So true, rebuttal will not convey the truth, the reality... love that stanza before the last (4th stanza) sounds like you were at a funeral listening to music and arms unwrapped depict you're not dead, so "arms around the portrait of life" means you're alive. Last stanza is a little mysterious to me? Hmm, if he is a priest why does he deny the god? this is a wild guess on last stanza, could it be that the priest has swollen knuckles from practicing gliding sport, so he is not really interested in god but more on doing his sport? in other words the priest's heart is not really in his job, just a pretender, therefore the words "who denies the god" You sure make me think... I appreciate reading your work...thanks and blessings!- LightH2O
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