vivid, colorful. An interesting read. Days licking the night...Interesting- NightOwl
Good imagery, though it lacks co-ordinated direction. Mal-punctuation abrogates the works effulgence qualities...Too caotic...Many find it difficult to accurately punctuate poetry...However there is a very simple resolve to this problem...Do what some of our Classic Scribes did....They waved punctuation ! - Frank James Ryan,Jr./FjR
painful roses......- premji premji
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