i love th flow of your words-Meggie Gultiano
Sir this is so beautiful and meaningful in its content . Its a feast for the potic mind and heart . I liked the follwing phrases 1. words shall disappear only the meaning shall remain ...wow what a phrase . no one shall worry about our words after we are gone , right and wrong wont matter too..... 2. from wasness to lifting the veil - this is really high quality superlative stuff here .....lifting the veil is the ultimate nirvana that one spends the entire life for .... 3. The lost child whose burden was his taste - many of us lead the life tasting the burden of various adversities , never realising the time lost in unproductivity ...... the final two lines are absoulte beauty too , befitting perfectly well there .....thanks for sharing-Nikunj
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