GOD OF BLESSINGS
Black widow spiders and morality - good luck-they just want that bug in the web.
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Thursday, December 31, 2009
Sara Lokken, Sara Kendrick
RAGING MOON
Sara Lokken :This is very existential. As inward as the child is, the child inside you is not dead. Listen to Enigma's song, "Return to Innocence"- you can only accept love as that child. -Sara
Sara Kendrick :Interesting question in first stanza third line. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Sara Lokken :This is very existential. As inward as the child is, the child inside you is not dead. Listen to Enigma's song, "Return to Innocence"- you can only accept love as that child. -Sara
Sara Kendrick :Interesting question in first stanza third line. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Wednesday, December 30, 2009
Sara Lokken
THE TWILIGHT
This is beauty itself. I loved the beginning... and the metaphor of the "beats of heart will not wear a sword now" and "clayey mood" is very original- I understood that. You have a real gift- I love sifting through the soul behind it. -Sara
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This is beauty itself. I loved the beginning... and the metaphor of the "beats of heart will not wear a sword now" and "clayey mood" is very original- I understood that. You have a real gift- I love sifting through the soul behind it. -Sara
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Tuesday, December 29, 2009
Sara Lokken, Carol Brown
A FAMILY DUST
Carol Brown : I thank you for writing and sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Satish. I offer you warm greeting for the New Year with best wishes to you on your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
Sara Lokken : I am getting so much from this. I am crying. You were a silver rose- the color of your beloved moon. Do I see your feminine side?:) Only the best wishes, Sara
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Carol Brown : I thank you for writing and sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Satish. I offer you warm greeting for the New Year with best wishes to you on your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
Sara Lokken : I am getting so much from this. I am crying. You were a silver rose- the color of your beloved moon. Do I see your feminine side?:) Only the best wishes, Sara
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Sunday, December 27, 2009
Eduardo Orozco, P p
POETRY
Sara Lokken :Your work is so fascinating and deep. I loved this. LOVED. -Sara
P p :poetry satish good ok'
Eduardo Orozco :Beautiful poem very well pened
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Sara Lokken :Your work is so fascinating and deep. I loved this. LOVED. -Sara
P p :poetry satish good ok'
Eduardo Orozco :Beautiful poem very well pened
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Sara Kendrick, Sara Lokken
O LOVE
Sara Lokken :This is how I feel sometimes- after my beloved shattered my heart. Nevertheless, this is so breath-takingly beautiful. Your gift is astonishing. Best wishes, Sara
Robert A. Dufresne :much metaphor and simile in this wounded write. Well done Satish. --_Robert
Anthony Nutter :This poem speaks to me saying your feelings and posssibly others have been poisened toward this individual. "Gifts unattended" "Bees will not come to your flowers" Very creative write.
Sara Kendrick : Interesting thoughts put to pen. Second stanza like the line "Your gifts are lying around me unattended". Don't exactly know what you mean by the lines but I could go several ways with it. Sara
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Sara Lokken :This is how I feel sometimes- after my beloved shattered my heart. Nevertheless, this is so breath-takingly beautiful. Your gift is astonishing. Best wishes, Sara
Robert A. Dufresne :much metaphor and simile in this wounded write. Well done Satish. --_Robert
Anthony Nutter :This poem speaks to me saying your feelings and posssibly others have been poisened toward this individual. "Gifts unattended" "Bees will not come to your flowers" Very creative write.
Sara Kendrick : Interesting thoughts put to pen. Second stanza like the line "Your gifts are lying around me unattended". Don't exactly know what you mean by the lines but I could go several ways with it. Sara
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Sara Lokken
RESURRECTED
This is horrifying "a genius out of rags"....and still, you're still human, Satish. I don't know. -Sara
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This is horrifying "a genius out of rags"....and still, you're still human, Satish. I don't know. -Sara
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Robin Maughan, Anthony Nutter
OF A VIRGIN GOD
Robin Maughan :Congrats pn your feature! Enjoyed.. Trees were waiting for the curatins to rise.. Loved it! Hugs Always, Robin
Sara Lokken : Congratutlations on your mysterious poetry being featured. Best wishes, Sara
Anthony Nutter : Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Best wishes and much success in your writing endeavors. A. W. Nutter
Carol Brown :Congratulations on your remarkable poetry being featured this week Satish. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
James Fraser :Congratulations on your featured poem this week, Merry Christmas to you >> James
Patricia Adams :Congrats on your poem being featured this week!! Very well deserved. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours. May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Robin Maughan :Congrats pn your feature! Enjoyed.. Trees were waiting for the curatins to rise.. Loved it! Hugs Always, Robin
Sara Lokken : Congratutlations on your mysterious poetry being featured. Best wishes, Sara
Anthony Nutter : Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Best wishes and much success in your writing endeavors. A. W. Nutter
Carol Brown :Congratulations on your remarkable poetry being featured this week Satish. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
James Fraser :Congratulations on your featured poem this week, Merry Christmas to you >> James
Patricia Adams :Congrats on your poem being featured this week!! Very well deserved. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours. May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Robin Maughan
OF A VIRGIN GOD
Congrats pn your feature! Enjoyed.. Trees were waiting for the curatins to rise.. Loved it! Hugs Always, Robin
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Congrats pn your feature! Enjoyed.. Trees were waiting for the curatins to rise.. Loved it! Hugs Always, Robin
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Saturday, December 26, 2009
Friday, December 25, 2009
Alakesh Kalita
THE TWILIGHT
i so much long for sitting with the poet by side, when he'll be showing to me the solitary death he discovers in living past, and i'll ask him to look for mine. but in the next very line, i dont agree to him, people have been talking so successfully, what depths they've found i n each others hearts! its this eternal silence which has made us forebringers of so many words like jewel pieces of nails and needles. there are bridges. its in this silence one can discover how potent a creator a poet is. this how the twilight moves towards a sun.
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i so much long for sitting with the poet by side, when he'll be showing to me the solitary death he discovers in living past, and i'll ask him to look for mine. but in the next very line, i dont agree to him, people have been talking so successfully, what depths they've found i n each others hearts! its this eternal silence which has made us forebringers of so many words like jewel pieces of nails and needles. there are bridges. its in this silence one can discover how potent a creator a poet is. this how the twilight moves towards a sun.
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Thursday, December 24, 2009
Sara Kendrick, Sara Lokken
NAÏVE INNOCENCE
Sara Lokken: This is very dark...sometimes realism is dark, not beautiful.....but you have created beauty in your darkness. Best wishes, Sara
Sara Kendrick : Interesting write this early morn. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Sara Lokken: This is very dark...sometimes realism is dark, not beautiful.....but you have created beauty in your darkness. Best wishes, Sara
Sara Kendrick : Interesting write this early morn. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Sara Lokken
HUMAN LAB
Sara Lokken By the way, I favorited this.
Sara Lokken This is amazing...! What a poetic mind. I love the two middle stanzas....such depth. Best wishes, Sara
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Sara Lokken By the way, I favorited this.
Sara Lokken This is amazing...! What a poetic mind. I love the two middle stanzas....such depth. Best wishes, Sara
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Sara Lokken
ANNIVERSARY
You are so alone. This is...would make you misunderstood. I got it. Best wishes, Sara
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You are so alone. This is...would make you misunderstood. I got it. Best wishes, Sara
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Sara Lokken
OF A VIRGIN GOD
Congratutlations on your mysterious poetry being featured. Best wishes, Sara
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Congratutlations on your mysterious poetry being featured. Best wishes, Sara
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