LISTENING

Loud and clear... Good work my friend.....:-Jared Pickett

Enjoyed reading your poetry today Satish. I wish you the best always in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, -Carol Brown
 
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XULON

Congrats for being featured - Dr.Ram Mehta

Congratulations on your write being featured..Keep the creative pen flowing.//Sara Kendrick

XULON -wood -that which is made of wood as a beam from which any one is suspended, a gibbet, a cross/a log or timber with holes in which the feet, hands, neck of prisoners were inserted and fastened with thongs/a fetter, or shackle for the feet/a cudgel, stick, staffa tree a verse about suffering? greed? pain? ugliness?..just guessing? Light & Love - Deborah Guzzi

Satish~Congratulations on your featured poem!- Laura Mckenzie

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Satish. May you have many more features and a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, - Carol Brown

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CLOUDS AND ROADS

Interesting write. Sara -Kendrick

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MISTAKES

stars that fled form the groans of night... they came to me from dangerous mistakes, mind blowing,sheer brilliant,very very very good-Charles Fisher, UK

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SUNRISE

Satish "..the graffitti on the abandoned walls of memories erased time.." - what a line - we are taught to love as children yet some turn into shadows of their former selves. The corruption of the world makes one grey. May the peace of love soon renew, that we might find a better world. :) -Marcia Schechinger, USA

I wish I can right poetry like you, I like the way you put the portrait together in sunrise-Charles Fisher, UK

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BLACK MOON

Satish the wisdom and life experience in your verses plus your wonderful creativity gives insight of hope for any that are in the "abyss of 'I'". "...breeding vowels and petals..." still creates a moon, even if it is black. Love your work :) -Marcia Schechinger, USA

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UNBELIEF

Wow! This is amazing. Keep up the wonderful writing. Everyone's style is different. This makes you linger... wanting just a little bit more. Very good. Thank you for sharing. :) -Misty Hoot

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BURNT OUT WORDS

Truth cannot be hidden!-T A Ramesh

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SWARMING

This is a new favorite poem Satish.. I love the content and word-play.....Keep em comin' friend.....:-Pickett


Okay!-poet destroyer
 
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CIRCLE OF GLORY

LOVELY!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva-Liana Margiva

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ANOTHER TOMORROW

And may tomorrow be filled with Light.-The Poetess

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LEGEND WITHERS

Satish "... the sadness leaves the fingerprints on my face...". Death of any nature changes thoughts and beliefs as we embrace it alone, buried in a cold heart of sadness. I always enjoy reading your profound literature, Satish. :)-Marcia Schechinger, USA

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BLOODIED MOUTH

to start a turf war brave-humanwoman



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CHARRED MISTAKES

peaceful-humanwoman

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ANNEX THE BELIEF

this poetry is like an ocean storms seem ripples-humanwoman


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BEYOND TRANSCENDENCE

And intelligence moved beyond transcendence. - is it all that is left?-humanwoman


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LONGING

it's touching-humanwoman

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MORNING STAR

i love th flow of your words-Meggie Gultiano

Sir this is so beautiful and meaningful in its content . Its a feast for the potic mind and heart . I liked the follwing phrases 1. words shall disappear only the meaning shall remain ...wow what a phrase . no one shall worry about our words after we are gone , right and wrong wont matter too..... 2. from wasness to lifting the veil - this is really high quality superlative stuff here .....lifting the veil is the ultimate nirvana that one spends the entire life for .... 3. The lost child whose burden was his taste - many of us lead the life tasting the burden of various adversities , never realising the time lost in unproductivity ...... the final two lines are absoulte beauty too , befitting perfectly well there .....thanks for sharing-Nikunj


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TEASING

Satish, you allow the reader to feel what this seed feels! cool effect! jimbo -James Marshall Goff

I cannot help but love your soul. This is so beautiful...but what a broken heart. -Sara Lokken

I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Satish. Thank you for sharing it. Hoping you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, -Carol Brown
 
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CONFERRED GUILT

"expressionless faces of trembling angels" oh, yes.... "I sweat and reel in chilly mornings".... "The spoons become the swords" Satish! You are a genius! :) -Sara Lokken

I enjoyed reading your poetry and I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with love and inspiration Satish. Love,-Carol Brown

A compelling poem, Satish. Especially enjoyed the line about the spoons becoming swords. Speaks of the confusion between reality and dreams so well! Love, -Carolyn Devonshire

"the pyramids of undoing" is some line - I like this write a lot Satish - A fab share -:) -Bathsheba Bathsheba

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MOLTEN ANGER

"The tarnished face was forced to recant its nose and shrank into hole." Enough said. -Sara Lokken

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CONNECT THE PROPHETS

Satish I always love your word usage "..the wounds turned up like fireflies in the dark...void heels the grief, and the twisted roots connect the prophets". Wonderfully visual expression of life and the heavens. :)-Marcia Schechinger, USA

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CITY OF STONES

Nice poem. Some great metaphors in this. I especially liked this bit:
'Carbon footprints were deepening
under the sun, blue bird
circling in vain. The jealous
moon exiled to black hole. '-Annorlunda

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CHARRED MISTAKES

Life exposed in its complexity of thought. -George Carroll

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SPROUTING SEEDS

A wonderful yearning to embrace the pain and reach for the star again? And well written too.-The Poetess

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CHASTE WORDS

I love your attitude of gentle awareness on this beautiful poem.- LightH2O

All the paths are up the same mountain, all your poems are these paths , this is an illuminated one of singular nature, a key to understanding for me in consideration- leafsailor

Nice one ...deep feelings..-  Raju Baruah

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DIVING

I am enjoying reading fresh poetry today. What a wonderful thing to do on this rainy day. I am so happy your poetry was among what I have read and enjoyed today Satish. Love, - Carol Brown

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A LIVING SOUL

deep and intense.

enjoyed it.
thank you.  - Sarvesh Kulkarni

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THE AIR WAS SCENTED

Satish artfully you twist and turn the words to create a verse of a discouraged life "you manipulated the clouds... the golden days had yellowed.." and set for the reader a time of reflection. As always, I admire your verses. :)-Marcia Schechinger

Resurrection

very good! i thought it was excellent. really liked your style and language, and the way the poem inherently flows when you read it. just one question though, what is meant by the line "sine die for the sake of peace?" - AaronGott


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FATIGUE OF WASTED YEARS

Anguish so real it is palpable to this reader. Very powerful. -Elizabeth Price

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FATIGUE OF WASTED YEARS

Anguish so real it is palpable to this reader. Very powerful. - Elizabeth Price

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THE VACANT FRAME

Tremendous poetry. -Peter Schlosser

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LIFE DEMANDS ONE THING

Satish, Wonderful imagery and very powerful words. Fantastic. - Mary Lacey

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THE HABITAT

I like this piece Satish. - Patrick Granfors

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UNTITLED MONUMENT

Satish, as always, I am amazed at your talent. "..Life did not alter the genes it shifted the flow.." wonderful line that we are the same person as when a child, life just changed our dreams abit. Excellent verse :)-Marcia Schechinger, USA

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SHADOWS ARE THINNING

Satish a soulful verse filled with imagery and emotions of a man/ woman at war. You have a style that takes the reader to the scene as we sadly think of wars devastation and fears from the soliders point of view. -Marcia Schechinger, USA

Satish very emotional verse! -Thelma Zaracostas, Australia

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FROM DEATH TO DEATH

And you are prepared to battle gods...- Jenessis

"Not afraid of afterlife I am ready from death to death" my brave and wise friend your words are profound.- LightH2O

This poem inspires awe.-Krishnarasa Seshadri-


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………….. Afraid of whom?

now I have started coming across quality poems here, it seems - Ankita Sharma

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A LIVING SOUL

now this is the type of stuff that can be called poetry! Sort of classy - Ankita Sharma

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UNTITLED MONUMENT

Satish, as always, I am amazed at your talent. "..Life did not alter the genes it shifted the flow.." wonderful line that we are the same person as when a child, life just changed our dreams abit. Excellent verse :)-Marcia Schechinger

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FROM DEATH TO DEATH

This poem inspires awe.- Krishnarasa Seshadri


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TRIGGER POINT

Good. Kudos.- Ch J Satyananda Kumar

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WHITE ROSES

Poweful, inveterated work...Impressive stanzaic movement...smooth & fluxive...Solid Craftsmanship. - Frank James Ryan Jr

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CONFERRED GUILT

I enjoyed reading your poetry and I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with love and inspiration Satish. Love, Carol Brown

A compelling poem, Satish. Especially enjoyed the line about the spoons becoming swords. Speaks of the confusion between reality and dreams so well! Love, Carolyn Devonshire

"the pyramids of undoing" is some line - I like this write a lot Satish - A fab share -:) - Bathsheba Bathsheba

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DIGNITY

Well the weekend is upon us and I am trying to get as many poems read as possible today as I will be gone most of the weekend from the Soup. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration Satish. Love, Carol Brown

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CONFESSIONAL TRUTH

Satish "..my wrinkled faith gets ready.." - wonderful line to go with the questioning of faith, the confession, and the rebirth of thoughts as one considers the past and present. Your talent in writing takes the reader to another level of thinking. Wonderful verse. :)-Marcia Schechinger, USA

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ALL THE GRIEFS

a nice piece...thanks for sharing - Meggie Gultiano

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SPIRAL DESCENT

Satish, as always, a wonderful verse. Though of loss and pain I like to think of those gone before us as that "light" and that beautiful "..melody melting in the air".-Marcia Schechinger, USA

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BLACK AND WHITE

Satish reflection, emptiness, tears and suns miracle - the blazing substance of hope - the virtue we all put our decisions and trust in. Your poems astound me with thought and wonder. :) - Marcia Schechinger, USA

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THE TRAGIC INTIMACY

Satish an impressive verse indeed. The metaphors, the language usage, the feelings brought to mind as you describe one who reads an old poem. Perhaps it was a love verse now gone array and we taste the bitterness of something lost over the years. You talent explodes in this verse. :) -Marcia Schechinger, USA

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SCARF ON HEAD

What kind of write...oh, damn, this is so beautiful. I don't just comment. I understand your metaphors- and this is in my favorites NOW! -Sara Lokken

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THE TRAGIC INTIMACY

Satish an impressive verse indeed. The metaphors, the language usage, the feelings brought to mind as you describe one who reads an old poem. Perhaps it was a love verse now gone array and we taste the bitterness of something lost over the years. You talent explodes in this verse. :) - Marcia Schechinger, USA

LIFE DEMANDS ONE THING

Satish,
Wonderful imagery and very powerful words. Fantastic.-Mary Lacey
 
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A CRACKED VISIT

Hi, friend- this feels so isolated. I can almost see the smoke after the fire in the streets, and the women sobbing in the melting snow... -Sara Lokken

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SPIDER

Hi satish...beautiful poem with deep metaphoric verse interpretation... :)-ELDY CATINDOY, Philippines

Satish a wonderful metaphorical verse. "..grass grows through the carcass, a catarac is trumpeting blind.. "the spider was no where in sight". Your visual words are wonderful as the reader interprets those in power. Love your work :)-Marcia Schechinger, USA

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TALL FAITH

Well written, Satish-Paul Judges

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Death of Calenders

lovely poem. great job. =] - bierbaum



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SPIDER

Satish a wonderful metaphorical verse. "..grass grows through the carcass, a catarac is trumpeting blind.. "the spider was no where in sight". Your visual words are wonderful as the reader interprets those in power. Love your work :)-Marcia Schechinger, USA

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SUNRISE

Satish "..the graffitti on the abandoned walls of memories erased time.." - what a line - we are taught to love as children yet some turn into shadows of their former selves. The corruption of the world makes one grey. May the peace of love soon renew, that we might find a better world. :) -Marcia Schechinger, USA

VEILS

Satish,u've got a lovely technique of writting.I must say "MORE GREASE TO YOUR ELBOW".I also write poems but never posted any.CIAO!-Quadree Harbymbholar, Nigeria

Hi Satish nice to have you here on voices,Fascinating and intriguing poem!-Thelma Zaracostas, Australia

FALLING BRICKS

Were you raised in an orphanage, Satish? You seem to have a very insightful view of how the children inside live, waiting for something bad to happen. Quite a provocative poem! Love, - Carolyn Devonshire

LOOKING BACK

Whoa! Explain...Sara- Sara Kendrick

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Strange relationship

A thoughtful exploration of the unknown, dark element we call death. - Snehith Kumbla , Pune

Dear Verma Saheb, a fine composition on the inevitable. "Life ... a shadow of Death." I'm instantly reminded of Ghalib's famous sher : Maut kaa ek din moiyan hai/ Neend kyon raat bhar naheen aati. Keep going, Sir. Regards. - Sunil Uniyal, New Delhi

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DEATH OF A SHADOW

an octogenarian between 80 and 90 trying 'to slice
the hope indulgingly
to achieve immortality! ' with a life's struggle bursting out from between the lines,
in beautiful images of nature, framed also in cultural images. Enjoy the journey,
so much may be achieved in golden years, saved from values of the past.
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TREE OF LIGHT DANCES

Satish, as always, you poems of peace define a fine message. The ending in this particular piece of poetry especially shows your inner thoughts and is written beautifully. :)-Marcia Schechinger, USA

APPROXIMATELY

I am enjoying reading everyone's poetry today. I am glad to see your poetry posted here amongest the others I am reading today Satish. Wishing you a weekend filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol Brown

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ARROGANT CURVES

wow, wonderful,satish how can you think like this!-Mukeshkumar Raval, India

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IMMOVABLE

Satish glorification of war, does not show the scenes of death nor the hearts broken. The longing for peaces echoes from all of us in unity. Excellent peace verse. :)- Marcia Schechinger, USA

THE HABITAT

Great poem,take care-Edwin Hurdle

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THE HOLY MAN

I enjoyed reading your poetry today Satish. Love, -Carol Brown

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ANCIENT TRIBE

So vivid! -Susan Palli
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