BEAUTY

My goodness what a poem of inspiration.....- She Whispers

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HARVESTING

this was a wonderful and well written piece of work.-James Foulk

Enjoyed reading this excellent piece of poetry this morning Satish. Thank you for sharing it. Love- Carol Brown

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IN THE GARDEN OF GETHSEMANE

Satish, The vastness of tragedy in this day and age whether manmade or natures wrath, it always leaves a void and numbness! An event that still needs to be told, (Kanewas)-matthew Bill

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SMELL OF NOTHING

Satish: The last lines really are awesome!!! I so enjoy your writes.- Lady Dragonwyck

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PUZZLING

Satish: I really like the "feel" of this poem. Very inspiring. Great write as always.- Lady Dragonwyck 

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HEMLET BY CHOICE

Satish, "...No hope of breeze It is hot inside, the spirit burning...", you take the reader into your emotions as we contemplate those who endure the times of war and suffering. The mind or how we would love to repress some of our past. Yet, in reliving it, you have opened our minds to the realities of war and holocaust that we might understand the past, so as to work very hard at a better future. Thank you.- Marcia Schechinger

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RETURN OF THE POET

I enjoyed reading your creative poetry today As I always do Satish. Have a wonderful day and may you find even more inspiration to write as the day goes by. Love- Carol Brown

This is either a reference to some horrific incident I have no knowledge of, or is just plain surreal, either way it made me think more than most, interesting read.- Nick Bagnall

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CIRCLING

"A bucketful of moon" is probably the most beautiful description I've ever read. The entire first stanza made me sit up straight and smile. Thank you- Hans Bump

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ON THE GALLOWS

Enjoyed reading your truly amazing poetry this morning Satish. May you have a beautiful week of good health, love and baskets overflowing with inspiration. Love- Carol Brown

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STRANGERS IN SLEEP

The god is ailing with multiple failures. love this line! i will rate this 10+ , well-penned- Sheldon Allen Saluta


Man, are you responsible for this bloodbath... Simply great. Yes, "A mass grave was being dug in the distant woods." Recent history perhaps speaks this way. Good poem and great.- Pranab k chakraborty


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Teasing

I am beginning to like this rich verse that would/ should to make the reader draw his/her own interpretation...maybe the title is apt. Kudos Satish. All for the rare expressions those in fact highlight a special sense and meaning. I hazard a guess here for a girl in distress in the harem and being emaciated. But I don’t know. Thanks Narasimha for your call. Lastly I believe much of Verma’s wonderful poetry has to be read to reflect. Kudos.- Seshu Chamarty, Hyderabad   

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Satish Verma Sir, The above poem as well as your other poems are rich in metaphor and have a wonderful rhythm.  But the meaning eludes me, probably because I am too dense to grasp anything as subtle as what you write.   "clad in wounded memories" is a refreshingly original expression, as also"unpraised thorns" of the black rose.   But what  would be the meaning of "forest of hands" in the given context?

In regard to the line"the fugitive wind shuts the smart tears"  the tears may refer to the tears in the eye caused by the pain of the thorns or anguish metaphorically.   Or does it refer to the tears  in the skin caused by the "unpraised thorns". 

It is sad to see that a beautiful poem like this goes unexplained.   I shall be grateful to learn from some one  out there who certainly could help.- Narasimha Sarma Rachakonda, Visakhapatnam   

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The fugitive wind shuts the smart tears. An awesome expression i will borrow 'fugitive wind' from you. Regards,- Shigufta Hena Uzma, Patna 

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A BOMBER UNSPEAKS

Good one Mr.Satish..- Arunmsivakrishna


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IN RING OF FIRE

a nice thought provoking poem....... lets hope the magic flute will play again to save the world.-seema chowdhury

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FOR ANYTHING

I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Satish. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with new found inspiration. Love,- Carol Brown

Now this is true poetry at its best.. Wow, I really like your style....- Michael J. Falotico

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Tender rage

I like your poems Satish Sir. Have a nice day.smiles.- Anna Maria, Trivandrum 

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