ZERO HOUR

Very nicely constructed- sanctus

true colour of death.........- premji premji

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STONING

Those stones need sorting, I think. So many questions, and so much mystery.- Don

Absolutely LOVE it!- sanctus

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GROUNDING

Last night you claimed fathering 100 moons....Tonight you have a a gravid ivory pig purging babies....We have now sojourned from Moon to Mars in nano light-seconds....only to realise that the truth had been buried from mortal life all along,and delivered, no less, via ghost's of lies, whilst aliens from the Planet Red discharged great purgings far beyond the scope of common & comprehending rationale....And, so i have to wonder if either Abbadon or Salvador Dali have anything to do with thjis poetic documentation, as i do lament for the sow-seeded babies of lunar conception. And, well,since K-PAX is one of my favourite all-time movies,....i will not sleep in peace tonight, 'less i beckon to query you on a wonderment of mine that pertains to your skill-set in the Fine-Arts ! So, i must ask you,my friend..../////\\\\\Aside from your trancic literary minds-eye scopings....do you also endeavour in the wrist-flecking creation of Abstract Art canvass painting?Because, my 3rd Eye tells me that someone as artfully engaged as you.... must have a lot more in your esoterical repertoire than the mighty pen and slices of papyra!- Frank James Ryan,Jr./FjR

The final sentence say so much...lies become ghosts when the truth is unearthed. Much to think about here. Thank you.- Don

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BURNING ACROSS THE SKY

“Can I touch your blue veins
my moon?
They had been aching to step out.” – a vivid image.- Gion Gion


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BLAZING TRAIL

May your week bring you good health,may your heart overflow with love, and may your life bring you amazing inspiration to continue your writing. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning and thank you for sharing it Satish. Love,-Carol Brown

Your bleeting heart runs red! The cycle of life and death so vividly captured! But, I must say animals poach their own to survive, so I am not a bleeding heart when a human takes an animal life.- Stephen Parker

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Wilderness

Sir, where do you find these amazing images like this 'medical waste' et al? Your range of imagery is amazing and awe-inspiring. Wish I could write like you someday.-Samrat, Hooghly


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PICTURES

You are the first person i know whose 3rd eye spectrum is somehow enabled to optically depict "frosting" (be it ice on the lake or icing on the cake )as being complex or difficult to grasp....then again, if the frosting is slippery,perhaps, ahhh,never mind.......It's only poetry, and where would it be without a thrust of chimeric verve now & then,yes?....?-Frank James Ryan,Jr./FjR

ely verse.....-Sylvia Marquetta

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CARBON CHOKING

Satish "...I am on the run now to graft the skin on unhealing wounds, unanswerable", you certainly are such a writer. You keep the unexplainable behavior of our wars between people open, so as we can feel the pain of the past and the present. In doing this, it just might promote a better future, one that is fair and without the destruction of lives. Thank you so much, my mind is vacuum absorbing your verses. :)- Marcia Schechinger, USA


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LOVE SCENES

Fathered 100 Moons, did ya' now, Satish?!/////////////////// I've got news for you,my friend...you were peeling a hell of a lot more than tangerines !Now, the Gold Mine & hissing of a snake is more in line with your grandiose admisson !!!!lol!....Your plethoral eccentricity is only superseded by the surrealistic manner in which you continue to exercise it, deep within thatmercurial ,yet sophisticated mind of yours....- Frank James Ryan,Jr./FjR

unconventional poem,reminds me of a modern art !the lines make you wonder whats coming next.great work......-ritty patnaik

Excellent- sanctus

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A SOMBER NIGHT

like the clever play of words in this poem !great write......- ritty patnaik

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BEAST AND LOVERS

Satish a heartbreaking emotional poem of death and the feelings that follow. "...Only eyes will speak now", aside from poetry, the truest sense of ones heart is seen in the pain or joy of the eyes. Your mind is a endless stream of thoughts, giving the readers wonderful metaphoric poems. Thank you Satish :)- Marcia Schechinger, USA


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IN REVERSE

Satish "...The mankind stripped of songs...", the march of remnants of war and the dying life and spirit echoes in this poem as existence is a metphor, a hypocrrisy of sustenance. As always in your work, the visual is vivid. Thank you for sharing your work my friend, your talent in metaphoric writing amazes me. :)- Marcia Schechinger, USA


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ECSTASY

satish, i bask in the tender, swaying mood of this piece.. just lyrical and well- penned! warmest,- nette onclaud

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PAIN OF ELEGY

Indeed an Elegy! Life torments day & night and never leaves you a re moments rest..........only the flowers of children are a solace to the burning soul?- nimal dunuhinga

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HEAVENLY GUIDANCE

Nice one, maintained good flow throughout, I believe it is on Tulsi Puja o something if i am not wrong!!-savior22


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SLIPPING

I like the eccentricity of this. Makes you think. =)- rocketdog93

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THE RETREAT

You are a great poet.Your exploration of metaphors makes your poems outstanding.Thanks for this one-Joseph Osita, Nigeria


Satish your mind is brilliant with history, times, and passion for peace. You sustain the metaphoric usage to clearly get your point across and that is what draws me to your work. "...Terror waits on the lips of sorrow, like an obsessive maniac ready to jump... Some candle, bring me some light". As always for me, your work is always eye opening and thought provoking and in this case - hopeful. Thank you for sharing my friend. :)- Marcia Schechinger, USA


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WILL YOU MARRY ME ?

Smile ~ It is good to visit "Your Treasures" verse again my dear &, I hope that life is treating "Your Brightness" perfectly ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Tomorrow 'My Dear, Lovely Satish,' Amid The Gently Spoken Vows of, 'Beautiful Love;'" Bye!:) ~- John Rhinem (Date: 11/24/2010 4:50:00 PM)

Smile!? ~ Another profoundly painted poe "My 'Dear, Precious & Priceless Satish Verma!!!'" ~ "Your Beauties" canvas' seem to hold way too much melancholies somehow my dear & as for the dew well, it Must return unto the bossom from whence it came although, "Joy," shall hopefully be its nurishing of the precious soil before in doing so within this, moment of Mercies latter days rains; "Beautiful, Rain" ~ ....Cont:)- John Rhinem (Date: 11/24/2010 4:43:00 PM)


nice to see you posting again with your pen so fluid and enchanting, satish.. nature becomes you! omhanti! warmest,- nette onclaud

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Trauma

It appears like topsy-turvy wild dream when one's imagination runs riot.-Rajaram Ramachandran, Juhu, Mumb


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My fault

Yes, the collective guilt. Nice poem.-U K Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur


The confession of a faulty man dramatically presented in two-two lines.-Rajaram Ramachandran, Juhu, Mumbai


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LOVING A STREET

Satish with so many wonderful metaphors in this poem, I would be quoting them all to chose my favorite. But the ending, "...Learning to listen intensely, inner voice, time caresses the feathers of forgiveness" - now that is important. We can not help others if we are caught in anger. Thank you for this wonderful poem. :)- Marcia Schechinger, USA


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SPELLBOUND

Satish,
totally strange,- Gion Gion


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BURNS OF HATRED

It's quite emotional as well as sentimentakl write, Satish- Dr.Ram Mehta

Enjoyed reading this one..Very expressive and creative work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..- Sara Kendrick

Interesting imagery in relation to emotion. I'll think about this. When a tulips petals fall in late spring the stamen is there. I think of essence with this.- raskin bobbins

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THE BUDDHA WAS GOING TO WEEP

Tibet comes to mind while reading your poem. And sadness. Good job. Namaste- linda milgate

superb imagery on shattering of llife's balance, satish... if only people can do a vippasana :) hope you can drop by my page to read my piece called " pensee...", a new form i introduced here... thanks you and namaste! warmest,-nette onclaud

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FROM A DOT

Thought provoking poem. Congratulations on having it featured. I wish you continued success with your writing.-    Karen O'Leary

Congratulations on your poem featured this week, Satish. Love,-   Audrey Carey

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Satish. Love,-    Carol Brown

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ASIA AT THE EDGE

Sathish,I enjoyed your profound thoughts this morning.Nice write.-FABIYAS M V

The way you pray to "write off karma" because of hate in the "land of Buddha" creates a very sad irony, Satish. The sense of shame is anything but transparent in this poem. And be assured that you are not alone in these feelings. There are times when many of us bemoan the tragedies that fill our world. But you put a new perspective for us to consider. A very powerful, incredibly well-written poem. Love,- Carolyn Devonshire

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Breaking from Past

How is it I have not read you before now? Definitely another favorite author to add to my list. I love the way you paint your images like an artist with a crayon who somehow still manages to create a-April Pittman

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RED AND WHITE

Many metaphors. Indeed the art of dying by both the Lama and Ricard teach us much wisdom, for those who will listen without prejudice. -Andy Turner

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BLOODSCAPE

Truth where is thy truth, or even men of nobility. 
You bring to life the dearth of such life.-Andy Turner

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PROGNOSIS

Since the name of this piece is Prognosis, I'm thinking, from the words that make up the verses, that the prognosis is dire indeed-Donna Chandler

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Pictures

Satish Sir, Great thoughts behind these words. I often wonder at your energy level Sir.-Ramesh Anand, Malaysia

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SANDPAPER

Satish with dark enlightment you hold reality in your hand like a small piece of a rare gem. A truth to be opened when a a sore is broken. From father to son hatred starts in too many playgrounds, "...tiny kids playing with bombs of hate...". Thank you for continuing to promote reality that peace may one day happen in all of our societies. :)- Marcia Schechinger, USA


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FALLING FALLING

your imagination opens and challenges the readers mind ...your poems are magical and mystical and have a deep blue depth in their verses ...this one no different ...- Nikunj

Powerful, vivid, stunning imagery and writing.- Pendemic

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WORDLESS SILENCE

“The soul sits outside
the body. Pollution hits the mind. The words
eat the emptiness of facts and lies. A vertical
descent of speech” – Hopelessness or disgust? Is it the speaker, the words or the listener who deceives or is deceived in a labyrinth of noise?
Memory zigzaging – a notoriously feeble faculty.
“man’s failing gods” – It has been said that God is a delusion but maybe the true delusion is man’s conception of the nature of divinity,
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PATTERN

Satish,
an enjoyable read.
There appears to be an intimacy of a profound nature mirrored in the grandeur of the imagery.
The use of “handprint”, “writ”, “eyes”(finger prints and iris scans of the modern digital identity) seeming mark an individuality but which is something that is evolving – “I hear you in your becoming.”. I also liked the mix of sensual experience in the first verse,
Fergus

“Are you me and me are you in sameness?” – (and I am you)

Comment by Gion Gion on 16 November, 2010 @ 7:09 pm 

“Sometimes we were talking with our skin only.
The sea was roaring on the shores.

When fog retreats, we know each other
in abandonment as fish in water of life.” – very impressive lines

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ANAPHYLACTIC SHOCK

a delightful mix of light and dark. satish... fascinated am i.. warmest- nette onclaud

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CONFERRED GUILT

This is admirable. The first line is especially done well.- Mudiaga Uwojeya, Nigeria


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ARRIVAL

It sounds deep and thought provoking. But I may need to read this twice or thrice. THanks for sharing.- Elizabeth Olesen, Denmark


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FROM A DOT

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Satish. Love,- Carol Brown


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IN A TENT VILLAGE

Satish one of your most emotional verses, as the reader sees the images of people suffering in this world, just longing for the most minute of a dream. I must say I woke up a bit cranky this morning, and read your poems to remind me how truly lucky I am. I wish we could find a shield for such pain. May peace find a path in this world. Thank you!- Marcia Schechinger, USA


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FROM THE CHERRY BLOSSOMS

Sad one that you are parted from your loved one..- Sara Kendrick

a delightful read, satish! full of radiant imagery... warmest, -nette onclaud

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GOD’S BIRTHDAY

Again your style shines through and mesmerizes. Thank you for sharing.- Pendemic

a beautiful ode to faith. just warms my soul. very beautiful!- Miss B

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KISSING CALDRONS

profound..- Chris Irish Alagban

Tough matter to deal with!- T A Ramesh

The unusual title caught my attention, but that last stanza is fantastic. Your words are very rich, you've painted such a vivid picture one can't help but see that fire and those blood stained footprints...quite a piece. Great work.- NightOwl

More food for deep thought from your awesome mind Satish. Fine read.- Fay Slimm

Powerful and vivid imagery converge here to give the reader such a rush! I like your style. An enjoyable read.- Pendemic

Nice poem, love your work- sanctus

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A SOUL DIES

Good morning, Satish. I think your poem is interesting and I like repeating: ''Ashes were sent to the lake.'' I imagine how the verse is pronounced on dozens of silent voices but I don't know why. Anyway, well done.- Jelena Mijajlovic, Serbia


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A CRAZY THEME

Your poem is nicely written, but a bit hard to understand. Thanx for sharing...- Padmini Munilal, Guyana


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IRONICAL

well expressed and written - sanctus

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CRACKED SUMMER

Marcia Schechinger	Satish your graphic and powerful metaphors of war times and families generates the reader to bow their heads in hopelessness of stopping such scenes. "...dawn it was far away, the goddess inhaling earth's ice", I hope one day "dawn" will not be so far away. Thank you for sharing, yours in friendship Marcia :)	USA	11/11/2010 10:23:38 AM
Westly Shaw	Peace that what this poem did for me as I read it, and thanks for writing.	USA	11/11/2010 1:45:23 AM

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DESCENDING

Well written- Westly Shaw, USA


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Stoning

This one makes me think - in many ways. Thanks for posting. Regards- SK Iyer, Pune, India

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* Voiceless

very relatable. i love it. very vivid images.- SminlingInTheDark 

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BONES OF WINDS

each words carefully chosen to make this poem a solid, artful piece.. thanks! warmest,- nette onclaud

loved it- Suresh Iyer

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CONSUMPTION

A peace poem and well written, thanks for sharing!-Westly Shaw

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PIRACY

Satish your metaphoric images used in your poetry brings both mental and physical reactions from the reader, as we draw on our youth and dreams, "the age of tulips". Here we watch the world in discomfort and in shock of these times and the events occuring we "float thoughtless in speach" unable to believe. As always Satish, I am amazed at your metaphoric imagery in your work. Peace be with you this day. :)- Marcia Schechinger, USA

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INWARD JOURNEY

You did excellently well my friend am loving it here luv-kelechi emeaba

riveting offering that runs deep with beguiling metaphors, satish... all the best to you.. warmes,- nette onclaud

How very sad for you. Good luck with your work it is good and very colorful.- marymkilker marymkilke

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RENAISSANCE

Satish,
for me, great lines -
“The petrol burns with hate”

“The babies flick like tender candles
inside the saints.”- Gion Gion

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FAITHFUL

Marcia Schechinger	Satish I read and reread you poems and am always astounded at the hidden meanings in every word chosen. The time, the place, the religous beliefs, the hatred that brings forth more hatred. Here within your works I delve to see the states of war held within some human flesh, and I experience emotional pain for all those who suffered/suffer at the hands of war and mutilation. Thank you for always giving us such fine poetic work, Marcia :)	USA	11/7/2010 9:07:45 AM
Westly Shaw	Intresting! different, not more so or less so just different.	USA	11/7/2010 12:54:23 AM
Cynthia Baldwin	I LOVE this!! One of those rare pieces that puts your senses on overdrive - I could feel reality shift a little. Amazing work!!!	USA	11/6/2010 9:25:43 PM

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ANCHORAGE

Outstanding writing here..-sanctus

This is a gorgeous write! Sometimes you are left speechless as I am here- Thank you Satish, Abby- Thundering Waltz

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UNABUSED

And like a tres jolie femme, a floral as delicate as the Daisy must ne're be used, abused or sole-shoed !Thus on paper of rice we shall sojourn 'tween the dew drops, yes?...-Frank James Ryan,Jr./FjR

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TERROR TRAIL

Satish this particular piece really clutches the heart, as your talent in writing takes the reader from our simple world into a world of Holocaustal thinking, and we cry for the earth and plead for injustice to stop that all might have a day in the sun. Thank you Satish, I see a bit of technique change in your work, it reads very well. I like it :)- Marcia Schechinger


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AN ACID RAIN

funny in a way...well done!-Doris Culverhouse

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STUPIDITY

The ideas are well conceived. I really like the poem. Please read my poem 'I am not a poet' and have your say.- Mohd. Akmal Nazir


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DON’T THROW THE BOMB

Yeah, of course. The bombs that are being showed should be stopped otherwise we'll have to dig out only dead bodies. War is not a solution but a problem itself. Good poem- Mohammad Muzzammil (10/28/2010 10:18:00 AM)


Yeah, bomb throwing should be stopped and both parties should come on talking table. Because war is not a solution but a problem itself. Your poem is praiseworthy. Read my poem A CHILD'S DREAM that presents the riot scene in a dramatical way.- Mohammad Muzzammil (10/28/2010 10:23:00 AM)


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WOUNDED DANCE

A great poem too difficult to understand-regards- JVL NARASIMHA RAO


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A DAY OF COUNTING

Thanks for sharing!- Westly Shaw, USA


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PUZZLES

Nice!-Westly Shaw, USA


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INDOORS

Satish another wonderful metaphorical verse where the reader is caught in your words, "...ask some uncomfortable questions. I enter the eye of the wound...". Hopefully one day your talent will be heard by all, that the world might find peace and more joy. Thank you so very much for sharing. :)-Marcia Schechinger


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SOFTNESS

I enjoyed this poem very much. Joe - thank you- Byronic


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BEAUTY

Satish,
I read it first on my mobile and was intrigued with this poem.
Not you usual topic Beauty, on the face of it.
The re-working of the moon and sun images is clever.
These lines I like a lot -
” Amorphic I would not find the music

of words translated into a kiss”,
Gion

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