MANIA

Satish you poetry has a stirring quality that reminds us of past, and also, present injustices that man perform on man. I weep for humankind and the "war of tricks" and hope someday we will not be "...filling the extended empty cups". May the future find more restful times for our childrens sake, and let there never be another holocaust of deaths. Thank you for sharing your talented work, Satish. :)- Marcia Schechinger

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WINDOWS

disturbing images... lovely poem satishji- premji premji
vividly arresting. A very curiously enjoyable read.- NightOwl

some real gems here ...nameless letter betraying the will of cage ..is simply beautiful ...the winged flaw and the legends that justified the swords ...yes we all bore those wrinkles that are nameless ........-Nikunj

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SLEEPING BUDDHA

A pleasure to read your creative poetry today Satish. I am hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love,-Carol Brown

Wonderful Haiku Vema, always enjoyed...-Michael J. Falotico

I enjoyed the second haiku the most, Satish-Dr.Ram Mehta

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NO-MAN’S-LAND

my goodness, I know how awful it feels to be this "blue" you need to go hug babies or find a basket of kittens! or make love! BIG hugs! Light & Love-Deborah Guzzi

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NO RETURN

Brings to mind America's version of royalty. The Trumps, who make fame and wealth out of desecrating the planet.- Andy Turner

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…… STUNNED ME

We find the sun so removed from live over here...we tend to look at the moon....- Gerard Gauthier

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PICTURES

Seems quite some depth here.
The light of night.
Voices of Autumn, for those who are awake enough to hear them.
Being transparent against ones will.- Andy Turner


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WOUNDED DANCE

The screams wake up the dark blood. Intense! -Donna Chandler

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अधमुंदी आँखें

“जब शब्दों ने सच्चाई बताने में असफलता दिखायी
तब केवल मौन बोलने लगा”
भा गयीं दिल को बहुत ये पंक्तियाँ,
अधमुंदी आंखों में जब ये पढ़ लिया ….Vishvnand

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MESSAGE

powerfully written and lovely too.- Leslie Alexis
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BEAUTY

Satish I am mesmerized as I read your work, putting myself in the place of your meanings and my translations. This particular verse holding the moon and bemoaning the sun is a translucent piece of art as we float through words equating nature to feelings. Thank you again for sharing your talent, Satish :)- Marcia Schechinger, USA

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CONTRAST

beautiful work, Satish....your questions fill the unanswered title perfectly....jimbo-James Marshall Goff

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FATHERLESS

This a captivating write for a Friday morning, thank you for sharing your words today..always-Michael J. Falotico

Way to pour it out of the quill! -Robb A. Kopp

 

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PUZZLING

Hello Satish reflections of our mortality expressed in the cycles of renewal, Peace and joy in own discoveries . Thank you for sharing and have a nice weekend to you. -Pattra Shuwaswat, Netherlands

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LINEAGE

Very touchy and realistic picture you have drawn, Satish- Dr.Ram Mehta

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CRISIS

Am not sure of the meaning....well written.- Doris Culverhouse

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INTELLECT

Satish one of your finest. With metaphoric outpour the mind is transfused with words and interpretation from Holocaust to Dementia. The life of the poem begins when it is read and perceived, thank you so much for sharing. I am honored to read your work. :)- Marcia Schechinger, USA


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IRONICAL

Your poetry shines with a style
of your own that is unique like
the stars above….-Parespeare

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NAKEDNESS

a lot can be read into this work; almost self defining. i enjoyed this. thank you,-Chuck Keys

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Windows

Sir, Enjoyed it profoundly. The succint images build together a wonderful experience.- Samrat Laskar, Hooghly

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BLACK ROSES

vivid, colorful. An interesting read. Days licking the night...Interesting- NightOwl

Good imagery, though it lacks co-ordinated direction. Mal-punctuation abrogates the works effulgence qualities...Too caotic...Many find it difficult to accurately punctuate poetry...However there is a very simple resolve to this problem...Do what some of our Classic Scribes did....They waved punctuation ! - Frank James Ryan,Jr./FjR

painful roses......- premji premji

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OF LANGUAGE

Satish, a great poem with suitable use of metaphors to describe the nuances of language to pave the way for peace.-Jacinta Ramayah, Malaysia.


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PRIDE OF VALLEY

Interesting well written poem... your talent is shown in every line...love- Michael J. Falotico

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ONLY METAPHORS

Satish you have the magic in your metaphoric writings, I really enjoy reading your work and wonder, at times, if I am perceiving the complete picture. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry. :-Marcia Schechinger, USA


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SHACKLES

I like this, the images used are interesting. Mystical, all is not what it seems.-raskin bobbins

Beauty bejewelling imagination ... awesome poetry. love it. Be honored for you to be my friend- David Smalling

As the week ends I find myself reading and enjoying the many diverse poems here at PoetrySoup today. I am glad to see your poetry among these Satish. Have a wonderful weekend. Love,-Carol Brown

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JUST BEAUTY

Enjoyed reading your poetry today Satish. Hope you have a wonderful day. Love,- Carol Brown

Quite a modern writer, brings me to the edge of my seat. I camn feel your genius, my friend-David Smalling

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TERRIFED

A nice and an unique poem, Sathishji.- medhini 


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The Walls

Vermaji, i've been reading your posted poems regularly, but find it hard to comment. I know they're good poems, you build wonderful images. But they are too obscure for my (unsophisticated) mind that always seeks a meaning.- Malsawmi Jacob, Mumbai


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LOST MEANINGS

I enjoyed reading your poetry today Satish. I am looking forward to tomorrow and what I might read of yours again. Never let your pen lay and dry out. The best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love,- Carol Brown

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A SOMBER NIGHT

Satish soulful images in this talented poem of love and dreams. You have a sense of vocabulary that has a educated yet natural flow that is very emotional and appealing to the readers. Thank you for sharing your works with us, Satish. :)- Marcia Schechinger, USA


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UNABUSED

in a vein of green water, O my curse
I will scoop you into my poem
to become a daisy.
beautifully said ….- renu rakheja


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FALLING FALLING

Satish as always your work is full of images and thought provoking sensations. "...Cut moon as death walks between stars..." a melancholy line that shows the artist in you as it connects this poem beautifully. Thanks for giving us all the opportunity to read your work- Marcia Schechinger, USA


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PAGES

all stanzas are independent.... together they are marvelous.....- premji premji

that last one is superb- Leslie Alexis

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WHISPERING SPARROWS

Premji...you are most outspoken about life, society & Religion .Good on ya' sir ! To OPINE on issues that "effect our lives" is to OPEN our eye's to the issues that "reflect our lives"....-Frank James Ryan,Jr./FjR

poet is playing chess with god... religion is playing death along with god!- premji premji

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Superb title, profound poem. May your pen continue to be blessed,- Sandra Fowler, United States


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COMPARISON

Quite meeting an intelligent end. Love the word mega-mix.- Jude Ashiedu, Nigeria


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ANCHORED BRIEFLY

Well conceived and composed poem on Anchored Briefly i.e. the circle and cycle of libe, Satish-Dr.Ram Mehta

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INDIVIDUALLY

how powerfu lines....... the last stanza is stunning.......- premji premji

Find imagery with strong message Satish. The final lines are haunting.- Fay Slimm

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SUICIDAL WISH

Enjoyed reading your impressive poetry today Satish. Have not read for almost a week now. I had a wonderful vacation. Have a wonderful day. Love,-Carol Brown

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अंहकार

आपकी रहस्यमयी रचनाओं का रहस्य गहराता चला जा रहा सर, बधाई !!!- Harish Chandra Lohumi


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PERHAPS

lovely. deep thoughts- Leslie Alexis

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SOFTNESS

Death knows the way of gliding.... you tell everything through this line!- premji premji

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WHY

satishji, this poem pierces my soul....... honour killings are absolute madness....... without love what is the point in honour?- premji premji

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ALONG THE SORROW

Satish with your magic of imagery, the readers again can feel the emotions and despair of the broken and hope one day we might be able to mend it. Thank you always for sharing your work. :)-Marcia Schechinge, USA


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Perhaps

A very interesting string of images. Regards.- Malsawmi Jacob, Mumbai


Beautiful write indeed, Sir. Wirh regards,- Shigufta Hena Uzma, Roorkee


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WOUNDED DANCE

The screams wake up the dark blood. Intense! - Donna Chandler

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THE SAME KIND

Satish..this one is really dynamite poetry.. every verse has a poeer punch in it.. enjoyed the creativity and interesting descriptions luv..- Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S.

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Why

Dear Sir, a very reflective theme. Reminds me of the degrading issue of honour killing. With regards,- Shigufta Hena Uzma, Roorkee

Indignation boils over against the immoral star flags in the society from this poem. Fine. Thanks.- P Nasarudheen, Kasargod, Kerala

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WOUNDED DANCE

Satish, I particularly am impressed with your opening stanza: "A rock becomes a philosopher. Refuses to move,looking at the stars." Your expressions are very deep and interpretation I believe is individual geared to the reader. Quite thought-provoking.- Nancy Crossland, USA


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STONED

intense Satish....will keep reading it again...jimbo- James Marshall Goff


The last two lines sums up your message tou want to convet, Satish- Dr.Ram Mehta

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REASONING

well penned gem you hav shared here...Michael-Michael J. Falotico

Well narrated thoughts on reasoning, Satish-Dr.Ram Mehta

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REALPOLITIK

Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one..- Sara Kendrick

Howa are you today? must be a contest with talisman- Doris Culverhouse

Intriguing poem here. You employed a lot of mysterious and strong metaphors here~- Chris D. Aechtner

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SHAMEFUL

Congrats Satish on your featured pome this week on the Soup.. a nice one to share with us all.. my friend.. with luv..- Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S.

Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week here at PoetrySoup Satish. Love,- Carol Brown

Dark poem ... loved the imgaery you used ... and the atmosphere you created with your words congrates on being featured this week love - Jayne Eggins

Interesting thoughts in this good write that is featured on homepage this week..Congratulations on your feature..- Sara Kendrick

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JILTED

Smile ~ "You" never seem to let myself down amid "Your Poes" for, no matter what the subject or topic of they, they are "Always" written amid the expressions of "A Souls Profound; Simply, 'BEAUTIFUL!!!'" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always,' & All You Love, 'Forever,'" John! ~ Smile, "Have A Most Beautiful & Blessed of Day, 'Beautiful Satish,' Amid 'The Arms of Such Love' That, Shall 'Never' Let 'You' Go;" Bye Beautiful Satish!:) ~...


Smile ~ "There 'You Are,' The Amazing, Talented & 'Beautiful, Satish Verma!!!'" ~ You know I have been sooo very much, wanting to catch up to "Your Splendors" but, I have been soo busy etc., and have for the most part been unable to as of yet but, believe me dear, "You," are upon my things to do list; high upon its sheet ~ ....


Smile ~ Actually, "Beautiful Satish Verma," I find myself thinking of "Your Magnificent Brightness" often and, its just a matter of a bit of time before, I find myself sitting daily aside "Your Verse" and, being blessed by "Your Brilliant Bright!!!" ~ As a matter of fact, "Lovely Satish," I have spent moments here and there amid "Your Souls Reflective Words" a few times as of late and ~ ....John Rhinem

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LIFTING

Thank you for sharing your poetry Satish. Poets here offer such diverse writings and to me it is a pleasure to read each and everyone. I will not be here at the Soup to read from Friday through Monday. I hope you will find mountains of inspiration during that time. I look forward to reading when I return. Have a great weekend. Love,-Carol Brown

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CONTEMPORARY

very well written as always….nice!- Parespeare


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Waiting

Yes,the "bald beliefs"and 'bald landscape' make a bold disbelief in God. -Nasarudheen.P., Kasargod.Kerala.India


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WHITE HOUSE

It was a rape of a city. Go ahead. I still speak the old phrases with back pain. -labs454

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SHAMEFUL

Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week here at PoetrySoup Satish. Love-Carol Brown

Dark poem ... loved the imgaery you used ... and the atmosphere you created with your words congrates on being featured this week love-Jayne Eggins

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DAY OF JUDGEMENT

Wow I missed reading a lot of excellent poetry this past weekend. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration Satish. Love,-Carol Brown

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SMOKING CANDLE

Satish a brilliant poem written with your imbeccable style and grace using metaphors like "butterfly" and "volcano" to create a extreme effect of gentle versus dominant. May one day the world find a common ground so as to live in a more parallel world of peace. Thank you for sharing your work, Marcia :)- Marcia Schechinger


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WISDOM

Enjoyed reading your poetry today Satish. Love, Carol Brown

Unique approach to wisdom you got here, really enjoyed your write this afternoon.. Take care Wilma Neels

"one unreal moon slaps the dark clouds" ---Cool, Verma! love that line. unique poem. Enjoyed -Robert A. Dufresne

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TIME TO ANSWER *

Smile ~ "Hello Beautiful, Gifted & Precious Satish Verma;" I hope that life has been treating "Your Radiance" perfectly dear and, I look forward to being near "Your Beauty" again; "Your Souls Verse;" never to look away!!! ~ And, "Thank You for 'Your Sweetness'" of a reply; joy inside ~ "My Love & Warmth to You Always &, All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have The Most Beautiful of Days, 'Dear Lovely Satish,' Amid The Deepest Oceans, of 'The Deepest Love;'" Bye Beautiful Lady!:) ~-John Rhinem

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Message

It should be "lightning", without the "e". Good poem!- Dragonet


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