AN AGONISED PRAYER

I can feel the despair...powerful language.- dzone

A thought provoking write- seema chowdhury

Yes, listening to you sharing your despair. Such a good line: "anguish itself will find the path" , so deeply true.- Mn. Rachel

yes I am listening- leafsailor

Stark, deep and vicious melancholy, Vermaji. An excellent write - I'd been trying to write something on this theme today; but it's just not the right day perhaps.- SnehaSK

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SHAMBHOOK...*

Thank you for sharing my dear friend.- LightH2O

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GOLDEN END

Such an interesting poem, well expressed. There is such a powerful depth of feeling in the experience of birthing described here.
Thanks for sharing- Morning Star

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INWARD ODYSSEY

just loveli-   the temp

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KISSING GODS

Puranas have symbolic characters And we are not expected to blame the writers of epics or puranas. better sense is expected from modern men to observe morality in accordance with the modern ideas. May be our forefathers incestuous for procreation. We are not expected to blame them for that. An enjoyable poem.-U K Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur 

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MUM IS THE WORD...

I love that last stanza it sums it up really good. Blessings to you.- LightH2O
In truth this is a poetic gem, that merits a re-read. Your stark ending says it all so succinctly!- Carrot
"The silence is ultimately the moment of/ truth. Truth erases the lie and seals a/ kiss of death. "Intense, thought-provoking lines in this sublime verse. The title is apt.-  Gita Ashok

I find your writing as poetic gems that has value more than gold, reading them is an experience in itself, and I savor each line as fine wine. This poem is excellent in form, style, content, and impact.- CynthiaBuhainBaello

It wanders around in my brain , making itself at home any place it likes ...peace- leafsailor

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WALKING TOELESS

Very powerful, Satish! You've come a long way, on a tortuous path, scalpels are meant to cut. Infant dying from freedom? Self? Other? In the end, becoming frozen sounds pretty good, to me. Guess we al-  Erin Kelly-Moen

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THE SWAN - SONG

Nostalgically beautiful, makes me wonder.- LightH2O
A deep, thought-provoking verse filled with mysticism, sadness and nostalgia.-  Gita Ashok

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POINT OF VIEW

Gripping!- LightH2O
Brilliant and eloquent portrayal of love in conflict in this incisive poem. Amazing lines.- CynthiaBuhainBaello
a heart-breaking song!-  nimal dunuhinga

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DESPERADO

These gripping lines make me think of all the imagery created here.-  LightH2O

Now the time has come. Everybody wants to commit suicide to become a saint. Great!- nimal dunuhinga

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Comfort in hobbling home

RDX is an annihilating thought that questions our civilization. And several types of bombs too. Good thoughts flow and a nice poem is born -U K Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur

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FIERCE MOONING

Sad and beautiful, simultaneously! Ahhh...the circle of life-  Shirley Houston

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Drowning

I like this poem thanks for sharing-  Kevin Clark

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THE GLASS HOUSE

Beautiful,... I felt the vibes in your words,.. Great ink, fav.. - Shaun Po 

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PROMETHEUS? MON FRERE? ?

Gripping!-  LightH2O

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