SUBDUED LAUGHTER

Hate, Deception and Betrayal,all present here,as i see it, tho' a tad nebulous....then again, if it ere obvious, wherethen would be the Reader's challenge of cutting threads.....- Frank James Ryan,Jr./FjR


beautiful poem touching the soul- rajagopal

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THE TANGO

Satish again you remind us how badly we need to speak to whatever religion we believe in for wise leaders that one day we might acquire peace. Thank you for your promotion of peace through your works. Your friend and fellow poet, Marcia :)- Marcia Schechinger


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Unabused

Is life a blazing desert? Is there the scorching sun? Finally what do we achieve? I like to think on these terms and enjoy what you wrote.-U K Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur

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RANDOM BIRTH

The boat named desire tosses with the waves of tempest and heading towards the infinity! A palm tree wearing the mask of History..........a golden line of the immortal souls?-nimal dunuhinga

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LAKESCAPE

Thank you for posting your fasinating poetry here at PoetrySoup so we all may read it Satish. May your weekend be one of good health and may you find joy in living and find buckets of inspiration along the way. Wishing you the best in any contest you have entered or are going to enter this weekend. Love,-Carol Brown

Beautiful write for this Sat. morning...thanks for sharing.....-Michael J. Falotico

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FREEDOM AT LAST

It hurts but is cleansing to look at ourselves and take note of what we need to improve upon..Enjoyed reading your work..-Sara Kendrick

Thank you for posting your excellent poetry here at PoetrySoup so we all may read it Satish. May your weekend be one of much joy to you and may it bring inspiration to the end of your pen. Wishing you the best in any contestd you have entered or are going to enter this weekend. Love,-Carol Brown

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Haiting to do

"Trading abuses when love was lost,

the ancient tribe plays a game." how true ... Thanks. - Kalyan, Hyderabad

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FREEDOM AT LAST

Thank you for posting your excellent poetry here at PoetrySoup so we all may read it Satish. May your weekend be one of much joy to you and may it bring inspiration to the end of your pen. Wishing you the best in any contestd you have entered or are going to enter this weekend. Love,- Carol Brown

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A LASSO

Are these 4 seperate quatrain style works....or are they supposed to be a nexus to a one specific storyline....I initially swore not to ask....but so i did.....Can you explain?...I appreciate esoteric work.....- Frank James Ryan,Jr./FjR

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AGONY

well stated in this flowing composure of thought! -Doris Culverhouse

 

I must say there are some exceptional poems being posted today. Glad yours was included in my reading this afternoon Satish. Love, -Carol Brown

 

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AMAZING

Satish,
I feel more reading needed on this one.
“The cobalt was emitting radiation” – you use “cobalt” again. It’s damaging effects seem more than to the physical.
“A child in polythene, O golden god
you have killed the man by giving him
the gifts. The sand-pit, I am buried
alive in it before I understood.” – very striking imagery – man let loose in the playground of possibilities without havbing the attainment of a disciplined mind through growth. -Gion Gion

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Subdued Laughter

Satish Verma saheb, your style is unique so are the images. Though I do not understand your poem from the first line to the last, I get a feel of it and do enjoy. Thanks.-Kumarendra Mallick, Hyderabad

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CRISSCROSS

Satish "...A landslide wanted to know Who was to be blamed?..." the crying of the earth for care and peach. As always for you, I marvel at your precise intellectual wording to make you points to the reader. Thank you for sharing your marvelous poetic skills with us Satish. :) -Marcia Schechinger

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INTELLECT

it feels interesting while i read your poems …you pore a deep sense of thoughts bundled with what we just known of like words…very nice..sir ..hope to see more of this kind..-Abhi Tamrakar

loved it sir-rajdeep

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DAY DREAMING

Very imaginative and interesting flight of the day dreaming, Satish -Dr.Ram Mehta

 

I don't like to use the word love too much for it makes it become less meaningful but here I would have to say that I love this one..Very exquisite wording..- Sara Kendrick

 

poignant yet an eloquent read, satish.. wonderful! warmest, - nette onclaud

 

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