With No Mistake

Once again, hauntingly beautiful poem! So compact - yet filled with mystery in every phrase.-John Cardwell

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Alone In Myself

this has wonderful metaphors...the second stanza just blew me away...

It is doubly hard when we can not even find a lost love in our poetry...the words just seem empty, vacant...like we are writing in a vacuum....-jacob erin-cilberto

I find your style fascinating. Mysterious, puzzling, delightful! More please.-John Cardwell

Strong imagery here and your second stanza is intriguing. Lends itself to much thought. All good wishes Satish.-Christine Anne Shaw

I love this, it's so nostalgic and classic feeling. Every line is beautiful and genius, but I especially love 'Under the tongue, you hide a word.' And 'Will never find you again, in my poems. My book torn, my pen broken' it's actually inspiring me to write some of my own poetry as of right now. Thank you for sharing this, it'll be a piece I'll be sure to keep rereading!-Colacat

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Poetry Of Dreams

Hello Satish
Hoping all is well with you and those you love. The bestest of wishes. - allets

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Moon Was Not Rising

Interesting imagery, mysterious symbolism. Fun to read, and re-read.-John Cardwell

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It's New Model

Your lines are such a gem Satish ji...
the centuries
old chandelier crashes on the floor of god.
Somewhere the man embraces crime.

I have penned a poem which I posted today. I request you to read my poem posted today - 'It's An Open Fight, O Lord' . I would love to read your views Satish ji.-Giti Tyagi , Karnal

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Greed And Hunger

Beautiful lines...
It is very cool for
candles. I feed the flames my blood.

Thanks for sharing Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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Wall Of Death

Heartrending!-Rahul David

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Punishment

What a lovely expression.....
Why the saline drops
are held on lips when you cry in
dark? There were many fireflies.

Simply beautiful Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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In A Senseless World

Great imagery! Vague enough to allow my own interpretation which I always find fun; like a puzzle. I'm also a big fan of music........ and cadavers in moats! More.-John Cardwell

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Some Transcripts

profound!-L. B. Mek

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Message from PostPoems.com

Winter To Spring Challenge

"Another kind of brutal" - the fire next time. Right-O. Conspiracy/fact - cia planted radioactive bombs under Hymalayas with cameras to spy on China that caused the flood in India. All players have nuclear power. N. Korea wants all embargoes lifted and no un inspectors. Like Russia, not big on keeping agreements. It is going to be a hot time in the old town some tonight. Duck and cover is not mallard hunting and old Beatles tunes reupped.
Civilizations do fall under such stresses. Hmmmm...
I just want a crocus to show.-allets

Warm where I am
Sending heat from my heart out to yours
And the cool remembrance of Winter's dipping digits
when the dog days of Summer roll 'round again-DSR.Summar

Beavis
i dreamed
i was a cardinal
on a sill
contemplating
frozen dewshine
from the sun.
Happy Spring!-allets

DSR.Summar
Heat rushes in
surrounding a heart
that, once chilled,
will remember.
.
Thermodynamism
floating on an emoted
jet stream April
to August
warms the world.-allets

Two sides of the same coin.
Give it a flip. See what you get.
Heads it’s summer.
Tails it’s winter.
Better yet. Jump on a jet.
Live on the edge.
Where it’s always warmer.-Sky

Pray the vernal come now, O Strawberry Spring
A temporary respite from wintry things
Send Stella a stalling of the cold and the froze
Make toasty her fingers and roasty her toes:-DSR.Summar

THAT'S A SENDING OF WARMTH Yes! So very well sent, exceptionally and warmly received.-allets

Sky Poet!
These feet were made for poetics (a lil pun there). Grounded in the Big Mitt, they leave snowflake prints in the warm sands of spring time vernal equinoxial days To grow meander-roving as shadows in longer days. -allets

Allets,
It was always interesting growing up in a place where all four seasons are present and experiencing missing winter in summer and summer in winter. I feel like that shift in hot and cold taught me to live in the moment, and to try my best to enjoy the current weather. Despite that, winter has always been one of the seasons more difficult to appreciate. Thank for sending this out, this is the first time in a while I wrote creatively, as short as it the piece is!-Sky

Awwwwwwe shucks. To write is to create is to live inside inspiration spheres. Dwell in the air temperatures of all things renewed - paint splashed in Dutch Elm leaf green, Robin orange-reds, and the perfect purples of the crocus.-allets

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You had the Answer

Satish, In this world where we stop believing up, is up, and down is down, where we move down, while falling up, war is peace and peace is war! A deep ink you have created, peace be with you!-matthew Bill, USA

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Existential

Very interesting write.-Stephen

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Nothing To Mend

How beautiful, I truly enjoyed your master piece-AlitaOpal

thank you, for choosing to share your unquestionable talent dear poet or guru: to me..
just wow!-L. B. Mek

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My China Broke

Beautiful poem.-Abstract Poet

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