Perception

Yes, I know what you mean purnimamanhas,, yet I too feel drawn into Satish Vermas words. It is as if somewhere deep inside lays a glimmer of primeval understanding, something I cannot really put words to. It just makes me stop, think, read again, carry on with my life and then revisit.- Netty

I am too new to this style pf poetry.. I always click your posts in the anticipation that it challenges my understanding. Clearly, you are too mature a poet for amateurs like us. And the best part, with out understanding much, I hit the like button :)-purnimamanhas

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Naming

Intense and beautiful! Very Nice.- Wanda Huff

Love the imagery. Splendid read and write.- Brandon Whitten

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Occupation

How long these protests will continue? O mother. Nice flow in this poem shared on. -Kumarmani Mahakul

Excellent choice of wording flows with meaning..fantastic imagery.- Chris G. Vaillancourt

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The Fall

brilliant piece of writing! loved every word!-Lenny Gazbowski

too intense.. I liked the style and choice of words.-purnimamanhas

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Annette Abraminko

This morning I opened the Forward Petry Site and read two one your poems (which I commented on) and I was truly moved by your words.  Your words are unaustentatious illustrating stark truth without judgement.  I find that illuminating and tremendously profound.  I am moved.  You paint more profoundly than an artist with oils and allow your readers to absorb your words and take from them what they wish or need for their own journey without apportioning judgment of any sort.  This is a great lesson and I am grateful.

After reading the two poems, I read what you had written about yourself and then visited your Sewa Mandir web site which I read with interest.  Please could you tell me where I could read the research papers in English?

I wish to thank you and I shall continue to look in Forward Poetry to see what else you share there.  

Kind regards, Annette Abraminko

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NOT QUITE A PRAYER

VERY GOOD!! I love the way you have with words!! Thanks for sharing.-Joel Thornton

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Disbelievingly

Code of particles feel the entire life. When I cry.....like diatoms....in eyes erase the sun. Beautifully presented poem shared on. Very nice job done.- Pintu Mahakul

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DIMENSIONS

The first stanza -- arrogance before the gods, No. Second stanza -- a sacrificial gift and a true response, third is awesome -- dance with all your might! loved the dimensions.-David Meade

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Silent Prayers

Poetry.- David Wetzel (leafsailors ghost)

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Contraptions

Oh beautiful!xxx.-Karen Fromtod

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Armless Enemies

well, a deep piece it is indeed.-BrotherNewton

Nice.-Sagar D Rebel

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BEAUTY OF PAIN

unique and powerful writing.-  Chris G. Vaillancourt

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Revolt Of A Sutra

Brilliant Write! Loved Then Liked!-puds1957

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A Big Idea?

A Little Twisted For Me! Loved & Liked!-puds1957

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Cocktail

Gathered before the god of the evening we wonder, your poem calls us to be in the poet mind.- David Wetzel (leafsailors ghost)

Stanza 3...Line 3....Did you mean to write ecstasy? Check it out... Now, about the poem..I must admit that your message here was clearly "M O O N S" over my simple mind...as opposed to my arms...Sterling imagescaping though... throughout.- Frank James Ryan, Jr. / FjR

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