and mysterious as usual.-willyweedMay

Hearing in silence!-Laura

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On Unknown Track

Death is a certainty! -Laura

Beautiful expression.-supernaturallover

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What To Think

Great imagery. This Poem deserves contemplation from readers.-Terry L & Linda L Shuff 

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Ashes Of Hate

I love this poem great write.-LezLove

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Unjointed

"Sun had eloped with the moon "...!!!!!
Poetic .. -R R Gandikota , Kakinada

Satirical and foretelling. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Dismay

This really makes me think, it was written in such a way that it could be interpreted differently each time. I really enjoyed the flow of the poem and how it didn't tell us what we should be feeling but rather it hinted at possibilities. Great poem! -cjshadow21 

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Different Renderings

Seems to me like a discarded person looking for his lover. I like it.-Nicholas Browning

Love it!-Lawless

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Nowheres

The black and white magpie is always there.-Lawless

i'd like a few more days in the sun.-onepauly

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The Stinging Withdrawl

I like the neat little stanzas. The poem itself has lovely internal rhyme, like: suspense and intense. Also the imagery of rain/fire/clouds and my favourite - barefoot on grass, I mean, everyones got to feel that one.

I was confused the the odd placement of the question marks, perhaps that is the idea?

I feel this poem is about fuelled revenge. The poem ends well, with the sky falling onto roses and with it eyes blur and close - the end.

This poem could be a warning to the world that is so messed up and on its way to self-anihalation, or simply a more personal, individual write. Either way, I liked it.-Mr. Darcy

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