SPELLBOUND

A poem with wonderful insight!-Kamala


nice poem.- narain, jay p.

this is marvellous ..sensitive and meaningful- narain, jay p.

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TRAILING WAR

Hello Satish: Your poem testifies to the old saying that "War is Hell" with "the streets were livid with rustic murals...of splintered blood on walls" and your last verse holds you and your art accountable as a witness. - Paul Rainwater, USA


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CROSSING

Verma..,, enjoyed your poem. Stopping by to wish you lots of cheers & joy this comming new year.. May you always find new ways to share your talent and imagination with us here at the soup. Happy new year to you and your family,, God bless,.miss.-(Destroyer ((Poet

Very visual - this is good- Liz Walsh

I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry this morning Satish. I will be back after the New Year to read more of your poetry. Wishing you a very Happy New Year. Love,- Carol Brown

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PLASMA FLOATS

Wow. It is very interesting....I don't quite understand it.- Cheeky Missy


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VICTORY OF FALL

I'm not sure of the direction taken, but the images are clear. - Ronald Hull

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THE FROST

'The Frost' There comes a day when love will take the of place hatred; even if it'll be all the way to that happy morn, when we all shall rise. Nonetheless, SAtish Verma, love will prevail.- Clarence Prince

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UNBELIEVING

Remarkable visuals of nature at its best.- Andy Turner

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PATTERN

 likes this poem.-sridevi

Brilliantly written.-michael burke

great poem.-narain, jay p.

...ethereal and esoteric....'Sometimes we were talking with our skin only.' ...'.When fog retreats, we know each other/in abandonment as fish in water of life.' A great write. TFS.-eonard Dabydeen


Truly a masterpiece ...absolutely ...:)-sridevi


this is a masterpiece ...divine and real , contains wisdom that is sought after by so many yet achieved by so few ....this is peaceful to read through .....TFS-Nikunj

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HALF-CLOSED LIDS

The Art of Self-reflection can be painful. That from Death will come a renewed Spirit does not make it any easier... 
Love this one, Satish! 
Be Well,- C. McGovern-Bowen

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JEALOUS BLOOD

Satish a moving poem of the past, and the memories endured by those who survived horrific scenes of inhumanity. Each time I read your works I am shocked into a moment of past, and think of life, war and the fear of all who suffered in concentration camps. Your fight for peace is a true tribute to them all. Thank you.- Marcia Schechinger, USA


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FANGS

Powerfully scribed, Santish. "frozen footsteps of self-denial" resonates on a cosmic level. 
Peace & Blessings,- C. McGovern-Bowen

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Pain of elegy

the first para is superb and striking. - rm shanmugam chettiar, chennai


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AGAINST THOUGHTS

feisty rant woth all the expressive language you so spoil us with, verna... yes! huggs- nette onclaud

Righteous squander! Satish! BRAVO!!!- James Marshall Goff

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SHELLING UNCOUNTED

Satish very subtle and yet real flows like a river all through this awesome poem .Thank you best wishes to you in the new year- Pattra Shuwaswat, Netherlands


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Different Shades

very well done- janoscarhansen http://cms.boloji.com

THE MELTING

Listen to the guilt,

Thats why my name is sinner..
i ilke it very much sir
Congrtaes- Sinner 

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THINNING

A stunning write.- michael burke

Awesome write. I like the narration.- Kamala

wow ...- sridevi

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WORDLESS SILENCE

Thought provoking in its essence.- Kamala

Yet if one embraces the Wood of The Cross, instead of theanemic value of an ostensibly jocular agnostic and/or atheistic notion of a "Big BANG", nos, a"Black Hole"....perhaps the inconsistency & trepidation which is paragon for a Mind that zig-zags, or cannot grasp onto committ to a theory or belief without pockets of doubt or fear of consequence comes with he or she that has yet to take a walk on the side of Faith & a Paradise beyond all this.....Merry Christmas, & A Healthy, Fruitful , Creative(and Moon-ful...lol!) New Year. - Frank James Ryan,Jr./FjR

A beautiful soul searching write.- Chris G. Vaillancourt

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NOBODY WEEPS

Satish again your metaphors have given this verse a strong and blundt look at war and death. This particular piece gives the reader insight to the numbers of babies executed and our hearts follow history with the dread of truth. Your formidable work of awaking individuals to the truth helps all to understand the fear and loss that occurred at such 'camps'. Thank you for your words.- Marcia Schechinger, USA


What a use of metaphor?I enjoyed reading the poem.- Joseph Osita, Nigeria




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OBTUSE MYSELF

how picturesque this write is with subtle imprints on your theme, satish... just awesome! huggs- nette onclaud

Some cults are all-encompassing! Sometimes when a jaundiced believer escapes their grasp, they try and free themselves from the tentacles of faith as well! You have so aptly described this phenomenon! Enjoyed your fulminations!- Stephen Parker

Very interesting piece - well done!- Liz Walsh

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INTROSPECTION

Thoughts and symbols flow from the ocean of a great mind! Really emotional. poems should flow like this.-U K Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur

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SPELLBOUND

For the Yaksha Prachana, "What is the greatest wonder in this world?" Dharmaputra answers, "Everyone thinks that he will be alive tomorrow."  If the time of death is known life will not have any charm.  So God kept the death as a secret.-Rajaram Ramachandran, Juhu, Mumbai (Camp: Vijayawada)

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WORDLESS SILENCE

A beautiful soul searching write.-Chris G. Vaillancourt

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DENUDING

outstanding.- Chris G. Vaillancourt


Yes, but, if we de-nude....what will become of the much anticipated 2011 Playboy Calender ? Heffner will have another stroke , for starters!.........-Frank James Ryan,Jr./FjR


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Crossing

I usually pick out a few lines when I make my comments, not this time. This was the one line that really spoke to me. The body was arched in a denial mode Thats it solid- knightcall


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FIRE AND STRAW

Satish as you write of "mother and child" of wars, my special prayer will be this day of Christmas for me, is that no one has such memories and peace is the gift given to all whatever religion one might be.-Marcia Schechinger, USA


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*DEPRESSION

  likes this poem.- nirvana1

Powerful write with a wonderful flow to it.-michael burke

Nice theme and flow.. TFS!-nirvana1

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INTENSITY

Wow!! The poem just flows off ...- Kamala

...and the strong shall survive...'The predator will get away/eating the gold,'... Intense indeed.- Leonard Dabydeen

beautifully expressed , well depict... "...Burn, burn my kisses. The heat will melt the eyes," nice indeed..- Raju Baruah

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THE GOODBYE

A powerful poem, a cry for peace and the hope for doors to peace. A poet like you is a reconciling agent. Thanks, dear friend, for this contribution.- Elizabeth Olesen, Denmark


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COLOR CHANGE

mysterious and well-crafted, satish... you pulled me in! huggs-nette onclaud

Smile!? ~ "Ow, 'My Dear Precious & Priceless Satish!!!'" ~ Sooo many thoughts I find born inside this circulations poe but, 'tis the season to be jolly so, I shall refrain from my deeper thoughts and, simply, let my Soul embrace this "Love" for, "All of Life!!!" ~ Hope "Your Beauty" is doing well my dear &, "Your Precious Heart," is filled with "Light" ~ "Profound Poe" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Happy Holidays;" Bye!:) - John Rhinem

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DEATH AND APOLLO

Satish "a flock of sheep was butchered by a wild beast" a soulful ending to the life and death of those who suffered the holocaust. Whatever war makes "fear unlimited": lines to be 'crucified', poverty through greed of political decisions, meek young boys pulling numbers for draft; history and today takes our sheep and buries them for "coin". Thankful for sharing in this constant companionship we all seek for - freedom and peace.- Marcia Schechinger, USA


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A CRACKED VISIT

quite a flowing piece, verna.. the last line astounded me... delightful! huggs- nette onclaud

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YELLOW FACE

Good work. Keep on writing.- Chris G. Vaillancourt

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MANIA

Poignant and well written- Chris G. Vaillancourt

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SAVINGS

what an interesting trip. The wrong sex by teeth sounded a mite bit painful in all the painful ways, and the mention of sheen reminded me of the tabloid story. All in all this read has utterly confused me.- NightOwl


Interesting write.-Chris G. Vaillancourt

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SCARF ON HEAD

What a wonderful poem is this one!Enjoyed.-kashinath karmakar

Excellent stuff here. Loved the last stanza the best. "A singlethorn will not be envious" is a great, great line. I like your style of writing as well. It has a certain oomph to it if that makes any sense. Keep writing, keep dreaming. Hope to see more from you.- Martin Graham

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Depression

The title captures the hopelessness (among other things) at the time of his suicide ... -ravi kalyani, bengalooru

The path of violence, whether you agree or not, has no ups, it merely goes down. Kanu Shanyal, I am sorry to say, entered a tunnel for which there was no light at the end. May his soul rest in peace!-Kumarendra Mallick, Hyderabad

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GENEROSITY

Satish a wonderful use of metaphoric work. Between the melancholy there is some lightness in your verse, I hope one day for you, you will not be the owl who disregards the stars. Your continuous work for peace, by revealing the facts first hand, keeps us humbled in our trivial problems of life and times. Thank you Satish :)- Marcia Schechinger, USA


hi Satish..what a poem..the sense of words you choose in every poem is just amazing..its depth could make us readers realize how much you write it..and you're a great poet..I believe...(- Eldy Catindoy, Philippines 


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SAVINGS

alright i love your poetry. it has a maturity mine can not have. like they have this professional look ya know what i mean? they are sophisticated and profound. great work i plan to read more of your work.- Anchu Verma


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SHAMEFUL

Satish you bring the message of 'the perfect society' and the illness in thought of such behavior to a peak where we bow our heads for such sickness. "...Fertility will come in petri dishes...", as always for you and for us as readers, your knowledge and memories take poetry to a very high level. I am proud to be one of your readers.-Marcia Schechinger, USA




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RENAISSANCE

Liked and bookmarked! "The bleeding revolution has overturned tomorrow" is simply brilliant. A timeless line.-Patrick McFarland

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IN MAKING

likes this poem, well crafted and direct, nice write- Chris G. Vaillancourt

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DENUDING

Yes, but, if we de-nude....what will become of the much anticipated 2011 Playboy Calender ? Heffner will have another stroke , for starters!.........- Frank James Ryan,Jr./FjR

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Beyond the Clique

Satish has once again graced the pages if allpoetry.com. I love the pilgrim of negation line. You have no trouble turning multi syllabics into graceful lines exactamente.- knightcall

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CHRONIC WAIT

Satish with brilliance you create the scene of the 'sacrificial' bomber whose "sandals" are all that is left to worship for this hideous scene described as a belief; and the "hospice" of slaughter by the "non-believers". Your realistic account for such times gives us as readers insight to events and the lifes wasted do not go in vain as you strike our hearts with true accounts of this holocaust. Thank you.- Marcia Schechinger, USA


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ONE SIMPLE DAY

Enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Satish. Love.- Carol Brown

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NO RETURN

A truly impressive write- Chris G. Vaillancourt

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DEATH ON GRASS

Thank you for sharing your heart with us through your poetry here at PoetrySoup Satish. My time for reading and commenting will be short until after the New Year. So, today I send a wish from my house to yours. Have a Joyous Holiday and a Happy New Year. Please remember the sick and hungry in your prayers daily. Do all you can to help in anyway you can. Love and blessing, Carol and Family (Your smile can warm a heart)- Carol Brown

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PRIVATE MOORINGS

Satish with your gift of artistry you reveal a bit of yourself in this talented peace poem of revelation and voice for all peoples that longing for peace can not be a "whisper", but rather a shout, for war is still in continuum. "...I will talk to delphniums..." a wonderful metaphor of the blue flower that listened before the shouts, long ago when you whispered of sights and memories of war. Thank you Satish :)- Marcia Schechinger, USA


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SMELL OF NOTHING

Very well done..thought-provoking piece- Chris G. Vaillancourt

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de……..

Satish I am ever amazed at the presence of your works. None can read them fast, as they mold in the mind word by word until finally the reader feasts on your knowledge and experiences. With the "concentration camp", how could one not come back in an "alternative mind". As always for you, you give great insight to the reality of prejudice and inhumanity. In doing this, the reader is encouraged ever more greatly to pray and fight for peace. Thank you.- Marcia Schechinger, USA


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ANNIVERSARY OF FLIRTATION

A noble theme, well worded and crafted into a really worthy poem that makes me want to learn more about your philosophy.10.- Matt Mooney


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BURNING

Emotion has no chance to penetrate such wisdom. After the puppet show / the nest was calling... when a writing put its step to move on the space in such a way, simply a silent cry from deep deep of the human life overwhelmes the reader. Mathematics, calculation....alls are bogus dust dancing with puppetiers nail. 

But the consolation also runs with the spirit with a sense of immortality: 

After birth there was no death of my / rhyme. The flesh has gone, only 
the burning bones are lying / on bed of roses. 

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STRANGE MORROW

Each and every line is filled with touchy emotions and a heartfelt pain. 
thanks for sharing. - Seema Chowdhury


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PLASMA FLOATS

Shockingly (applied in the field of electricity) unique. 
Beautiful with its metaphor and imagery. Volcanic touch of aesthetic.... the reader swims. 
Regards, - Pranab (Apoet Bangla)


Well penned. Rich in imagery and style. Though terse yet deep.
Nice write.
I sincerely invite you write a comment on my poem 'False beauty.'- Mohd. Akmal Nazir


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MIRAGE

Nice poem to be read and appreciated. Thanks for sharing it.- Mohammad Muzzammil


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HUSHED SPEECH

People are always trying to find a 'meaning' to any poem they read. I habitually do this to, but try to remind myself that a meaning is not central to poetry. I admit I'm not understanding this poem. Even so, I can appreciate the imagery. I can't help but wonder, what was the writing process like for you? Was it that each line naturally fell into place from the back of your mind, or did you go over and edit, testing the sounds of each line to get to this? Interesting piece.- Ian McArthur


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PUZZLING

Today, enviormentally speaking....Green is a symbol of claenliness, and tranquility...ergo,the global-wide organisation "Greenpeace"! I like the variable pace-changes which you exercise with your usual air of surreal, yet depictive dexterity,and imageful adroitness....- Frank James Ryan,Jr./FjR

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THIS DAY

Satish "...I am ready to jump out the window, stories down on the legends, unburdened!", finishing lines that master the esteemed principles behind your poems. To teach, to prevent, to redirect humanity that such goings on will stop - that peace will one day be found for all peoples. Thank you for sharing your powerful work, using the art of poetry as a weapon against war and its abuse.- Marcia Schechinger, USA


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FLOWERING OF THE THOUGHT

A mysterious poem, yet at the same time sharply focused and clear - amazing- Paul James

The line "Solace of ancestral home was gone"..That would be so sad for all traces of ancestral home to be gone as in the tactile place, people of that place who were older, or in a memory that is suffering from Alzheimer's or some form of dementia...- Sara Kendrick

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A GREEN PRIDE HAS NO AMBITION NOW

Dang, satish! each word woven meaningfully to express your deep thoughts on life's travails... totally beguiled am i! huggs- nette onclaud

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LAND’S SMELL

Satish being a great fan of the metaphors, you enrich the meaning in your poems with bold and blundt visuals so as the reader can feel, taste and touch the devastation of war and want for peaceful nations. I can not fathom my world being turned upside down from "doorbell" to an amnesic state. Thank you for keeping us aware of those who have suffered at the hands of political or religious reasonings.- Marcia Schechinger, USA


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INTELLECT

Lunar Funerals can be quite a bit on the Dark. Side....Then again, being that a large gathering of the stratespheres bright stars were in attendance....There probably was no "Dark Side of The Moon", at all... Really...- Frank James Ryan,Jr./FjR


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XULON

I am reading some very amazing and diverse poetry this morning. I am glad yours was among the poetry I was able to read today. Thank you for sharing your writing with us Satish. Wishing you and yours a wonderful Holiday Season. Love- Carol Brown

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BOUND BY CEILING

Satish as always your works are a masterpiece of insights. To feel the hunger, the loss, the doom of being "Ostracized" in such a hideous manner. I wonder of the "black boots" and how they could see such pain and not dream hellish dreams at night. Thank you for sharing, I have learnt an insight of inhumanity that is found in a chapter of a book and you make it an emotional part of life.- Marcia Schechinger, USA


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BLIND SWINGS

Good morning Satish i adore this piece its ful of a meandering with a poignant undertone of life .Thank you for sharing.- Pattra Shuwaswat, Netherlands


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Smell of nothing

Life is ephemeral,

Life is a dream, a day dream,

And the coffin is the resting place,

The burning fire!

All are equal there. Very good, Sir-U K Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur

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ABSURD FLIGHT

Surreal...- Keith Robinson

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DEWDROP

Satish the visual concept of old and young alike facing the lack of life or future is unconceivable to us who live in freedom. With your images, "...surface tension - a venom creeps surging in twin black eyes...", the horrors before the massacres how could one not have a "Dewdrop" at such a holocaustal moment. Thank you for your poems, a diary of your mind and past occurences that one hopes never is recycled in this life.- Marcia Schechinger, USA


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OF LANGUAGE

Yes and No! Computer also functions with I O !- T A Ramesh

You speak of the language of life brilliantly-regards- JVL N RAO

Life's language is very Hoarse? My salutation!- nimal dunuhinga

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FRUGALITY

Satish a sight from the tortureous camps, some would put wax in their ears rather than hear the truth. But you boldly pay homage to those tortured and let their lives not be in vain as "outcasts" because some madmen found them necessary to be destroyed. I am humbled before those who suffer/suffered such humiliation and pain. Thank you for sharing your memories, it must be difficult at times to relive these slivered thoughts held in your mind. You have my deepest admiration, Marcia- Marcia Schechinger, USA


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ONCE UPON

Satish this particular piece, dedicated to our hungry children, incites the want to do more, "...something to be done for the hungry child's scream...". I, too, join you in the frustration of this mechanical world where self is greater than babies. I hope you message someday will be heard, that all children will be able to live life, and not just fly "away in a kiss". Thank you for awakening such thoughts and keeping awareness alive.- Marcia Schechinger, USA


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WILDERNESS

Powerful and moving... erudite- robyn selters

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ACTUALIS

Excellent. Enjoyed reading your poetry today Satish. Have a wonderful weekend filled with love and inspiration. Love,-Carol Brown


hauntingly beautiful, satich.. i'm so impressed! warnest,- nette onclaud

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SWEATING

an interesting read. A bit abstract, but interesting.- NightOwl

Are you subtley insinuating that Oceanus Procellarum and the Imbrium basin are elligible for food-stamps and Section 8 Lunar-Living facilities ?Personally i don't think the grasshoppers will go for it...The word is they are right-wing Conservatives...Thus, as both mom & pop Moon, you have an obligation to find work & support all planetary operations !..Frank James Ryan,Jr./FjR

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DIALOGUE ON NON-DEATH

a daunting cryptic image of death in a literal or symbolic way, satish! great metaphors! warmest,- nette onclaud

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ROCKS AND SKULLS

Satish upon reading your work the reader is transported to a time of terror and insanity. As I piece your works together bits of life, not life, open the doors of the reality of vaults that secured helpless people and I am ashamed that nothing could be done about it. "...I have still not come to terms with the neck high milkless gaze". Killings do not bring peace, how can leaders be so weak and fear what they do not know. Thank you for sharing your precious emotions, that one day peace will overthrow violence. Thank you.- Marcia Schechinger, USA


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Only metaphors

So far so much -

2. Let the tarp blow off; it does not matter as long as no one sees you naked.

4. Congratulations to your pet on being vaccinated for rabies !!

5. Of course, a child is afraid of strangers and cries. - Ravi Kalyani, Bengalooru

So we have to deconstruct the symbols! A beautiful poem subject to interpretations.- U K Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur

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