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भूख और पलायन के बीच

गहन साहित्य…गहन द्वंद्व और मंथन…
बधाई !!!!- H.C.Lohumi


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GOLD-TIPPED

Unpretending, unleaping, the ocean sucks the grief of clouds. this line is exceptional.. lovely write. - premji premji

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AGELESS

I enjoyed reading your poetry today Satish. Wishing you a beautiful weekend filled with inspiration. Love,- Carol Brown

strange write, you must have simething in mind?- Doris Culverhous

Good morning Verma, youth what an ageless thing.. Sad and deep,, enjoyed your poem,..- (Destroyer ((Poet

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WORDS OF NEVER BEING

Satish the second stanza is so moving "...violence of crawling and inflicting damages to each other; I will never be myself again...". I had never thought of the actual act of crawling beneath the skies, within the dark, alone, until the deeds are done and "the flames are lifting the red sky". A soulful picture of war told in your meticulously talented way. Thanks Satish let us hope one day peace will find us, so as we can all be unified. :)- Marcia Schechinge, USA


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A SICK UNCERTAINTY

nice work...TAH- Tobey Hill

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स्त्रवण

u really write nice but quite high in standard,,sometimes difficult 2 interpret- prachi sandeep singla

हार्दिक बधाई !!!
रोंगटे खड़े करने वाली कविता !!!!

आशाओं के मकड़जाल,
तह तक जाने को आतुर,
फटती हुई सी परतों से ही सही,
जुड़ने की कशिश,
चीत्कार के उधड़े हुए चीथड़ों की. - H.C.Lohumi

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PRIZEFIGHT

What a great array of poetry we have been presented to read today. I am happy yours is one of those poems I have read today. I hope your day brings you much inspiration so you may continue presenting your poetry to us to read Satish. Love,- Carol Brown

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रिक्त होना

saahitya kaa vichitr Darshan !!!! Badhaaii !!!!- H.C.Lohumi 


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ENUNCIATION

Wow, that is deep! thought provoking!- Doris Culverhouse

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A HUM

Satish with bold and blundt imagery you have displayed sorrow, hate and hope. "..Praying in the scoop of fingers I feel, gold nuggets in the throes of doubts -", your gift for the abstract always enthralls me. Your talent is superb, as always :)- Marcia Schechinge, USA

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THE JUNGLE RULES

sounds rough...rough jungle!- Doris Culverhouse

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THE URBORN

Startling and surreal! Mere (poor) minutes were in the act of sin, but the effect will affect centuries! I am very impressed with the image of the nightingale (the very emblem of flight, and freedom), lying bleeding upon the greening leaves of the tree. This penning is true to your vision of that aspect of the world in turmoil—suffering, and death, but not utterly despairing, not without hope.

Thanks for another splendid write, Satish —- oxygon

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JUST CRIED

the greatness of you joys us all- Nitish shubhankar

A powerful write, Satish! No matter how dark the shadows into which your poetry enters, the words bring light with a passion that defies description. One can feel the raw edge of emotion dripping with blood, and the heat of holy fire! This is truly one of your finest, and I am privileged to have read it.- oxygon

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DEATH OF ABSENCE

Death is in itself a profound absence, and the poem takes it to a higher level—the abject meaning of absence its own demise! War is the absence of sanity, and at the same time the death of sanity. No one is spared, even the children are fated as innocent lambs to the slaughter in the rumble of tanks, those metaphors on creaking tracks, wreaking deadly havoc in the streets—a child down, awaiting the boots says it all in a brutal, chilling, and succinct way. Thanks for another poem, Satish, that speaks so frightfully eloquent to the perils and suffering, past and present.- oxygon

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HAUNTED LANDSCAPE

A haunted landscape, so hauntingly described in a poem, I really like the way the hard metaphors are juxtaposed to mundane reality, and how they so effectively compliment the harsh imagery of a nightmarish dream-scape. This says so much much about the condition of our contemporary world, and the tragic historical foundation upon which it is built. Thanks for the poem, Satish.- oxygon

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THE GOODBYE

The inexhaustible, human spirit, were it not so, all hope would be lost in the heat of protracted conflict! Over time the tragedy of histories unfolding, has the seeming affect of wearing off the sheen of love!—powerful! The earth is both our paradise and our collective grave, and men are ever too hasty to turn the oasis of deserts into graveyards for the sons and daughters, and thereby fill the hearts of the fathers with contempt. The poem reminds the reader that we must say “goodbye” for reasons other than farewell to life! Thanks for the thought provoking poem, Satish.- oxygon

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FIRE AND STRAW

1. 
   
   “They” will say they do no wrong, but as the great philosopher, Marshall McLuhan said—the medium is the message, and I perceive in the poem that the medium and message is a grievous falsehood! Keep the fire burning, Satish; few speak so fervently and eloquently on this continuing tragedy as you do.- oxygon, July 21st, 2010 at 1:21 pm
   And I could add, Satish, that the message is a falsehood, but the medium—the essence—is death, and that may sound like a contradiction of McLuhan’s premise, but contradiction is an inexorable part of the fabric of the present order in the world! Your poetry addresses this “ordered” chaos in a profoundly passionate way.- oxygon, July 21st, 2010 at 1:28 pm 
   1. Fire is anathema to a straw man, and these lovers of death shall be thereby consumed!- oxygon, July 21st, 2010 at 1:31 pm
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DIRTY TIME

Very deep and philosophical write that makes the reader think. This is very thought provoking.- Shashendra Amalshan

Thought provoking poem!- T A Ramesh

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Retold Journey

amazing - starlights 

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अन्धे झूले

एक भयावह वर्णन !!!! लाजवाब !!!- Harish Chandra Lohumi


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DIRTY TIME

Very deep and philosophical write that makes the reader think. This is very thought provoking.- Shashendra Amalshan

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छत द्वारा सीमित

बहुत कठिन और जटिल
कोशिशों से भी समझ न पाया.- Vishvnand.


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TEMPTATION

Give me some reason to die./ To be born again in light and show us the way?......poetical licence knows no bounds...- wojja fink

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छत द्वारा सीमित

dhanyavaada tava tejasvinaani vacanaani- Saraswati

Aham atma sarwabutaashaaya stita.- wojja fink

aap ka kavita bada pyara hein, acha laga padkar,- vijay menon

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THE FROST

Today as I read this piece you have written I am thankful that you have shared it with us. I hope you will present us with more of your poetry in the near future. Don't let your ink dry out. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be . Love, Carol Satish- Carol Brown

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NOBODY WEEPS

creepy story! enjoyed!- Doris Culverhouse

Here I sit with lots to do,....... but.......I would rather read poetry written by you. Wishing you a day filled with inspiration Satish. Love,- Carol Brown

I shall have to re-read this piece...I feel a hidden message within...Great flow.....God Bless...Taz- Richard Pickett

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एक सन्त कंटकों पर चलता था

अच्छी पंक्तियाँ हैं ये:
रात शर्म की गुप्त जांघों पर उतर रही
थी मुझे अब भी पलकों
से बहते हुए रक्त की गन्ध आती है
बधाई,सतीश जी.- U.M.Sahai


thodi sar se oonchi nikal gayi, kavita ka maulik svaroop aur vimb achhute rahe magar use meri medha chhoo bhi nahin payi, kaash!- siddha Nath Singh


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NO GRAND LANDING

Your poetry was a pleasure to read today Satish. Thank you for sharing it with us. Love,-Carol Brown

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UNENDING WAR

Thank you for sharing your heart with us in your writing today Satish. Love,- Carol Brown

Brilliant work Satish!!!!!!!!! Its good to read this!!!!!- vrushani thaker

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DIRTY TIME

Satish ,Very nice piece with marvelous imagery Nicely expressed peaceful images .Thank you for sharing.- Pattra Shuwaswa, Netherlands


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SALT PLUNGED

well done and enjoyed,..- (Destroyer ((Poet


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AWARENESS

Wow, sad write...- (Destroyer ((Poet

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चाँदनी के फूल

Bahut khuub.
alag saa sundar ahsaas
Gahan aur manbhaavan
abhivaadan- Vishvnand


बहुत सुन्दर लय और मखमल सा एहसास देती आपकी रचना बहुत पसंद आयी|- parminder on 17 July, 2010


veryyy touching one  keep sharing- prachi sandeep singla on 18 July, 2010


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THIN VEIL

satish, your words leave a delicious flavor upon my tongue as i recite your poem. very beautiful david.- David Pierce, USA


Satish your verses are mesmerizing, as you grip the inner emotions and take the reader to the deepest feelings of nature, life and loss. Excellence is the word for your work. :)- Marcia Schechinger, USA


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AN UNBORN PRAYER

i too pray for that.a very nice poem indeed,Sir - R.Aarthika

Classical. High class poetry. Very original.- anuradha

Very beautiful!, Naked mankind sits on the banks of grief, after the futility of mourning, for death, What imagery!- parminder

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रात पूरे चाँद की

roopak aur vimb vidhan anupam aur ras sanchar saksham kavita, bhuri bhuri badhai.- siddhanathsingh

nice sursti ka sanmaan aap ki is kavita me dikha
चन्द्र उरसिज से पिलाती दूध
धरा सुत को प्रकति माँ- kishan.R

बहुत सुन्दर रचना
गहन अनुभूति प्रदान करती हुई
अति मनभावन
रचना के लिए हार्दिक अभिवादन और धन्यवाद .- Vishvnand


साहित्यिक हिन्दी का प्रयोग आप की सब रचनाओं में बहुत उत्तम ! अति सुंदर! सृष्टी की ख़ूबसूरती हर शब्द में प्रकट होती है|-parminder on 16 July, 2010


what imagery! superb-prachi sandeep singla on 18 July

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CONSENSUAL

Such intriguing metaphors here....a very bitter and raw poem for sure~- Chris D. Aechtner

Was truly a pleasure to be able to read your poetry today Satish. I hope you have a wonderful inspiration filled day. Love, - Carol Brown

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किसने मुझे असीसा

साहित्य का परिशुद्ध , पवित्र और उज्जवल दर्शन., हार्दिक बधाई !!!! - Harish Chandra Lohumi

aap ki sundar rachna padh kar pran pavitr hue.- siddha Nath Singh

अतिसुन्दर, असाधारण
गहन और विशाल
रचना लगी सच में बड़ी बेमिसाल
पढ़ समझ हुआ दिल खुशी से मालामाल
आपको हार्दिक अभिवादन और बहुत धन्यवाद - Vishvnand


रचना पढ़कर बहुत प्यारा एहसास आया| सुंदर शब्दों का बहुत ही ख़ूबसूरती से इस्तेमाल ! अति सुंदर!-parminder on 16 July, 2010

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DUST GRAFTED

I am smiling because of all the wonderful poetry I am reading this morning. Thank you for sharing yours Satish and know that others will draw inspiration from it when they read it. Love, - Carol Brown

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IN CHAINS

Listening, to inner voice, peeling off the hurts, hammered memories. You dropp the answer and throw back the question. Something was totally amiss Absence overtakes the presence. The shadow was more frightening. No movement, A lull before a flash, then explosion. The limbs will fly. The ending of thought or beginning of emptiness? A green death starts thinking. This is so insightful and a delightful read i love the vast continuations into thoughts and dreams. YOur head is a wonderful disneyland for mental function and creativity. I wonder where you get it all. I am fond on your strutrure and want to know where you get that kind of engery to create such a masterpiece. Its it that your a genius or somekind of professional artistian who I have never heard of . Can you be a true poet who has al lthe energy to kill time with these wonder ful words. Thank you. - KFC, Colin J, Kansas

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ASH POEM

A great read this morning, thank you for it. Also check out my new poem/narrative: Criminals part 3. Have a great day.- Diiamond Rich

What a blessing we have in PoetrySoup. A place to come to write and read and make new friends along the ink trail. I am wishing you a day full of inspiration. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope to read many more written by you in the future Satish. Love, - Carol Brown

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WORDS BEYOND

Good morning Satish Beautiful write Serenity, that is what this poem has brought upon me. Thank you.Thank you for sharing. - Pattra Shuwaswat, Netherlands

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BLAMELESS?

Satish with brilliant composition you achieve getting your point across through wonderful metaphors and images. "The price of the sick crop, the insects, the greed of the state...". Well said :)- Marcia Schechinger, USA


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DEATH OF A SHADOW

GOD ALREADY KNOWS...AND 'IF' WE BELIEVE THIS...WE MUST DIE TO LIVE - NATURALLY AND SPIRITUALLY. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS, 
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS- Joyce Bell

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SHAMEFUL

I believe this is a Dramatic Free Verse. Very impressive bringing me to read it again. You have flair! Hugs,- Rhoda Galgiani

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ALL THE GRIEFS

very mature poem,your imagery is from a rare view of deep thinkers.excellent!- Olomolehin John, Nigeria


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GOODBYE

this is a sad piece. - Meggie Gultiano

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THE APPLAUSE

wow,, cool write..- (Destroyer ((Poet

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FEVER RISING

Satish again your gift of words is amazing. This poem of poverty the "frozen pain" for me describes the desperation of people and the means they take to exist - and the "womb cries". Another verse impeccably written. :)- Marcia Schechinge


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INTEGERS

THOUGHT PROVOKING END LINES ! WHEN WE SHARE LOVE EVERYTHING PROSPERS AND THRIVES ! WHEN WE SHARE HATERED AND DIVIDE DEATH , ONLY A BIG ZERO REMAINS ! -RAJ NANDY

like a mathematics subject..this is very interesting.- Meggie Gultiano

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UNCHARTED SELF

mysterious like the Self. - wojja fink

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JUST CRIED

the greatness of you joys us all- Nitish shubhankar

A powerful write, Satish! No matter how dark the shadows into which your poetry enters, the words bring light with a passion that defies description. One can feel the raw edge of emotion dripping with blood, and the heat of holy fire! This is truly one of your finest, and I am privileged to have read it.

Art- oxygon

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THE URBORN

Startling and surreal! Mere (poor) minutes were in the act of sin, but the effect will affect centuries! I am very impressed with the image of the nightingale (the very emblem of flight, and freedom), lying bleeding upon the greening leaves of the tree. This penning is true to your vision of that aspect of the world in turmoil—suffering, and death, but not utterly despairing, not without hope.

Thanks for another splendid write, Satish — Art- oxygon

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DEATH OF ABSENCE

Death is in itself a profound absence, and the poem takes it to a higher level—the abject meaning of absence its own demise! War is the absence of sanity, and at the same time the death of sanity. No one is spared, even the children are fated as innocent lambs to the slaughter in the rumble of tanks, those metaphors on creaking tracks, wreaking deadly havoc in the streets—a child down, awaiting the boots says it all in a brutal, chilling, and succinct way. Thanks for another poem, Satish, that speaks so frightfully eloquent to the perils and suffering, past and present.- oxygon

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PAIN OF ELEGY

Very well expressed. - Paul Judges

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HONEY MOONER

Very emotional verse Satish, love your work and a pleasure to see you here on voices!- Thelma Zaracostas


Satish as always I am amazed of the emotions, as well as, the images you are able to bring out for the reader. You are a true talent, one to aspire to be like. A beautiful, emotional verse of love, loss and remembrance. Thank you for sharing :)- Marcia Schechinger


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UNBECOMING

Thank you for sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Satish. I hope you plan on being here and writing for years to come. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today. Wishing you the best always. Love,- Carol Brown

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ONE ANTHOS

fantasic....actually I would please call it free verse BUT it has the "heart" of a sestina...want to try transforming it? soup mail me? I'm fav'ing it and giving it a 7. - Deborah Guzzi

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HEAVENLY GUIDANCE

Satish, you have a unique style which immediately captures the attention of the reader. Exceptional imagery and expression with powerful messages.- Nancy Crossland, USA


Satish another great poem about life , brilliant lots of food for thought here .Thank you for sharing. - Pattra Shuwaswat, Netherlands


I really love reading your works. The way you play with words is powerful.thanks for this one. - Joseph Osita, Nigeria

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TIME’S BURDEN

Interesting thoughts that you have penned..- Sara Kendrick

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SEASON’S CHANGE

nice reflective poem- MarietaMaglas


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BURNING ACROSS THE SKY

Satish a unique and wonderful poem of the moon and its seduction. It is a powerful source of passion, you describe its ability with vivid imagery. :)- Marcia Schechinger, USA


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