"expressionless faces of trembling angels" oh, yes.... "I sweat and reel in chilly mornings".... "The spoons become the swords" Satish! You are a genius! :) -Sara Lokken
I enjoyed reading your poetry and I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with love and inspiration Satish. Love,-Carol Brown
A compelling poem, Satish. Especially enjoyed the line about the spoons becoming swords. Speaks of the confusion between reality and dreams so well! Love, -Carolyn Devonshire
"the pyramids of undoing" is some line - I like this write a lot Satish - A fab share -:) -Bathsheba Bathsheba
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