I wanted to invite the death discreetly
while praising the life and listening to birds
without dropping the history
from my crooked fingers.
Between yourself and myself
a sea was surreptitiously raging.
The waves were dividing the shores.
The two best stanzas I have ever come across...
Loved them.
Felt the inner sorrows of some separation...
Deeply touchy and nice work Sir.
Many thanks for the poem. It deserves 10.-Subhas Chandra Chakra
while praising the life and listening to birds
without dropping the history
from my crooked fingers.
Between yourself and myself
a sea was surreptitiously raging.
The waves were dividing the shores.
The two best stanzas I have ever come across...
Loved them.
Felt the inner sorrows of some separation...
Deeply touchy and nice work Sir.
Many thanks for the poem. It deserves 10.-Subhas Chandra Chakra
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