FAIRY TALE

An interesting piece, and one that I am not sure I grasped the meaning of. Still and yet, it is a unique write. The comparisons were very interesting.-Glata

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IMMORTALITY

So true are these words, God be with you-Linda Winchell


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SUN’S INHERITANCE

A burn-out is all that can be expected in the end when"Militant Groups" that fall under the label, Fedayeen.....-Frank James Ryan,Jr./FjR


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Star struck

Yea, the blank pages of future should be filled. Perhaps the only hands capable of doing so is Goddess Saraswathi! Let noble thoughts come from every side and make the future bright.-U K Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur


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DENUDING

loved the visuals..GREAT!- Hribhu Dey

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CUDDLING

Honourable poet, I simply repeat here again the title of one of my poem..."Domination is your defeat". The truth should be granted with braveheart and who can't... real coward are they perhaps....yet the sun rises gently / on the window.- Pranab k chakraborty


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YES

Smile. ~ Are you the great shaper? Are you that big balloon in the sky?? The mighty great wolf of time??? Is that you, Satish???? Just curious????? ~ Smile * "Love,-John Rhinem

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DUMB RESOLVE

What a beautiful morning. The sun is finally shining, the birds are singing, and I am sharing my day with you reading your wonderful poetry. I hope you have a great weekend Satish. Love-Carol Brown

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DIFFERENT SHADES

Thank you for sharing your fabulous poetry today Satish. It was a very interesting piece to read. Love-Carol Brown

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THE FALL

I am spending my morning reading wonderful poetry and enjoying it so much. I am so impressed with the poems I have read so far this morning. I am happy yours was among them Satish. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors always. Love-Carol Brown

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WE WILL SCREAM TOGETHER

good poem gave it a 7, wanna cookie to feel better? I heard cookies can make one feel great..lots and lots of cookies-mourning mist

The last line, did you meant to say "against the onslaught of fingers"? In either case, this was a viciously powerful & awesome piece.-Drake Eszes

I am so pleased to have had the pleasure to read your wonderful poetry this afternoon Satish. Thank you for sharing it with us. Hoping you have a week filled with inspiration. Love-Carol Brown

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RAGING MOON

of course you are devoid of pain..it is due to selfishness...the clock did not turn back..I have a right to gloat at the freedom from those accounts that should never have done what they did to me to begin with,,,I deserve that freedom from that pain, you were not the one lynched, if I recall you kept cloaked in your hidden belief of christ to AVOID IT...thanks for your support at my healing that was owed to me for a long frigging time buddy, your rage is selfish- mourning mist

i was owed that..and God thinks so too buddy..so rage at yourself for your lack of love and selfishness at my release that God wanted from your poor choices in woman, and for your own partake..- mourning mist

It was a pleasure to read your poetry today Satish. Have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, and inspiration to continue your poetry. Love- Carol Brown

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ONE RUNAWAY RELIGION

What a beautiful morning I am enjoying reading poetry here at PoetrySoup. I am happy to see yours among those which I am able to read this morning Satish. May the sun shine down upon you and bring joy into your life today and always. Love,Carol Brown

* “Pentadactylous” * the five points of the pentgon * this is the image which enters my thoughts * as reflect upon this somber lit poem * spoken in profound distinctive hues * although much grimmer than i truly believe the truth shall one find to one day be * yet still the same tis but * “Exceptional Poetry In Motion” * hugs and kisses * kisses and hugs * -sarah seraphin

* Ps. * sorry for typo its supposed to be * “Pentagon” * as the five fingertips reaching from ones palms * -sarah seraphin

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UNENDING

Smile ~ "Sweeet Satish, 'Ow, But to Smile Into Your Eyes,' & Everything Is Going to Be Alright, If Only You Shall, 'Believe In Hope' &, Tis One of The Most Lovely In Tender Paintings of 'Your Beauties' Which My Heart Has Thus Beheld; 'Love, Always-  John Rhinem

I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Satish. May the sun shine down on you and bring great joy to your life now and always. Love- Carol Brown

You see, sometimes when one truly cares or, comes to truly care, their love sometimes for various reasons, takes upon many different looks and faces, sometimes ~ Life, existence; it isn't about what Was, its Always about what shall be-John Rhinem

I accidently subbed that in com so, I may as well continue on within its sincere and loving thoughts ~ "Beautiful Satish!!!":)- John Rhinem

Smile ~ As the mist gathers amid eyes of heartful Truth; when you know you care; when you know you love; when All you want for they, is eternal happiness, joy and love then, again, what was no longer exist for, it is the chain of sorrow which holds Hope within its bondage and, if one cannot learn to Love All of Creation then, fettered to rust this hope becomes and, "I Love 'You Satish, & All, Forever,'" John!:)-John Rhinem

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WRITING ITS DIKTAT

Life should not burn like coal,
but be a tree,
in praise of sky,
wind and earth.

All I can say, Satish, is that you summed up your pain
beautifully in these closing words- Gene Williamson

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WET LANDSCAPE

A saddened rain drop, the wet landscape cries..
the wounds of earth...very well written Satish- Mary Ann Biddinger

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BENEDICTION

"Lips sluicing the grief,
spill benediction!"- George MacLean Akurunwa

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SHADOWS ARE THINNING

Wonderful and compelling "Shadows are Thinning"..Satish- Mary Ann Biddinger

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A HANDFUL OF VICTORIES

Wonderful, Satish, the way you work with words. - Gene Williamson

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A HERMIT

crowd of centuries piling up on history is a great line. - Morgan Merriweather

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INTENSE POETRY

ntense Poetry
to understand..to listen to
the words of knowledge
wonderfully penned Satish- Mary Ann Biddinger

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LIFE’S TOAST

"The magnitude of tragedy overwhelms the path" such an emotional statement.- graham jones

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A TREE WAS TALKING

"mother earth don’t go to sleep." I love that line, though no form of punctuation will do your plea justice. Sounds like you are describing the world with all its wars and disputes. I wonder what would happen to mankind if the world could shake its body like a wet dog coming out of a river.

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SPLITTING

Namaste Satish! Very stark and interesting. I start burning in your arms is my favourite line. Yours. Mitch- mitch


Beautiful. Metaphors are unique. ...Very high/the fire, returns in my eyes./I start burning in your arms. ...beautiful indeed.- Pranab k chakraborty


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SECRET WAKE

A powerful satire that makes one think ...short yet very strong ...seeds wiped off is very deep indeed ...good one sir-Nikunj


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Chronicity

Even here, we are alone amidst the crowd. You said it. - U K Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur

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ABANDONED

A haunting picture you paint with fantastic energy here Satish. Taking the space of others calls for battle and "defining" moments.- Fay Slimm


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*PLASMA SCREEN

An amazing piece on this tragic event. First class poetry again from your remarkable pen my friend.- Fay Slimm


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LOOKING BACK

A haunting cluster of words Satish. The lines "they were building the dams to harvest the power from tears " speaks volumes of the horror.- DavidPaulley


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POETRY

Tell me that you once dated Lida Lovelace back in the 1970's, and perhaps i will afford more credence to your ongoing romance with the Moon!lol!And as far as the Queen Mother....she resembled a giant killer yellow-jacket bee at the Wedding in her parakeet yellow drape !!!- Frank James Ryan,Jr./FjR

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HUMAN LAB

Very inventive imagery used here. A good write.- Robert Haigh

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UNENDING

A very poetic piece. Nicely done.- Robert Haigh

Smile ~ As the mist gathers amid eyes of heartful Truth; when you know you care; when you know you love; when All you want for they, is eternal happiness, joy and love then, again, what was no longer exist for, it is the chain of sorrow which holds Hope within its bondage and, if one cannot learn to Love All of Creation then, fettered to rust this hope becomes and, "I Love 'You Satish, & All, Forever,'" - John Rhinem

I accidently subbed that in com so, I may as well continue on within its sincere and loving thoughts ~ "Beautiful Satish!!!":) ~- John Rhinem

You see, sometimes when one truly cares or, comes to truly care, their love sometimes for various reasons, takes upon many different looks and faces, sometimes ~ Life, existence; it isn't about what Was, its Always about what shall be ~- John Rhinem

I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Satish. May the sun shine down on you and bring great joy to your life now and always. Love- Carol Brown

Smile ~ "Sweeet Satish, 'Ow, But to Smile Into Your Eyes,' & Everything Is Going to Be Alright, If Only You Shall, 'Believe In Hope' &, Tis One of The Most Lovely In Tender Paintings of 'Your Beauties' Which My Heart Has Thus Beheld; 'Love, Always,'" John!:) ~- John Rhinem

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THE ECHO REACHES THE WHOLE SKY

Satish, .. congratulations on your wonderful feature of the week... I sure enjoyed... take care,.- ¥ Destroyer ¥ Poet

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Satish. Love- Carol Brown

Congratulations on your poem being featured this week,- Dr.Ram Mehta

Congrats Satish on your featured poem this week on P.S. ..a super one to share with us all luv..- Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S.

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THE ECHO REACHES THE WHOLE SKY

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Satish. Love- Carol Brown

Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, - Dr.Ram Mehta

Congrats Satish on your featured poem this week on P.S. ..a super one to share with us all luv..-Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S.

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OF PERSONAL GOD

Satish "...I pick up the seeds for the sake of eternity", again I am left speechless as I think of the Holocaust, the victims of war and believing there is a reason for such things. A devoted fan of your work, I am always surprised at the emotions you bring out with your visuals poem. Let the "seeds" of peace grow and flourish. Thank you Satish for sharing your talent and knowledge.-Marcia Schechinger, USA

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RAGING MOON

It was a pleasure to read your poetry today Satish. Have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, and inspiration to continue your poetry. Love- Carol Brown

i was owed that..and God thinks so too buddy..so rage at yourself for your lack of love and selfishness at my release that God wanted from your poor choices in woman, and for your own partake..- mourning mist

of course you are devoid of pain..it is due to selfishness...the clock did not turn back..I have a right to gloat at the freedom from those accounts that should never have done what they did to me to begin with,,,I deserve that freedom from that pain, you were not the one lynched, if I recall you kept cloaked in your hidden belief of christ to AVOID IT...thanks for your support at my healing that was owed to me for a long frigging time buddy, your rage is selfish- mourning mist

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THE ECHO REACHES THE WHOLE SKY

Congrats Satish on your featured poem this week on P.S. ..a super one to share with us all luv..- Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S.

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STAR STRUCK

Your imagery washes over each line to create wonder - the moon staring in sad eyes of fauna makes brilliant metaphor but my favourite must be - "brace your window and taste your memory" - - I intend to do that today and find a blank page to write on. Thank you.- Fay Slimm

Moon takes a bath inside a sleeping volcano?...God help our neigbor planet, if Mr. Volcano should be rustled from its moonshadow-cat-nap. Woooosh! What'ta KILLER toasted marshmellow this would be !-Frank James Ryan,Jr./FjR

Beautiful.........this is indeed a very fine peice of work- Mrigakshi


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One Runaway Religion

Sir,I am simply amazed at the sheer intensity of your poetry.Truly amazed!Regards.- Nabarun Dev, New Delhi/Assam

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EXCHANGE

I liked the poem. Wonderfully written. Fine poetics. I rate it 10.
Thanks for sharing.....
Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.- Mohd. Akmal Nazir


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A HERMIT

crowd of centuries piling up on history is a great line. - Morgan Merriweather

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INTENSE POETRY

Intense Poetry
to understand..to listen to
the words of knowledge
wonderfully penned Satish- Mary Ann Biddinger

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OF THE NEXT ZEN

worth a second read.- spysgrandson


Thought i might be afforded a Satish Haiku, on reading "ZEN" in your title...But that's alright...Buddha may be a tad rotund, aroundd about the abdominals(a mere six short of a 6-Pack)....but i heartell he enjoys a good Lunar experience, with or without an Antarctic sideshow....- Frank James Ryan,Jr./FjR


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JOTTINGS

Satish you are such a talent with words, they flow from your lips like wine, aged with wisdom and impeccable taste. You spin and twirl the mind to make one think and then end with a words so as to not preach, but rather guide the reader into examination of the world. Thank you Satish for your constant effort in fighting for peace and helping people not follow paths that might lead to a holocaust in the future world.- Marcia Schechinger, USA


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OF THE NEXT ZEN

Thought i might be afforded a Satish Haiku, on reading "ZEN" in your title...But that's alright...Buddha may be a tad rotund, aroundd about the abdominals(a mere six short of a 6-Pack)....but i heartell he enjoys a good Lunar experience, with or without an Antarctic sideshow....- Frank James Ryan,Jr./FjR


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Underscoring

Dear Poet, I like your poem's structure, And its lovely infrastructure, The truth is said, To give food to head. Thanks. - mvvenkataraman, Chennai

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NOMENCLATURE

Your imagery here stirs the senses dear friend and is second to none. Thank you again for your contributions of poetic excellence to this site.- Fay Slimm


It reminds me of Perseus and Andromeda story!- T A Ramesh


Fantastic spirit to get the call from Aphrodite. At least poet is yet so terbulant, whole imagery fights alone to exist or not to exist... spirit of freedom enroars throughout the canvas. Thank you for sharing.- Pranab k chakraborty


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