Wednesday, February 29, 2012

IT DOES NOT MATTER

Satish, as always a pleasure to read and comment on your fine work. Best to you!-  LightH2O

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What wonderful poetry you all are sharing with us today. I have enjoyed reading yours today Satish. I hope the rest of the week finds you with much inspiration in your heart and you will continue to share your writing. Love,-  Carol Brown

THE DEBRIS

I am enjoying reading some very diverse poetry today. I am glad yours was amongst the ones posted here that I was able to read and enjoy Satish. Love, Carol Brown

Smile ˜ Mumbo jumbo, spin and turn in a, hmmm"-  John Rhinem

THE CALLER

Morning reading sure does get the mind buzzing. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry Satish. Have a fabulous weekend and I hope to see more of your poetry when I get back to the Soup Monday. Usually pretty busy on the weekends with family so don't get to read much. Love,-  Carol Brown

This poem is well titled as it Calls to me great poetic verses. Nice job-  Kevin Clark

CHARITY

you have some very good lines in this one, my favorite one is, "The crowd thins as tall stalwarts autumn-wished, begin to shed the pretentions." Enjoyed! hugs,-  Catie Lindsey

good work..........- Patrick Cornwall

PAIN KILLER

Thank you for sharing your poetry with us Satish. I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today. Will be back another day to read more. Love, - Carol Brown

MELTDOWN

"Every other person a demi – god " this line says it all. This lack of humility, acceptance and love for others is the cause of much suffering in he world.-  LightH2O
mean is i drink words-  leafsailor


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Sunday, February 19, 2012

Once upon...

I was still pursuing fidelity
in the rubble of meaningless life;
some deep lines!!! lovely work...- Safiyyah, UK

I loved reading it, especially the deep philosophy reflected in the end.-Baishali, Hyderabad

Images at times exotic and sometimes strange you use to decorate your themes, often touching the borders of philosophy. I have a strong liking for your compositions, Satish saheb.-Kumarendra Mallick, Hyderabad

AGE OF THE STRAW

Which is more significant, life or nothing, or are they equal, one and the same?-  Kailashana

everything consumed in void ,in vacuum what is left is one ,one uniform without any form black hole consumed all...-   zorba

OUTRAGEOUS

The moon comes as an image reflection and then it was gone covered… I am trying to visualize the feeling of despair, as we stop to care what is around us. The feeling that the poem gives to me is this, Evoking and powerful.-  Dolphine29 

WHAT HAS TO STAY



I read this poem four times, and I liked it more each time. It is original, with beautiful associations and compassions for the victims. I think the second stanza encapsulates the central problem: only a stifled or unfulfilled individual would want to partake in slaughter, and the top dogs exploit this lack of fulfillment for the sake of their agenda. The last three lines are memorable. Satish, you're among the best poets on this site. Recommended. -Yacov Mitchenko

I find this stanza so beautiful and interesting, "No spinal pain for candles to burn in courtyard of sunken faith. " I enjoy reading you poem.- LightH2O

it is a form of love no less your poems bring light into a shadow mind ,i feel much better thank you-  leafsailor

Excellent! I love the depth and wording in this well crafted write! Thank you for sharing! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City. www.romeodellavalle.com- Romeo Della Valle

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BY THE WORDS

Friday, February 17, 2012

SULKING

I understand....I feel this way often Satish.....brilliant again....you are SO TALENTED!-  James Marshall Goff 

FAREWELL

Satish, this is amazing......leaps of association incredibly accomplished...-  James Marshall Goff

CALENDAR

Interesting images come alive in my mind with your poem.-  LightH2O
it makes my love laugh for your health.-  leafsailor



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SONG OF BLUE

This was so amazing, full of meaningful lines... too many to quote. May you be filled with love and harmony.-  LightH2O