nicely penned poem.- hris G. Vaillancourt
Must admit after reading several times, i was not able to hit the bulls-eye of the poetic dart-board as to your poems specific storyline...However, kudo's on some clever employment of simile....Just an observation : It is aneu(y)sm, not aneurism....and icewater must be either hyphenated(ice-water) or written as 2 separate words (ice water)....-Frank James Ryan,Jr./FjR
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