Your imagery washes over each line to create wonder - the moon staring in sad eyes of fauna makes brilliant metaphor but my favourite must be - "brace your window and taste your memory" - - I intend to do that today and find a blank page to write on. Thank you.- Fay Slimm
Moon takes a bath inside a sleeping volcano?...God help our neigbor planet, if Mr. Volcano should be rustled from its moonshadow-cat-nap. Woooosh! What'ta KILLER toasted marshmellow this would be !-Frank James Ryan,Jr./FjR
Beautiful.........this is indeed a very fine peice of work- Mrigakshi
http://www.poetfreak.com/
Moon takes a bath inside a sleeping volcano?...God help our neigbor planet, if Mr. Volcano should be rustled from its moonshadow-cat-nap. Woooosh! What'ta KILLER toasted marshmellow this would be !-Frank James Ryan,Jr./FjR
Beautiful.........this is indeed a very fine peice of work- Mrigakshi
http://www.poetfreak.com/
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